Gabriel570 1-3 Vs. Miracle 1-3 -Vote-

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 11

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be Dqued
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
Must Leave 4 links to the battles you voted on in this thread somewhere. I'm not going to search for your votes. Failing to vote will result in -2 votes for every missing link.

[Gabriel570]

check

[miracle]

yeah

[Gabriel570]

I could predict what ur thoughts portray from a block away so fuck what yu gotta say
Your originality is like the man in ur TNT sig cuz It always seems to walk away
U rep TNT buh none of Ur bars have the dynamite to blow my mind
My c4 flow will tear his flesh like a rugged shoe cuz they'll be no soul inside
I read "portrait of self" n "own reflection" n yu must stare at the mirror a lot
When i read ur drop i jus shook my head like the anxiety that appears in ur thought
Ur born into combat? But in the tag tourney U proved that u can't rap
Plus Ur in a war with writer's block n its never gonna give yu ur pen back
In ur battle wit philly yu got smoked by his rap which proves ur rhymes have flaws
Cuz this pussy got torn up to shreds like gettin finger banged wit a lion's claw

[miracle]

i changed my sig n seen ur first bar was about it. so ill post it here

http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o.../miracleee.jpg

ill mostlikey post tonight

[miracle]

dude get loss....cuz people think ur lame n will never be a boss
they say there '2 board, to hang with you' like neighbors at jesus's cross
chop ur body up..peices everywhere...ill split ya dome quick
n leave your heart in another place like being homesick
he aint defeating me..his rhymes come off gayer
so like trying to find your favorite bible quotes
......................................ill leave u searching for a prayer
i keyed this verse in seconds n i will murk this hoe still
leave him screaming for deer life
......................faster then animalism sad over road kill
anything u drop will fall flat..theres no1 here this dude smash
ill win n battle someone else....tim's gonna set u up for a boot match

sorry written quick

[Bongkers]

I could predict what ur thoughts portray from a block away so fuck what yu gotta say
Your originality is like the man in ur TNT sig cuz It always seems to walk away
how does originality walk away.. could have used something else, not a great operner
U rep TNT buh none of Ur bars have the dynamite to blow my mind
My c4 flow will tear his flesh like a rugged shoe cuz they'll be no soul inside
played
I read "portrait of self" n "own reflection" n yu must stare at the mirror a lot
When i read ur drop i jus shook my head like the anxiety that appears in ur thought
ok this was pretty good..
Ur born into combat? But in the tag tourney U proved that u can't rap
Plus Ur in a war with writer's block n its never gonna give yu ur pen back
ehh OK
In ur battle wit philly yu got smoked by his rap which proves ur rhymes have flaws
Cuz this pussy got torn up to shreds like gettin finger banged wit a lion's claw
lol... not great

vs.

dude get loss....cuz people think ur lame n will never be a boss
they say there '2 board, to hang with you' like neighbors at jesus's cross
hahaha, dope concept never heard it before.
chop ur body up..peices everywhere...ill split ya dome quick
n leave your heart in another place like being homesick
nice
he aint defeating me..his rhymes come off gayer
so like trying to find your favorite bible quotes
......................................ill leave u searching for a prayer
na this is weak
i keyed this verse in seconds n i will murk this hoe still
leave him screaming for deer life
......................faster then animalism sad over road kill
ehh wording sucks, cool idea tho
anything u drop will fall flat..theres no1 here this dude smash
ill win n battle someone else....tim's gonna set u up for a boot match
haha true that


v- miricle wasnt feeling gabriels verse at all really.

[Raydeoh]

I could predict what ur thoughts portray from a block away so fuck what yu gotta say
Your originality is like the man in ur TNT sig cuz It always seems to walk away
...I guess
U rep TNT buh none of Ur bars have the dynamite to blow my mind
My c4 flow will tear his flesh like a rugged shoe cuz they'll be no soul inside
No
I read "portrait of self" n "own reflection" n yu must stare at the mirror a lot
When i read ur drop i jus shook my head like the anxiety that appears in ur thought
Ok I guess
Ur born into combat? But in the tag tourney U proved that u can't rap
Plus Ur in a war with writer's block n its never gonna give yu ur pen back
Decent
In ur battle wit philly yu got smoked by his rap which proves ur rhymes have flaws
Cuz this pussy got torn up to shreds like gettin finger banged wit a lion's claw
No

vs

dude get loss....cuz people think ur lame n will never be a boss
they say there '2 board, to hang with you' like neighbors at jesus's cross
Ok
chop ur body up..peices everywhere...ill split ya dome quick
n leave your heart in another place like being homesick
Like this.. nice direct hit
he aint defeating me..his rhymes come off gayer
so like trying to find your favorite bible quotes
......................................ill leave u searching for a prayer
Nah
i keyed this verse in seconds n i will murk this hoe still
leave him screaming for deer life
......................faster then animalism sad over road kill
Ok I guess
anything u drop will fall flat..theres no1 here this dude smash
ill win n battle someone else....tim's gonna set u up for a boot match
Ok I guess


Gabe came with nothing.. miracle came with a little something

Vote: miracle

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

gabe u seem like u could be really dope man u should take more tiem on ur verses , but gabe had pen back and the opener, miracle had jesus cross n the home sick was ok, yall need to work on ur wording n ur concepts man espu miracle but i give miracle the W


v/mircle

[The Archetype]

I could predict what ur thoughts portray from a block away so fuck what yu gotta say
Your originality is like the man in ur TNT sig cuz It always seems to walk away
U rep TNT buh none of Ur bars have the dynamite to blow my mind
My c4 flow will tear his flesh like a rugged shoe cuz they'll be no soul inside
I read "portrait of self" n "own reflection" n yu must stare at the mirror a lot
When i read ur drop i jus shook my head like the anxiety that appears in ur thought
Ur born into combat? But in the tag tourney U proved that u can't rap
Plus Ur in a war with writer's block n its never gonna give yu ur pen back
In ur battle wit philly yu got smoked by his rap which proves ur rhymes have flaws
Cuz this pussy got torn up to shreds like gettin finger banged wit a lion's claw

long story short, your verse has potential... your have good ideas, but you need to work on refining them... making the wording help how effective your punches are...

vs

dude get loss....cuz people think ur lame n will never be a boss
they say there '2 board, to hang with you' like neighbors at jesus's cross
ok...
chop ur body up..peices everywhere...ill split ya dome quick
n leave your heart in another place like being homesick
ok...
he aint defeating me..his rhymes come off gayer
so like trying to find your favorite bible quotes
......................................ill leave u searching for a prayer
you don't need all those dots... weak punch though...
i keyed this verse in seconds n i will murk this hoe still
leave him screaming for deer life
......................faster then animalism sad over road kill
nah...
anything u drop will fall flat..theres no1 here this dude smash
ill win n battle someone else....tim's gonna set u up for a boot match
eh...

vote Miracle...

[Token]

nothing

vs.



i keyed this verse in seconds n i will murk this hoe still
leave him screaming for deer life
......................faster then animalism sad over road kill

weak battle... but first drop was pretty bad. sorry man, no hate. keep elevating.

vote: miracle

[SmokaJoka]

nothing

vs.


anything u drop will fall flat..theres no1 here this dude smash
ill win n battle someone else....tim's gonna set u up for a boot match



nothing was really direct in this match except the last line in Miracle verse....Gab has alot of the right ideas but just isn't using them properly...and tbh some of them are just old concepts to me...both of you work on your shitty spelling though because it's mad annoying to me at least to read some unintelligent shit


Vote - Miracle