Axe. 2-1 Vs. Arch. 2-1 Vs. Gabriel570 1-2 -Vote-

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 10

Due Times
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Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limits
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[Axe.]

Chop Chop..let's go 20.

[Gabriel570]

check

[The Archetype]

...

[Axe.]

Hmmm....


You see in this battle we all get what we want, its a sudden suprise
I get the win, Gab gets some skin, and Arch gets to be inbetween 2 guys

Eh. Fuck it. I'll battle Tim. I'm still pissed Raydeoh didn't have me in the top 10. I'll probably drop tonight

You couldn't beat me on a bad day, its almost like u tryna not win
Ur not even as good as the mags say, don't be mad ray ain't put u in the top 10
I bet money this bitch will complain again we he don't make it in
So after this hopefully Tim shows u the mercy of lettin u battle Gab again
Cyclops optic rage, hip roll from johnny cage and I'll have both these cats dead
Arch ain't in my tier, but he let a couple out 2 pages into the chat thread
As far as gab, winning is winning and losing is losing queer
We all do are part in the league, I'm still wondering wtf ur doing here
As far as winning? I been on more streaks than a brunette
If me & gab are shoulder to shoulder, its when I got em in a suplex
You construct punches like a gay pop singer, wats wrong with u people?
Where is Lama? Cuz u can even ask David, Arch u let a fag like Gab beat u
So I'm coming like the taliban with extra bombs, weapon drawn, decepticon
Against Chuckee & Leprechaun, punch speed of hermes with centipede extra arms
Gab fuck your brotherhoods, and recognize your fucking ancestors
Cuz when I sleep I hit the sheets until I'm leveling ur grand wizard
I'm Axe so rust wears quick this is jus my public demonstration
Of how a triple threat match, turns into double elimination

[Gabriel570]

Axe tryed to get personal wit personal but his personal's cudn't leap the bottom
U were rushin against a holocaust buh proved that all ur schemes were stallin
This faggot gets a lucky NS win but its plain that his pen game just sucks
why do u say chop chop when ur skills have nothin sharp to make the cut
Arch U suck at GT n if we battled than I'll use ur organs to wipe the floor
My bars r thunderous n i will bolt past ur light reign like a quiet storm
I bet you got a tongue ring cuz it prevents dicks from makin yu throttle
How the fuck do u call urself RC when u got exhausted trying to handle a auto
Axe U are weak at topics, I peeped ur drops n all of them r irrelevant n weird
Y did u call ur piece mind fuck when the creativity in ur brain has been celibate for years
U lack originality n cadence n half the time i don't know what ur talking bout
I'll treat ur life like the setting of ur avatar pic cuz u will end up walkin on clouds
I will advocate ur throat incision wit a dose of dopers writtens n fresh frees
When it comes to g's bars yu cudnt break them down like the voting system in net cees
Arch I will stab yu wit toe nails n use rusted scissors to take them off
I ain't scared of this clown,ur steppin behind the bars of a demon like Jason moss
Im not a plumber but i treat ur bitch like a tool cuz she is sleazy n frail
I got her hammered off screw drivers cuz that bitch was easy to nail
Arch ur nothin but a internet geek n i got the bars to dismantle ur verse
I'll put ur career in a bag like you do to ur victims during a amber alert

[The Archetype]

Well...

There's no way these hoes can win. My dominance will be shown again
I'm forced to battle Axe... but he's just choosing to use concepts as old as them
What's up w/ your irrelevant set ups Axe? This kid's wack and it shows
I think he purposely makes his bars mismatch since he could never find a miss match of his own
He'll tell you he frequents fetish clubs. Bragging about how his sex is good
But it's common knowledge... when Axe swings he's bound to be met by wood
Kid was accused of biting in the chat. Watch the voters shun him fast
It's sad this fag had to archive search to beat me... and Gab is still coming in last
I don't know why 570's in the league. When people say it's wack, he's the reason
We've waited on this match though. Gabe should've been gotten the Axe this season
Gabe's a pedophile by nature. Kid we hate ya. It goes beyond you being a weak rhymer
No one sees you as a diamond in the rough... but we can tell you're always surrounded by minors
Both of you bitches are soft as fuck. My verses will disfigure a whores face
An Arch punch will have y'all lay doubt... you know, retired saying shit was better in your day
Someone as dope as me lose? Not against these lames that i'm facing
So if I'm met by a paradox... it's just to drown these faggots at different locations
I can't believe y'all wanted to drop the limit. The voting will be the worst
But at least we can give voters 20 lines worth reading... too bad they'll all be in my verse
That argument about 2 wins for 3 ways? I won't sweat it whores
I only deserve 1 anyway. You 2 together barely equal a decent competitor


...blah...

[Kung-Fu Panda]

You see in this battle we all get what we want, its a sudden suprise
I get the win, Gab gets some skin, and Arch gets to be inbetween 2 guys

I'm Axe so rust wears quick this is jus my public demonstration
Of how a triple threat match, turns into double elimination

vs.


There's no way these hoes can win. My dominance will be shown again
I'm forced to battle Axe... but he's just choosing to use concepts as old as them
What's up w/ your irrelevant set ups Axe? This kid's wack and it shows
I think he purposely makes his bars mismatch since he could never find a miss match of his own
He'll tell you he frequents fetish clubs. Bragging about how his sex is good
But it's common knowledge... when Axe swings he's bound to be met by wood


don't know why 570's in the league. When people say it's wack, he's the reason
We've waited on this match though. Gabe should've been gotten the Axe this season
Gabe's a pedophile by nature. Kid we hate ya. It goes beyond you being a weak rhymer
No one sees you as a diamond in the rough... but we can tell you're always surrounded by minors
Both of you bitches are soft as fuck. My verses will disfigure a whores face
An Arch punch will have y'all lay doubt... you know, retired saying shit was better in your day
Someone as dope as me lose? Not against these lames that i'm facing
So if I'm met by a paradox... it's just to drown these faggots at different locations
I can't believe y'all wanted to drop the limit. The voting will be the worst
But at least we can give voters 20 lines worth reading... too bad they'll all be in my verse


V/ Arch


more quotables, i used ot be in this league back in the day under a dif alias. Arch had a dope verse i thought. not the hardest punches, but they were amusing. yah, Axe had those 2 lines which i liked to some extent. the rest was just fulla like self hype stuff that wasn't hitting.

[Raydeoh]

You see in this battle we all get what we want, its a sudden suprise
I get the win, Gab gets some skin, and Arch gets to be inbetween 2 guys
Decent enough
You couldn't beat me on a bad day, its almost like u tryna not win
Ur not even as good as the mags say, don't be mad ray ain't put u in the top 10
Am I missing something? This seems like a statement completely.. all you're saying is he shouldn't be mad he's not in the top 10.. nah
I bet money this bitch will complain again we he don't make it in
So after this hopefully Tim shows u the mercy of lettin u battle Gab again
...I guess
Cyclops optic rage, hip roll from johnny cage and I'll have both these cats dead
Arch ain't in my tier, but he let a couple out 2 pages into the chat thread
Decent
As far as gab, winning is winning and losing is losing queer
We all do are part in the league, I'm still wondering wtf ur doing here
Ok I guess
As far as winning? I been on more streaks than a brunette
If me & gab are shoulder to shoulder, its when I got em in a suplex
I've seen a line basically exactly like this so.. does nothing for me
You construct punches like a gay pop singer, wats wrong with u people?
Where is Lama? Cuz u can even ask David, Arch u let a fag like Gab beat u
This could've been dope.. maybe worded differently like I'm Goliath & you're David, Arch...aka that singing faggot that nobody'll vote for.. liked the concept.. delivered poorly
So I'm coming like the taliban with extra bombs, weapon drawn, decepticon
Against Chuckee & Leprechaun, punch speed of hermes with centipede extra arms
...I guess.. wasn't really feelin' this too much
Gab fuck your brotherhoods, and recognize your fucking ancestors
Cuz when I sleep I hit the sheets until I'm leveling ur grand wizard
Ok
I'm Axe so rust wears quick this is jus my public demonstration
Of how a triple threat match, turns into double elimination
Decent enough

vs

Axe tryed to get personal wit personal but his personal's cudn't leap the bottom
U were rushin against a holocaust buh proved that all ur schemes were stallin
Could've been better man.. concept was decent tho
This faggot gets a lucky NS win but its plain that his pen game just sucks
why do u say chop chop when ur skills have nothin sharp to make the cut
Ok I guess
Arch U suck at GT n if we battled than I'll use ur organs to wipe the floor
My bars r thunderous n i will bolt past ur light reign like a quiet storm
Ok
I bet you got a tongue ring cuz it prevents dicks from makin yu throttle
How the fuck do u call urself RC when u got exhausted trying to handle a auto
Nah
Axe U are weak at topics, I peeped ur drops n all of them r irrelevant n weird
Y did u call ur piece mind fuck when the creativity in ur brain has been celibate for years
Liked this
U lack originality n cadence n half the time i don't know what ur talking bout
I'll treat ur life like the setting of ur avatar pic cuz u will end up walkin on clouds
Nah.. overworded and I'm not feelin' the concept either
I will advocate ur throat incision wit a dose of dopers writtens n fresh frees
When it comes to g's bars yu cudnt break them down like the voting system in net cees
Ok
Arch I will stab yu wit toe nails n use rusted scissors to take them off
I ain't scared of this clown,ur steppin behind the bars of a demon like Jason moss
...I guess
Im not a plumber but i treat ur bitch like a tool cuz she is sleazy n frail
I got her hammered off screw drivers cuz that bitch was easy to nail
Decent flip off of something played.. never seen anybody mention the drink
Arch ur nothin but a internet geek n i got the bars to dismantle ur verse
I'll put ur career in a bag like you do to ur victims during a amber alert
Not feelin'

vs

There's no way these hoes can win. My dominance will be shown again
I'm forced to battle Axe... but he's just choosing to use concepts as old as them
Decent
What's up w/ your irrelevant set ups Axe? This kid's wack and it shows
I think he purposely makes his bars mismatch since he could never find a miss match of his own
Lol
He'll tell you he frequents fetish clubs. Bragging about how his sex is good
But it's common knowledge... when Axe swings he's bound to be met by wood
Decent enough
Kid was accused of biting in the chat. Watch the voters shun him fast
It's sad this fag had to archive search to beat me... and Gab is still coming in last
Not feelin'
I don't know why 570's in the league. When people say it's wack, he's the reason
We've waited on this match though. Gabe should've been gotten the Axe this season
Decent
Gabe's a pedophile by nature. Kid we hate ya. It goes beyond you being a weak rhymer
No one sees you as a diamond in the rough... but we can tell you're always surrounded by minors
Lol
Both of you bitches are soft as fuck. My verses will disfigure a whores face
An Arch punch will have y'all lay doubt... you know, retired saying shit was better in your day
Ok I guess
Someone as dope as me lose? Not against these lames that i'm facing
So if I'm met by a paradox... it's just to drown these faggots at different locations
Seen paradox/pair of docks plenty of times but an ok flip
I can't believe y'all wanted to drop the limit. The voting will be the worst
But at least we can give voters 20 lines worth reading... too bad they'll all be in my verse
Nah.. seen too many lines done this way
That argument about 2 wins for 3 ways? I won't sweat it whores
I only deserve 1 anyway. You 2 together barely equal a decent competitor
Ok


Arch by far had the best verse.. good shit yo.. Axe.. alot of your shit came off really bland like no diss at all sometimes.. I've seen you write better than that dude.. next week come with it.. Gabe you're just missing that sting dude.. if you could deliver your concepts correctly you'd probably be pretty decent.. but..

Vote: Arch

[A.T.]

You see in this battle we all get what we want, its a sudden suprise
I get the win, Gab gets some skin, and Arch gets to be inbetween 2 guys
decent
You couldn't beat me on a bad day, its almost like u tryna not win
Ur not even as good as the mags say, don't be mad ray ain't put u in the top 10
eh, ok... didn't hit too hard, imo
I bet money this bitch will complain again we he don't make it in
So after this hopefully Tim shows u the mercy of lettin u battle Gab again
eh, ok
Cyclops optic rage, hip roll from johnny cage and I'll have both these cats dead
Arch ain't in my tier, but he let a couple out 2 pages into the chat thread
lol... this was good
As far as gab, winning is winning and losing is losing queer
We all do are part in the league, I'm still wondering wtf ur doing here
nice
As far as winning? I been on more streaks than a brunette
If me & gab are shoulder to shoulder, its when I got em in a suplex
eh... ok-ish
You construct punches like a gay pop singer, wats wrong with u people?
Where is Lama? Cuz u can even ask David, Arch u let a fag like Gab beat u
ok
So I'm coming like the taliban with extra bombs, weapon drawn, decepticon
Against Chuckee & Leprechaun, punch speed of hermes with centipede extra arms
nah, not feeling this one, bro
Gab fuck your brotherhoods, and recognize your fucking ancestors
Cuz when I sleep I hit the sheets until I'm leveling ur grand wizard
meh-ish
I'm Axe so rust wears quick this is jus my public demonstration
Of how a triple threat match, turns into double elimination
I liked this, but not a hard hitter

vs.

Axe tryed to get personal wit personal but his personal's cudn't leap the bottom
U were rushin against a holocaust buh proved that all ur schemes were stallin
meh
This faggot gets a lucky NS win but its plain that his pen game just sucks
why do u say chop chop when ur skills have nothin sharp to make the cut
nice
Arch U suck at GT n if we battled than I'll use ur organs to wipe the floor
My bars r thunderous n i will bolt past ur light reign like a quiet storm
good metaphor... I see your topical skills coming out, but not a hard hit
I bet you got a tongue ring cuz it prevents dicks from makin yu throttle
How the fuck do u call urself RC when u got exhausted trying to handle a auto
this was actually good... reworded it would be fire!
Axe U are weak at topics, I peeped ur drops n all of them r irrelevant n weird
Y did u call ur piece mind fuck when the creativity in ur brain has been celibate for years
OHHHH SHIT!!!! LMFAO! this was fire!
U lack originality n cadence n half the time i don't know what ur talking bout
I'll treat ur life like the setting of ur avatar pic cuz u will end up walkin on clouds
eh... this was ok-ish
I will advocate ur throat incision wit a dose of dopers writtens n fresh frees
When it comes to g's bars yu cudnt break them down like the voting system in net cees
eh... filler
Arch I will stab yu wit toe nails n use rusted scissors to take them off
I ain't scared of this clown,ur steppin behind the bars of a demon like Jason moss
eh, ok-ish... wasn't feeling it
Im not a plumber but i treat ur bitch like a tool cuz she is sleazy n frail
I got her hammered off screw drivers cuz that bitch was easy to nail
this would be fire if it was worded a little better, I like the concept...
Arch ur nothin but a internet geek n i got the bars to dismantle ur verse
I'll put ur career in a bag like you do to ur victims during a amber alert
lol... this is good

vs.

There's no way these hoes can win. My dominance will be shown again
I'm forced to battle Axe... but he's just choosing to use concepts as old as them
ok... kinda simple, but hits
What's up w/ your irrelevant set ups Axe? This kid's wack and it shows
I think he purposely makes his bars mismatch since he could never find a miss match of his own
decent
He'll tell you he frequents fetish clubs. Bragging about how his sex is good
But it's common knowledge... when Axe swings he's bound to be met by wood
lol
Kid was accused of biting in the chat. Watch the voters shun him fast
It's sad this fag had to archive search to beat me... and Gab is still coming in last
lol... why does everyone hate on Gab? rofl
I don't know why 570's in the league. When people say it's wack, he's the reason
We've waited on this match though. Gabe should've been gotten the Axe this season
decent
Gabe's a pedophile by nature. Kid we hate ya. It goes beyond you being a weak rhymer
No one sees you as a diamond in the rough... but we can tell you're always surrounded by minors
WOW!, good hit, Arch!
Both of you bitches are soft as fuck. My verses will disfigure a whores face
An Arch punch will have y'all lay doubt... you know, retired saying shit was better in your day
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was dope!
Someone as dope as me lose? Not against these lames that i'm facing
So if I'm met by a paradox... it's just to drown these faggots at different locations
good
I can't believe y'all wanted to drop the limit. The voting will be the worst
But at least we can give voters 20 lines worth reading... too bad they'll all be in my verse
lol...
That argument about 2 wins for 3 ways? I won't sweat it whores
I only deserve 1 anyway. You 2 together barely equal a decent competitor
nice closer

Axe- Started off slowly, but further into his verse I could see the rust breaking loose.
Had a few nice hits in there, overall.... not bad for being outta texting for awhile

Gab- Really surprised me... had a lot of filler in his verse, but I think he got the LOTB
with that celibate line... that shit was dope! maybe it was just good but took me by
surprise... either way, nice shit gab... you're definately elevating.

Arch- I think he took the who thing, tbh. Probably matched the total number of quotables
from both Axe and Gab, in his verse. Dude has a skill, what can I say.

with that, I gotta say I didn't want to vote on this battle. 60 lines? ftw... lol, but it was
well worth it, and all dropped at least 3-4 good hits, but in the end...

Vote- Arch

*Crew vote... but a very, very, honest one.

[The Archetype]

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