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    A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1 -Vote-

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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1

    More then your knuckles will be cracked.

    Second person match the first.
    For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
    Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label

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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1

    Originally posted by: .deadproof.
    Re: LLL Chat Week 9
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    Quote:
    Originally Posted by A.T.
    Wait a minute....

    When did I give you advice on wording?

    I just looked at my vote, and the only thing I said about your verse was to avoid nameflips on vets. They are probably played. Secondly, I didn't give you any advice about wording. Lol.
    So why are you being a bitch? Cause now I dunno WTF you are talking about.
    You said probably flipped which means you have no idea if they are or are not. Which also shows that you based your decision on the fact that something could be played without having any idea if it is. Thats called guess voting which is just as bad as follow voting but as I told you I do not care about that or who you voted for I simply said for you not to say my wording is bad when your wording needs alot of work. That has been my entire complaint with you. Not who you voted for NOT how you broke anything down but the simple fact you say wording is good or not when you obviously need wording help.
    Originally posted by: .deadproof.
    Re: LLL Chat Week 9
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    I would really like to battle Chrit or Wanderer please
    Originally posted by: Arch
    Re: LLL Chat Week 9
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    Originally Posted by .deadproof.
    I would really like to battle Chrit or Wanderer please.
    you have AT next week don't you?
    Originally posted by: .deadproof.
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    I would rather battle one of them two. If not I understand just making a request.
    Originally posted by: Timiona
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    So you don't want at?
    figured I'd drop early and give you the full week to write...

    I'm on the top, no way you can tip me, running strides cause you wont trip me,
    You droppin shows you're a man of your word-ing... and character's just as iffy,
    Your bullshit, were sick of it, but you stick to your guns through the thick of it,
    So, when cats screamin for deadproof... they're demading the death certificate,
    Countlss cats called you wack, but just relax kid, this shit is just for fun,
    You'd go against any advice I give you, so... DONT shoot yourself in the head with a gun...
    Bitched in all 3 of your pm's, then try to back out of a battle, almost as recent,
    Called me out in FL, cause only those votes could make your wording look decent,
    I'll put the spot light on your sins, and dude could only drop average on a whim,
    I'm coming armed with so many personal punches, you'd think I was battling him...
    All your punches are senseless, dudes got the style of a revisionist,
    So while deadproof tries to dis-bar my verse... all the voters are dissing his,
    Your def. unique, but don't flatter yourself, theres no way your the best dude,
    Cause they aint break the mold when they made you... just trashed the test tube,
    ROFL, your nameflip on hens was played and it wasn't flipped well, listen up kid,
    Played is played, I know cause I used the same concept in my guanlet verse against him.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...984/index.html

    no need going all in on you, I told you it was played... smfh

    Don't bother posting...
    Last edited by A.T.; April 28th, 2011 at 12:34 AM
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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1

    something keyed for ya



    you wont ever touch this belt, you''ve dropped nothin well
    I mean youre only known in f.l a.t., since thats wher all your punches fell
    you'll never adapt ta beef, someone get his ass ta leave
    cuz tim dropped you so fast last round, i thought u was tha magazine
    you try n mimick the worst names, n thats absurd mate
    the only way you'll ever be born bitch, is if we reinacted ur birth date
    i guarantee u wont last wit me, ive smashed plenty
    the way im handing a.t.l.'s, youd think i was giving away keys to that city
    ur not a g kid, and i was jus jokin bout the fiend shit
    cuz we only think ur a text addict, since we want u to disappear like he did
    im climbin ranks n getting clout, your lame n ur a clown
    you couldnt stop dead rising, if you smashed every game in your house
    your not a veteran dunn, but you shouldnt sweat it son
    it dont matter who you b.a.t., since everybody wants to go upside ur head with one
    n smoka brought me back into this bitch, but i didnt wanna do this kid
    cuz as soon as he saw god was dead, he prayed there wasnt a ressurection like judas did
    For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
    Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label

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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1 -Vote-

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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1 -Vote-

    I'm on the top, no way you can tip me, running strides cause you wont trip me,
    You droppin shows you're a man of your word-ing... and character's just as iffy,
    ehh
    Your bullshit, were sick of it, but you stick to your guns through the thick of it,
    So, when cats screamin for deadproof... they're demading the death certificate,
    lol
    Countlss cats called you wack, but just relax kid, this shit is just for fun,
    You'd go against any advice I give you, so... DONT shoot yourself in the head with a gun...
    funny but eh
    Bitched in all 3 of your pm's, then try to back out of a battle, almost as recent,
    Called me out in FL, cause only those votes could make your wording look decent,
    eh
    I'll put the spot light on your sins, and dude could only drop average on a whim,
    I'm coming armed with so many personal punches, you'd think I was battling him...
    to many personal punches i've seen
    All your punches are senseless, dudes got the style of a revisionist,
    So while deadproof tries to dis-bar my verse... all the voters are dissing his,
    again, eh
    Your def. unique, but don't flatter yourself, theres no way your the best dude,
    Cause they aint break the mold when they made you... just trashed the test tube,
    lol, here we go
    ROFL, your nameflip on hens was played and it wasn't flipped well, listen up kid,
    Played is played, I know cause I used the same concept in my guanlet verse against
    eh


    vs


    you wont ever touch this belt, you''ve dropped nothin well
    I mean youre only known in f.l a.t., since thats wher all your punches fell
    iight
    you'll never adapt ta beef, someone get his ass ta leave
    cuz tim dropped you so fast last round, i thought u was tha magazine
    eh
    you try n mimick the worst names, n thats absurd mate
    the only way you'll ever be born bitch, is if we reinacted ur birth date
    lol
    i guarantee u wont last wit me, ive smashed plenty
    the way im handing a.t.l.'s, youd think i was giving away keys to that city
    nvr seen b4, sounds played but I nvr saaw so yea
    ur not a g kid, and i was jus jokin bout the fiend shit
    cuz we only think ur a text addict, since we want u to disappear like he did
    eh
    im climbin ranks n getting clout, your lame n ur a clown
    you couldnt stop dead rising, if you smashed every game in your house
    iight/meh
    your not a veteran dunn, but you shouldnt sweat it son
    it dont matter who you b.a.t., since everybody wants to go upside ur head with one
    one letter flip was enuff
    n smoka brought me back into this bitch, but i didnt wanna do this kid
    cuz as soon as he saw god was dead, he prayed there wasnt a ressurection like judas did
    eh


    v/deadproof... verse just read better for me.. nvr read anything from either, so this was a first taste of both ur wordings

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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1 -Vote-

    I'm on the top, no way you can tip me, running strides cause you wont trip me,
    You droppin shows you're a man of your word-ing... and character's just as iffy,
    Ok I guess
    Your bullshit, were sick of it, but you stick to your guns through the thick of it,
    So, when cats screamin for deadproof... they're demading the death certificate,
    Nice
    Countlss cats called you wack, but just relax kid, this shit is just for fun,
    You'd go against any advice I give you, so... DONT shoot yourself in the head with a gun...
    Ok I guess
    Bitched in all 3 of your pm's, then try to back out of a battle, almost as recent,
    Called me out in FL, cause only those votes could make your wording look decent,
    Decent
    I'll put the spot light on your sins, and dude could only drop average on a whim,
    I'm coming armed with so many personal punches, you'd think I was battling him...
    Ok I guess.. kinda dulls the effect being as tho I used a personal punch this week
    All your punches are senseless, dudes got the style of a revisionist,
    So while deadproof tries to dis-bar my verse... all the voters are dissing his,
    Ok I guess
    Your def. unique, but don't flatter yourself, theres no way your the best dude,
    Cause they aint break the mold when they made you... just trashed the test tube,
    Lol
    ROFL, your nameflip on hens was played and it wasn't flipped well, listen up kid,
    Played is played, I know cause I used the same concept in my guanlet verse against him.
    Nah

    vs

    you wont ever touch this belt, you''ve dropped nothin well
    I mean youre only known in f.l a.t., since thats wher all your punches fell
    Ok
    you'll never adapt ta beef, someone get his ass ta leave
    cuz tim dropped you so fast last round, i thought u was tha magazine
    Decent
    you try n mimick the worst names, n thats absurd mate
    the only way you'll ever be born bitch, is if we reinacted ur birth date
    Lol.. liked this
    i guarantee u wont last wit me, ive smashed plenty
    the way im handing a.t.l.'s, youd think i was giving away keys to that city
    Ok I guess
    ur not a g kid, and i was jus jokin bout the fiend shit
    cuz we only think ur a text addict, since we want u to disappear like he did
    Ok
    im climbin ranks n getting clout, your lame n ur a clown
    you couldnt stop dead rising, if you smashed every game in your house
    Ok I guess
    your not a veteran dunn, but you shouldnt sweat it son
    it dont matter who you b.a.t., since everybody wants to go upside ur head with one
    Ok
    n smoka brought me back into this bitch, but i didnt wanna do this kid
    cuz as soon as he saw god was dead, he prayed there wasnt a ressurection like judas did
    Decent


    Decent battle.. I think deadproof JUST edged it.. bit more consistency

    Vote: deadproof

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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1 -Vote-

    Your bullshit, were sick of it, but you stick to your guns through the thick of it,
    So, when cats screamin for deadproof... they're demading the death certificate,
    Your def. unique, but don't flatter yourself, theres no way your the best dude,
    Cause they aint break the mold when they made you... just trashed the test tube,

    vs

    you wont ever touch this belt, you''ve dropped nothin well
    I mean youre only known in f.l a.t., since thats wher all your punches fell
    you try n mimick the worst names, n thats absurd mate
    the only way you'll ever be born bitch, is if we reinacted ur birth date

    even on quotables, but the bars i didn't quote from dead were better than AT's...

    vote Dead

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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1 -Vote-

    I'm on the top, no way you can tip me, running strides cause you wont trip me,
    You droppin shows you're a man of your word-ing... and character's just as iffy,
    decent
    bullshit, were sick of it, but you stick to your guns through the thick of it,
    So, when cats screamin for deadproof... they're demading the death certificate,
    lol, dope
    Bitched in all 3 of your pm's, then try to back out of a battle, almost as recent,
    Called me out in FL, cause only those votes could make your wording look decent,
    lol, okay
    I'll put the spot light on your sins, and dude could only drop average on a whim,
    I'm coming armed with so many personal punches, you'd think I was battling him...
    decent flip

    vs.

    you wont ever touch this belt, you''ve dropped nothin well
    I mean youre only known in f.l a.t., since thats wher all your punches fell
    ha, dope opener
    you'll never adapt ta beef, someone get his ass ta leave
    cuz tim dropped you so fast last round, i thought u was tha magazine
    lol, cool
    i guarantee u wont last wit me, ive smashed plenty
    the way im handing a.t.l.'s, youd think i was giving away keys to that city
    ok
    im climbin ranks n getting clout, your lame n ur a clown
    you couldnt stop dead rising, if you smashed every game in your house
    cool
    your not a veteran dunn, but you shouldnt sweat it son
    it dont matter who you b.a.t., since everybody wants to go upside ur head with one
    I know ur losing a lotta name flips, but this was still cool to me

    Overall: good read, reading AT's verse I thought he had it but looks like dead had something to prove & succeeded. nice showing. dp was more consistent and had more quoteables.

    Vote: Deadproof.

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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1 -Vote-

    Your bullshit, were sick of it, but you stick to your guns through the thick of it,
    So, when cats screamin for deadproof... they're demading the death certificate,
    Your def. unique, but don't flatter yourself, theres no way your the best dude,
    Cause they aint break the mold when they made you... just trashed the test tube,
    ROFL, your nameflip on hens was played and it wasn't flipped well, listen up kid,
    Played is played, I know cause I used the same concept in my guanlet verse against him.

    vs

    you wont ever touch this belt, you''ve dropped nothin well
    I mean youre only known in f.l a.t., since thats wher all your punches fell
    you'll never adapt ta beef, someone get his ass ta leave
    cuz tim dropped you so fast last round, i thought u was tha magazine



    this was actually pretty close.. I only quoted the punches that had to the most impact to me.. but both were pretty consistent.. I got A.T just edging it out.. decent read though, emjoyed this battle. Both of you are good for the league

    v/ A.T

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    Re: A.T 4-3 Vs. .deadproof. 0-1 -Vote-

    Your bullshit, were sick of it, but you stick to your guns through the thick of it,
    So, when cats screamin for deadproof... they're demading the death certificate,
    Your def. unique, but don't flatter yourself, theres no way your the best dude,
    Cause they aint break the mold when they made you... just trashed the test tube,

    vs.

    you wont ever touch this belt, you''ve dropped nothin well
    I mean youre only known in f.l a.t., since thats wher all your punches fell
    you'll never adapt ta beef, someone get his ass ta leave
    cuz tim dropped you so fast last round, i thought u was tha magazine
    you try n mimick the worst names, n thats absurd mate
    the only way you'll ever be born bitch, is if we reinacted ur birth date

    Pretty close in quotable bars here, I think the difference for me is, aside from the fact that deadproof had more quotables, his were also much better with the wording. The way that AT has his set-ups...the bars read too long and I wasn't feeling that too much, just seems a little too detailed or wordy or something, I can't explain it correctly, my fault, you feel me though I'm sure. Overall, this was a good one, but in the end, more quotes and more consistent, I give it to Dead.

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