SmokaJoka 0-0 Vs. Mariah 0-0 -Vote-

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 10

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be Dqued
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
Must Leave 4 links to the battles you voted on in this thread somewhere. I'm not going to search for your votes. Failing to vote will result in -2 votes for every missing link.

[Mariah]

check. 16 lines sounds good.

[SmokaJoka]

hello

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...246/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...249/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...247/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...252/index.html

[SmokaJoka]

Never found the next level did ya girl? lol fuck you and your entire crew
Yeah I still rep IJL...and what's fucked up is it's still better than all you
How the fuck you been at this for years and still manage to suck???
It's fucking obvious as much as you no show then you'd be a fan of the Ducks
Talkin like you black and shit, then wanting peace like you pacifist
You can be positive in chat bitch..
Fact is that's the type of blood on my fist I'm walkin out this battle with
She's a virgin! <seriously...Ima feel bad for the first dude that goes up in her
This bitch'll be so old..
By the time you get ya cherry pop, that shit'll have tootsie roll center
Stared at ya avy and it's just one thing I gotta ask this whore cow
What kinda grotesque ass parents do you have? ...to get those forebrows
And GOTDAMN you gotta chin! but it comes with a face worth smashing
Real talk...
I covered the top half of ya head...and saw the bottom half of Bayou's avy


...

[Mariah]

Hello there.

you're not a typical dude, it's fucking blatant as hell
I can't say shit about you...that anime and faggotry don't say for themselves
we prefer you stop now, thinking it's too early to boast
I'd get personal with you, but you never drop anything worthy to quote
now he's claiming vet status? this dude is lapsed with fatigue
everytime you become a finalist, someone else becomes champ of the league
and you're lacking the skill, shit you probably lack worth
cause we're only Josh'n with you as an excuse for dropping a wack verse
get over the easy writtens, you ain't the fag that we dread
only time you rose to the occasion was when you came back from the dead
and we never asked you to return, shameless cause I'm serious
you've been cramping my style so long, I should blame you for my periods

12.

[A.T.]

Never found the next level did ya girl? lol fuck you and your entire crew
Yeah I still rep IJL...and what's fucked up is it's still better than all you
NOPE!!!! NOT FEELING THIS ONE!!!! lol, nah, decent hit
How the fuck you been at this for years and still manage to suck???
It's fucking obvious as much as you no show then you'd be a fan of the Ducks
good
Talkin like you black and shit, then wanting peace like you pacifist
You can be positive in chat bitch..
Fact is that's the type of blood on my fist I'm walkin out this battle with
eh,.. ok-ish, I like the harshness, seemed stretched, though
She's a virgin! <seriously...Ima feel bad for the first dude that goes up in her
This bitch'll be so old..
By the time you get ya cherry pop, that shit'll have tootsie roll center
ROFLMFAO! nasty as fuck, but funny
Stared at ya avy and it's just one thing I gotta ask this whore cow
What kinda grotesque ass parents do you have? ...to get those forebrows
lol... not a hard hitter, but funny
And GOTDAMN you gotta chin! but it comes with a face worth smashing
Real talk...
I covered the top half of ya head...and saw the bottom half of Bayou's avy
nice closer

vs.

you're not a typical dude, it's fucking blatant as hell
I can't say shit about you...that anime and faggotry don't say for themselves
ok... kinda funny
we prefer you stop now, thinking it's too early to boast
I'd get personal with you, but you never drop anything worthy to quote
this could be taken two ways... he doesnt set himself up for quote flips, or he doesnt make any good post... but decent
now he's claiming vet status? this dude is lapsed with fatigue
everytime you become a finalist, someone else becomes champ of the league
had some sting to this
and you're lacking the skill, shit you probably lack worth
cause we're only Josh'n with you as an excuse for dropping a wack verse
ok
get over the easy writtens, you ain't the fag that we dread
only time you rose to the occasion was when you came back from the dead
eh, ok-ish, seems too simple, imo
and we never asked you to return, shameless cause I'm serious
you've been cramping my style so long, I should blame you for my periods
lol... good closer


good battle here, both dropped nicely, each had one that I wasn't really feeling,
and both were about even as far as consistency. However, Smoka had the LOTB
and I think thats really the only thing that seperates you two.

vote- Smoka

[Philly®]

Never found the next level did ya girl? lol fuck you and your entire crew
Yeah I still rep IJL...and what's fucked up is it's still better than all you
WORDING BRO
How the fuck you been at this for years and still manage to suck???
It's fucking obvious as much as you no show then you'd be a fan of the Ducks
LOL
Talkin like you black and shit, then wanting peace like you pacifist
You can be positive in chat bitch..
Fact is that's the type of blood on my fist I'm walkin out this battle with
MEH, I GET IT THO
She's a virgin! <seriously...Ima feel bad for the first dude that goes up in her
This bitch'll be so old..
By the time you get ya cherry pop, that shit'll have tootsie roll center
LMFAO
Stared at ya avy and it's just one thing I gotta ask this whore cow
What kinda grotesque ass parents do you have? ...to get those forebrows
MEH
And GOTDAMN you gotta chin! but it comes with a face worth smashing
Real talk...
I covered the top half of ya head...and saw the bottom half of Bayou's avy
NAH


vs



you're not a typical dude, it's fucking blatant as hell
I can't say shit about you...that anime and faggotry don't say for themselves
MEH
we prefer you stop now, thinking it's too early to boast
I'd get personal with you, but you never drop anything worthy to quote
JUST ANOTHER "PERSONAL" NAMEPLAY THIS WEEK
now he's claiming vet status? this dude is lapsed with fatigue
everytime you become a finalist, someone else becomes champ of the league
LOL/GOOD PERSONAL
and you're lacking the skill, shit you probably lack worth
cause we're only Josh'n with you as an excuse for dropping a wack verse
MEH/IIGHT
get over the easy writtens, you ain't the fag that we dread
only time you rose to the occasion was when you came back from the dead
NAH/NOT FRESH ENUFF FLIP
and we never asked you to return, shameless cause I'm serious
you've been cramping my style so long, I should blame you for my periods
LOL



HMMM, I DUNNO... THAT TOOTSIE ROLL PUNCH HAD ME ROLLIN.. BUT WORDING ON ALOTTA THE PUNCHES WERE EHH, ON TOP OF THE PUNCH ALREADY BEING EHH.. I KNO CUZ I SEE MYSELF WIT THE SAME ISSUE FROM NOT DOING THIS OFTEN.. ON THE OTHER HAND MARIAH VERSE READ SMOOTH... DIDNT HAVE ANY WAY OUT THERE DOPE LINES, BUT WORDING WAS BETTER AND THAT MADE A FEW OF THE EHH LINES GO OVER EASIER..

V/MARIAH

[Chrit.]

She's a virgin! <seriously...Ima feel bad for the first dude that goes up in her
This bitch'll be so old..
By the time you get ya cherry pop, that shit'll have tootsie roll center

vs

now he's claiming vet status? this dude is lapsed with fatigue
everytime you become a finalist, someone else becomes champ of the league
and we never asked you to return, shameless cause I'm serious
you've been cramping my style so long, I should blame you for my periods

eh... Smoka had more potential here but the wording fell flat. Mariah wasnt great, but wording wasnt too shabby.


v/Mariah

[Untold.]

Never found the next level did ya girl? lol fuck you and your entire crew
Yeah I still rep IJL...and what's fucked up is it's still better than all you
..nah! just a statement..
How the fuck you been at this for years and still manage to suck???
It's fucking obvious as much as you no show then you'd be a fan of the Ducks
..haha! a lil corny, but this was cool..
Talkin like you black and shit, then wanting peace like you pacifist
You can be positive in chat bitch..
Fact is that's the type of blood on my fist I'm walkin out this battle with
..this could'a been dope. the punch was just too stretched and the wording was very shotty. but i do see what u were doing, but poorly executed..
She's a virgin! <seriously...Ima feel bad for the first dude that goes up in her
This bitch'll be so old..
By the time you get ya cherry pop, that shit'll have tootsie roll center
..hhmm. wasn't really feelin this one. just felt like it's been done and didn't have that hard impact i was looking for..
Stared at ya avy and it's just one thing I gotta ask this whore cow
What kinda grotesque ass parents do you have? ...to get those forebrows
..this was aiight, but once again, missing the wit factor..
And GOTDAMN you gotta chin! but it comes with a face worth smashing
Real talk...
I covered the top half of ya head...and saw the bottom half of Bayou's avy
..this was funny. again, wording could use improvement..

vs.

you're not a typical dude, it's fucking blatant as hell
I can't say shit about you...that anime and faggotry don't say for themselves
..simple, but decent. kind'a like smoka's opener. a lil bit of a statement, but deff flow'd better..
we prefer you stop now, thinking it's too early to boast
I'd get personal with you, but you never drop anything worthy to quote
..nah! this shit mad play'd..
now he's claiming vet status? this dude is lapsed with fatigue
everytime you become a finalist, someone else becomes champ of the league
..cool idea, but executed poorly. should'a brought more creativity to this..
and you're lacking the skill, shit you probably lack worth
cause we're only Josh'n with you as an excuse for dropping a wack verse
..not bad. haven't seen this before, but then again, i wouldn't be surprised if it's been done before..
get over the easy writtens, you ain't the fag that we dread
only time you rose to the occasion was when you came back from the dead
..dope. never seen this..
and we never asked you to return, shameless cause I'm serious
you've been cramping my style so long, I should blame you for my periods
..haha! this was pretty cool/funny..

damn, this was pretty interesting battle. smoka, glad to see you back in the league. and mariah, good to see you finally show up. ok, smoka, you had some cool ideas and i can say that they were definitely more creative than mariah's, but the way you worded/executed them were missed. i actually liked most of the ideas that i said were misses, i just feel that ur a bit rusty. s'all good though, im sure you'll back at it in no time. as for mariah, im kind of diggin the simplicity of your style, but a bit more creativity can go a loong way. pretty much, the first part of ur verse was either bland or play'd but at the end, you brought the sting. you did stay consistent enough to get the win, but your gonna have to up the creativeness. overall, decent battle.

v/ mariah

[SmokaJoka]

wording, got it...any other votes =O

[Raydeoh]

Never found the next level did ya girl? lol fuck you and your entire crew
Yeah I still rep IJL...and what's fucked up is it's still better than all you
...I guess
How the fuck you been at this for years and still manage to suck???
It's fucking obvious as much as you no show then you'd be a fan of the Ducks
Ok
Talkin like you black and shit, then wanting peace like you pacifist
You can be positive in chat bitch..
Fact is that's the type of blood on my fist I'm walkin out this battle with
Decent enough
She's a virgin! <seriously...Ima feel bad for the first dude that goes up in her
This bitch'll be so old..
By the time you get ya cherry pop, that shit'll have tootsie roll center
Lol
Stared at ya avy and it's just one thing I gotta ask this whore cow
What kinda grotesque ass parents do you have? ...to get those forebrows
Ok
And GOTDAMN you gotta chin! but it comes with a face worth smashing
Real talk...
I covered the top half of ya head...and saw the bottom half of Bayou's avy
Ok

vs

you're not a typical dude, it's fucking blatant as hell
I can't say shit about you...that anime and faggotry don't say for themselves
Ok
we prefer you stop now, thinking it's too early to boast
I'd get personal with you, but you never drop anything worthy to quote
Decent enough
now he's claiming vet status? this dude is lapsed with fatigue
everytime you become a finalist, someone else becomes champ of the league
Liked this
and you're lacking the skill, shit you probably lack worth
cause we're only Josh'n with you as an excuse for dropping a wack verse
...I guess
get over the easy writtens, you ain't the fag that we dread
only time you rose to the occasion was when you came back from the dead
Decent
and we never asked you to return, shameless cause I'm serious
you've been cramping my style so long, I should blame you for my periods
Nice lol


Mariah had the more polished verse here.. punches landed with more sting

Vote: Mariah

[Aeral]

She's a virgin! <seriously...Ima feel bad for the first dude that goes up in her
This bitch'll be so old..
By the time you get ya cherry pop, that shit'll have tootsie roll center


V


now he's claiming vet status? this dude is lapsed with fatigue
everytime you become a finalist, someone else becomes champ of the league

i felt this was a pretty even battle, i think mariah just edged it her misses hit a little harder. that cramping my style play is madd played but smokas wording got em at times.

v/ maria

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

How the fuck you been at this for years and still manage to suck???
It's fucking obvious as much as you no show then you'd be a fan of the Ducks
Talkin like you black and shit, then wanting peace like you pacifist
You can be positive in chat bitch..
Fact is that's the type of blood on my fist I'm walkin out this battle with


vs

you're not a typical dude, it's fucking blatant as hell
I can't say shit about you...that anime and faggotry don't say for themselves
we prefer you stop now, thinking it's too early to boast
I'd get personal with you, but you never drop anything worthy to quote
get over the easy writtens, you ain't the fag that we dread
only time you rose to the occasion was when you came back from the dead
and we never asked you to return, shameless cause I'm serious
you've been cramping my style so long, I should blame you for my periods

ik actuallyhought htem two bars i quoted by smoka was funny smoka i thought u had some dope concepts but ur wording did kill u homey n u can tell its jus cuz its been a while. mariah the opener n period line was lotb for me i seen alot of period lines but its dope how u flipped it

v/mariah