Originally Posted by
.deadproof.
Wits? Bitch you've got none, but I'll send you flying like top gun,
Ill be approaching this legend, strictly with the intent to toss him of one,
no not only is this wordplay really old it is also stretched
I throw punches that'll hurt you, far as flow, your the worst dude,
So if this battle seems like a breeze, it's only cause your verse blew,
again a concept really old and not flipped at all
You ain't diabetic, but still, were getting fucking sick of you fast,
You got a soft spot for sweets... Hence the daily pricks in your ass,
no this does not hit at all
I'll call your bluff and you stutter, you ought to be ducking for cover,
So expect to get laid out... Instead of $pit on and stock up on rubbers,
same as above and do not name drop unless its creative
It's your third contenders match, you've have a run and you freak,
Destined to have an average boxers career... Full of nothing but streaks.
this ender is really bad
vs
Im the confident type in public, never giving a fuck
only to shy away from wack, when A.T has my nerves acting act up
this was wierd to me with the acting act up part
You have no right to be in the contenders match, cause listen
Your skills are so cheap and generic, their Wal-Mart’s competition
this is also pretty played
I find you and your crew ironic, and ill explain why kid
the sigs labeled as TNT, and yall aint explosive in the slightest
this is ok
Your text is simply boring, so picking a role models fine
Looking up to BTK is great, stale writers gravitate to their own kind
not really into this
We’re round the same age, my life’s successful, yours is a bore
I want suicide for my car doors, that’s what you need to end yours
ok
Ok to be honest and this is absolutely no hate involved but A.T. your wording is horrible and your concepts is just as bad. You use alot of played concepts and you do not flip them at all. So I see you critique other verses or battles and it astonishes me that your a harsh critic when you are barely a decent writer. I'm not saying you can't be good you're just very noobish still. Tim your verse was wierd it had a wierd wording situation which to me takes away from your punches. Your concepts is ok but the wording makes them look not as good.
vote: Tim
