JJ, you have less than 8 hrs to get links...
John J
Jefferson
JJ, you have less than 8 hrs to get links...
oh shit, good looks i forgot.
ill get on that.
UPPIN.
D Block: Humble But Hungry by Large Amount
Jack Riches ft. John Stock & P. Body - No Talkin'
track #11
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jefferson
yo, the only thing we got in common is the letter in our 1st initial..true
bitch throw your punches ill shoot off hellfire missles at you
too much filler, missing a punch
with those missles flyin' at you, youll be sayin "houston, we have a problem"
hide and seek, youll end up lookin like osama bin laden
didnt really like this
this faggot acts like a total flamer so he is definately gay,
his ex hit me up at burger king and told me to have it your way
played concept
she told me john j wouldnt screw her when he got morning wood
me and her screwed and popped some campbells soup got her sayin mmm mmm good
ew, weak
social class? this shit is most definately a second class citizen
john j is hilary and walked in on monica lewinski ridin my bill clinton
not a punch
civil unions, this whack ass is applying for a gay marriage liscence
clearly, we can see john j is sunshine from remember the titans
lol funny closer
john j
punches smell like shit, knuckles must be armed with maneur,
you aint ever been sparkin a reuga, location on the streets? u belong in the sewers
funny opener
throw a nade at ya fav donation group and bomb ya hopes..HAHA
cuz the scariest flow involvin u was when the dukes condom broke
ok
lets get this straight. im fucked up enough to slice necks while the kid stays
and have the fag hog tied in rainbow colours since he like like mixtapes
nahh
holdin grudges cuz ya wife on her knees suckin siemen out ma cock
but when i land on the strip his hands waivin, without bein on the clock
ehh kinda weak
u got a kid whos growin nd shit? there aint nowhere left to run mate
or hold both you over a cliff and decide jeff or sons fate
funny flip, but not a real punch
overall
pretty weak battle in my opinion. jefferson had some weak concepts all throughout his verse and john j didnt really connect with some key punches. keep writing and elevate!
vote- john j
D Block: Humble But Hungry by Large Amount
Jack Riches ft. John Stock & P. Body - No Talkin'
track #11
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yo, the only thing we got in common is the letter in our 1st initial..true
bitch throw your punches ill shoot off hellfire missles at you
weak, no punch here
with those missles flyin' at you, youll be sayin "houston, we have a problem"
hide and seek, youll end up lookin like osama bin laden
wording is poor, punch is lacking too
this faggot acts like a total flamer so he is definately gay,
his ex hit me up at burger king and told me to have it your way
lol.. good to see your attempting punches.. keep at it
she told me john j wouldnt screw her when he got morning wood
me and her screwed and popped some campbells soup got her sayin mmm mmm good
what..... no
social class? this shit is most definately a second class citizen
john j is hilary and walked in on monica lewinski ridin my bill clinton
lol no
civil unions, this whack ass is applying for a gay marriage liscence
clearly, we can see john j is sunshine from remember the titans
irrelevant..
whoa.
punches smell like shit, knuckles must be armed with maneur,
you aint ever been sparkin a reuga, location on the streets? u belong in the sewers
lackin punch, cool flow
throw a nade at ya fav donation group and bomb ya hopes..HAHA
cuz the scariest flow involvin u was when the dukes condom broke
ehh, decent attempt.. need to work on the wording
lets get this straight. im fucked up enough to slice necks while the kid stays
and have the fag hog tied in rainbow colours since he like like mixtapes
not feeling it at all tbh
holdin grudges cuz ya wife on her knees suckin siemen out ma cock
but when i land on the strip his hands waivin, without bein on the clock
the build up didn't lead onto the punch very well, try make that happen
u got a kid whos growin nd shit? there aint nowhere left to run mate
or hold both you over a cliff and decide jeff or sons fate
wording is off
Jonh J actually attempted punches where as jeff just made a bunch of statements and had a few really weird lines tbh lol... John work on your wording, and punchline set ups.. you had a few near misses.. so you'll get the hang of it soon enough.
V-John J
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uh.. as much as i hate to say it. i think John got this one, his punches were just more developed and Jeff, you just have to learn how to use metaphores and wordplay regularly, thats all.
v/John...fuckin fag.
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