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    Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2 -Vote-

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2

    check
    Shunned since '01....

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2

    ur KAHNCEPZ are awful, its only right i preach 2 u these very words,
    "may the force be with you"... then noticed it accompanies ur wordplay in every verse
    you bringin madddd filler too, killer crews all laugh at and body this hoe,
    his goals to reach the next level.. id bet the house he only does on super mario bros!
    your a homo n i know that, this dicklover is so wack,
    ur sig says u been shunned since '01... but u been a Faggot since way before that!
    noone likes you bro, that wack shit u drop proves im far above
    so stack up on bob marley music, its the only time youll catch anyone showin 1-Love
    biting faggot, go deep in the archives, and still cant bare mines,
    & looking by the way you Actioned.... its clear to see he SHARES lines..
    Last edited by Aeral; April 27th, 2011 at 05:51 AM

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2

    set to go off, I'm the catalyst to leave you broken,
    aer lines be blowin up, because I just set off the implosion.
    I'm superior, it's fact, see how quickly aeral folds,
    the bitch aint on my wavelengths, he's on the 64 doin barrel rolls.
    discovered your notorious for bein a faggot, it aint no mystery,
    he's gettin dome from trannies in manhattan, like he's mister cee.
    your not risin up the charts, your rhymes wreak of despair,
    kevin bacon must be teachin b-ball in africa, if The Aer Up There.
    left ya roasted, it's comedy central thinkin you'll make a strong show,
    but if I wanted to see a dead person make me laugh, I'd watch greg giraldo.
    Shunned since '01....

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2 -Vote-

    ur KAHNCEPZ are awful, its only right i preach 2 u these very words,
    "may the force be with you"... then noticed it accompanies ur wordplay in every verse
    lol... force be with you punches are played to death, but I like this flip
    you bringin madddd filler too, killer crews all laugh at and body this hoe,
    his goals to reach the next level.. id bet the house he only does on super mario bros!
    decent
    your a homo n i know that, this dicklover is so wack,
    ur sig says u been shunned since '01... but u been a Faggot since way before that!
    lmao... good
    noone likes you bro, that wack shit u drop proves im far above
    so stack up on bob marley music, its the only time youll catch anyone showin 1-Love
    good
    biting faggot, go deep in the archives, and still cant bare mines,
    & looking by the way you Actioned.... its clear to see he SHARES lines..
    I'm assuming he has flipped someone elses concepts? good nameplay though, ok hit

    vs.

    set to go off, I'm the catalyst to leave you broken,
    aer lines be blowin up, because I just set off the implosion.
    aer/air lines are played now, not really feeling this flip tbh
    I'm superior, it's fact, see how quickly aeral folds,
    the bitch aint on my wavelengths, he's on the 64 doin barrel rolls.
    ok... I gotcha
    discovered your notorious for bein a faggot, it aint no mystery,
    he's gettin dome from trannies in manhattan, like he's mister cee.
    decent...
    your not risin up the charts, your rhymes wreak of despair,
    kevin bacon must be teachin b-ball in africa, if The Aer Up There.
    ok, could have hit harder with a little rewording
    left ya roasted, it's comedy central thinkin you'll make a strong show,
    but if I wanted to see a dead person make me laugh, I'd watch greg giraldo.
    eh, on the closer

    I gotta vote Aeral for overall a better verse. Shunned had some good concepts,
    but for some reason they didn't hit to their full potential.

    vote- Aer
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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2 -Vote-

    ur KAHNCEPZ are awful, its only right i preach 2 u these very words,
    "may the force be with you"... then noticed it accompanies ur wordplay in every verse
    Decent
    you bringin madddd filler too, killer crews all laugh at and body this hoe,
    his goals to reach the next level.. id bet the house he only does on super mario bros!
    Nah
    your a homo n i know that, this dicklover is so wack,
    ur sig says u been shunned since '01... but u been a Faggot since way before that!
    Lol.. this made me laugh a bit
    noone likes you bro, that wack shit u drop proves im far above
    so stack up on bob marley music, its the only time youll catch anyone showin 1-Love
    Not feelin'
    biting faggot, go deep in the archives, and still cant bare mines,
    & looking by the way you Actioned.... its clear to see he SHARES lines..
    Ok I guess

    vs

    set to go off, I'm the catalyst to leave you broken,
    aer lines be blowin up, because I just set off the implosion.
    Ok I guess
    I'm superior, it's fact, see how quickly aeral folds,
    the bitch aint on my wavelengths, he's on the 64 doin barrel rolls.
    Decent enough
    discovered your notorious for bein a faggot, it aint no mystery,
    he's gettin dome from trannies in manhattan, like he's mister cee.
    Naw
    your not risin up the charts, your rhymes wreak of despair,
    kevin bacon must be teachin b-ball in africa, if The Aer Up There.
    Poorly executed.. ok concept
    left ya roasted, it's comedy central thinkin you'll make a strong show,
    but if I wanted to see a dead person make me laugh, I'd watch greg giraldo.
    Ok I guess


    Aer was hit & miss.. while Shunned was mostly miss

    Vote: Aeral

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2 -Vote-

    ur KAHNCEPZ are awful, its only right i preach 2 u these very words,
    "may the force be with you"... then noticed it accompanies ur wordplay in every verse
    iight
    you bringin madddd filler too, killer crews all laugh at and body this hoe,
    his goals to reach the next level.. id bet the house he only does on super mario bros!
    nah
    your a homo n i know that, this dicklover is so wack,
    ur sig says u been shunned since '01... but u been a Faggot since way before that!
    aha
    noone likes you bro, that wack shit u drop proves im far above
    so stack up on bob marley music, its the only time youll catch anyone showin 1-Love
    meh, i get it tho
    biting faggot, go deep in the archives, and still cant bare mines,
    & looking by the way you Actioned.... its clear to see he SHARES lines..
    iight

    vs

    set to go off, I'm the catalyst to leave you broken,
    aer lines be blowin up, because I just set off the implosion.
    played, meh flip
    I'm superior, it's fact, see how quickly aeral folds,
    the bitch aint on my wavelengths, he's on the 64 doin barrel rolls.
    lol, but meh
    discovered your notorious for bein a faggot, it aint no mystery,
    he's gettin dome from trannies in manhattan, like he's mister cee.
    nah
    your not risin up the charts, your rhymes wreak of despair,
    kevin bacon must be teachin b-ball in africa, if The Aer Up There.
    i get it, better wording and put together
    left ya roasted, it's comedy central thinkin you'll make a strong show,
    but if I wanted to see a dead person make me laugh, I'd watch greg giraldo.
    meh

    Vote: Aeral

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2 -Vote-

    ur KAHNCEPZ are awful, its only right i preach 2 u these very words,
    "may the force be with you"... then noticed it accompanies ur wordplay in every verse
    lol nice
    you bringin madddd filler too, killer crews all laugh at and body this hoe,
    his goals to reach the next level.. id bet the house he only does on super mario bros!
    wording was poor... kinda simple punch too
    your a homo n i know that, this dicklover is so wack,
    ur sig says u been shunned since '01... but u been a Faggot since way before that!
    lol decent
    noone likes you bro, that wack shit u drop proves im far above
    so stack up on bob marley music, its the only time youll catch anyone showin 1-Love
    nice-ish
    biting faggot, go deep in the archives, and still cant bare mines,
    & looking by the way you Actioned.... its clear to see he SHARES lines..
    decent

    vs

    set to go off, I'm the catalyst to leave you broken,
    aer lines be blowin up, because I just set off the implosion.
    gettin sick of air lines, average flip too
    I'm superior, it's fact, see how quickly aeral folds,
    the bitch aint on my wavelengths, he's on the 64 doin barrel rolls.
    decent
    discovered your notorious for bein a faggot, it aint no mystery,
    he's gettin dome from trannies in manhattan, like he's mister cee.
    lol.. not enough to it bro
    your not risin up the charts, your rhymes wreak of despair,
    kevin bacon must be teachin b-ball in africa, if The Aer Up There.
    wording was terrible, concept wasn't bad though
    left ya roasted, it's comedy central thinkin you'll make a strong show,
    but if I wanted to see a dead person make me laugh, I'd watch greg giraldo.
    pretty average closer


    V- Aer, better verse overall....

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2 -Vote-

    your a homo n i know that, this dicklover is so wack,
    ur sig says u been shunned since '01... but u been a Faggot since way before that!
    noone likes you bro, that wack shit u drop proves im far above
    so stack up on bob marley music, its the only time youll catch anyone showin 1-Love

    vs

    nothing really...

    shunned's wording was horrid

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2 -Vote-

    ur KAHNCEPZ are awful, its only right i preach 2 u these very words,
    "may the force be with you"... then noticed it accompanies ur wordplay in every verse

    vs.

    nothing




    I kinda dug the barrel roll line but you coulda done alot more with it Shunned


    Vote - Aeral

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    Re: Shunned1 4-4 Vs. Aeral 3-2 -Vote-

    your a homo n i know that, this dicklover is so wack,
    ur sig says u been shunned since '01... but u been a Faggot since way before that!

    vs.

    nothing

    Well, in a battle where both verses were pretty bad, one was definitely more consistent and that was Aeral's - the bar I quoted above was for the lulz though. Not close here, Shunned was pretty much missing on every line, nothing really hit for him here.

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