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    Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 (wins) Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    check

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    your funeral have it your way.

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    Re: Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    Quote Originally Posted by M-Var!o View Post
    your funeral have it your way.
    You want to go more?

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    going 30.

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    wtf @ an ego. five no shows you been through's a laugh
    you're seeded in the title bout.. but'll never grow into a champ.
    the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
    thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
    & you ain't from the vario. wouldn't be hard on your best day
    how you gonna stomp a text battle? you can't even kill an essay
    I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
    quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
    I hate to leave you empty. but you ain't about to beat this.
    see the bottom line is you're just an MV... without the P 'ness..
    me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
    I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
    I pull alotta chicks. you wish you were a swinger but you're little
    & when you get a bitch's digits, it's just the two fingers in the middle
    you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
    I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
    coward I rock. you can't compare my power is hot
    I'm mauling you.. like I got 20 thousand & an hour to shop
    extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
    here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
    don't try to step to me. if I was you I'd be ducking fights
    now about face - never seen one so ugly in my fucking life
    LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
    I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
    probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
    no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there
    even she knows you can't text. everything you bust sucks
    I'm the best to date, but don't even buy dinner we just fuck
    hey maybe you'll actually win. nothing's too impossible
    & looking at my verse I've got to admit.. you to the hospital


    Don't bother showing.
    Last edited by $pitacular; April 22nd, 2011 at 07:36 PM

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    thisll be kidnapping, torture, rape and murder if this verse goes to court spit
    alot of areas so this could be a broadcase legally dealing with this bitch
    good at teaching punchlines but all your drops are lame
    ill putem to shame, show RB why coaches stay coaching and dont get in the game
    swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
    let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
    im the Cock in the hen house, if u dont care to lose tough shit
    to stand out swallow ya pride cuz my other biches don't, Spit
    first person to actually talk garbage so if i lose here i got robbed
    seriously you spit that New, clear waste its the only way your verse was bomb
    watch ya girl she got crazy stamina and is a freak
    as soon as she batted her eyes i knew i wouldnt get a wink of sleep
    your bars are basic,i feel everyone of your concepts are played
    after seeing the style you berthed, we'll make sure to give it a way
    i dont know what you heard but homie you need to get a clue
    so when you come to your census you can count that as the total votes against you
    ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
    i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down
    face it im smarter, there is no come back when i dont have to lie
    bet you figured you could counter intelligence by becoming a spy
    i waited for you to become champs so i could see you crash in defeat
    im making sure to destroy everything you billed i hope you kept a receipt
    i got hands like a WR, so your chances to win are gone
    so imma have to catch the title since you will no longer hold the thrown
    artist when it comes to sketching out lines of my victims no need to pay me
    for spit i just drewLs, well it was abstract so pictures slobbering babies
    cool how you got a thread for props, but i hope the ploy was see through
    it was only posted to make it a bigger deal when i beat you
    and to be honest you were opposed to this battle, i know things were said
    but we both know giving me the run around is the only way u'll stay ahead

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    wtf @ an ego. five no shows you been through's a laugh
    you're seeded in the title bout.. but'll never grow into a champ.
    too simple, seen this coming
    the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
    thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
    lol
    & you ain't from the vario. wouldn't be hard on your best day
    how you gonna stomp a text battle? you can't even kill an essay
    decent
    I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
    quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
    I liked this
    I hate to leave you empty. but you ain't about to beat this.
    see the bottom line is you're just an MV... without the P 'ness..
    rofl... dope shit!
    me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
    I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
    eh, decent at best... kinda corny
    I pull alotta chicks. you wish you were a swinger but you're little
    & when you get a bitch's digits, it's just the two fingers in the middle
    ok, not too harsh though
    you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
    I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
    nice flip
    coward I rock. you can't compare my power is hot
    I'm mauling you.. like I got 20 thousand & an hour to shop
    good misdirection... not a hard hitter though
    extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
    here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
    good
    don't try to step to me. if I was you I'd be ducking fights
    now about face - never seen one so ugly in my fucking life
    seen about face concepts before... decent flip
    LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
    I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
    eh... not feeling this one
    probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
    no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there
    good wordplay, good hit
    even she knows you can't text. everything you bust sucks
    I'm the best to date, but don't even buy dinner we just fuck
    simplish
    hey maybe you'll actually win. nothing's too impossible
    & looking at my verse I've got to admit.. you to the hospital
    seems familiar but good flip

    vs.

    thisll be kidnapping, torture, rape and murder if this verse goes to court spit
    alot of areas so this could be a broadcase legally dealing with this bitch
    nice set up, decent delivery
    good at teaching punchlines but all your drops are lame
    ill putem to shame, show RB why coaches stay coaching and dont get in the game
    eh, kinda filler material
    swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
    let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
    decent
    im the Cock in the hen house, if u dont care to lose tough shit
    to stand out swallow ya pride cuz my other biches don't, Spit
    I like the concept, but feel something was lacking
    first person to actually talk garbage so if i lose here i got robbed
    seriously you spit that New, clear waste its the only way your verse was bomb
    ok... could have been worded harsher
    watch ya girl she got crazy stamina and is a freak
    as soon as she batted her eyes i knew i wouldnt get a wink of sleep
    not sure where this was headed
    your bars are basic,i feel everyone of your concepts are played
    after seeing the style you berthed, we'll make sure to give it a way
    decent
    i dont know what you heard but homie you need to get a clue
    so when you come to your census you can count that as the total votes against you
    decent, like the concept again, but wording was a little off
    ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
    i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down
    good
    face it im smarter, there is no come back when i dont have to lie
    bet you figured you could counter intelligence by becoming a spy
    not feeling this one, bro
    i waited for you to become champs so i could see you crash in defeat
    im making sure to destroy everything you billed i hope you kept a receipt
    word play was decent, wording was way off though
    i got hands like a WR, so your chances to win are gone
    so imma have to catch the title since you will no longer hold the thrown
    not feeling this one at all, bro
    artist when it comes to sketching out lines of my victims no need to pay me
    for spit i just drewLs, well it was abstract so pictures slobbering babies
    kinda missed here, man
    cool how you got a thread for props, but i hope the ploy was see through
    it was only posted to make it a bigger deal when i beat you
    statement-ish
    and to be honest you were opposed to this battle, i know things were said
    but we both know giving me the run around is the only way u'll stay ahead
    set up and misdirection was cool, the flip was lacking, though

    I've seen Vario drop 10x better than this, it's like he rushed it or something.
    That being said, I think Spit took this with more direct punches and better
    wording. Vario had some good concepts, but his wording failed him, imo.

    Vote- Spit... again...
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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
    thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
    I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
    quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
    I hate to leave you empty. but you ain't about to beat this.
    see the bottom line is you're just an MV... without the P 'ness..
    me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
    I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
    extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
    here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
    LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
    I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
    probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
    no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there

    vs

    swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
    let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
    first person to actually talk garbage so if i lose here i got robbed
    seriously you spit that New, clear waste its the only way your verse was bomb
    i dont know what you heard but homie you need to get a clue
    so when you come to your census you can count that as the total votes against you
    ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
    i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down


    This battle was completely one sided.. the lines I quoted from $pit were dope.. while the lines I quoted from MV just had potential.. I just think you were out of your league here man.. your wording wasn't polished enough to carry you.. some of your concepts could have been fire if worded correctly.. but..

    Vote: $pitacular

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
    thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
    I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
    quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
    me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
    I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
    you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
    I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
    hey maybe you'll actually win. nothing's too impossible
    & looking at my verse I've got to admit.. you to the hospital

    vs

    ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
    i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down


    This was far too one sided for a champ match.
    Shameful.

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    $pit- didn't like the spanking monkey and the middle digit flip is an old ass concept... i've used it myself... best to date was just ok... every other punch ranged from really good to dope...

    Vario- definitely not your best showing if you were trying to prove why you had a champ match despite no shows... add mire flip was dope... other than that, wording ruined your punches... census one had potential but was worded awfully... rest of your verse just wasn't up to par...

    vote $pit

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    Spitacular

    wtf @ an ego. five no shows you been through's a laugh
    you're seeded in the title bout.. but'll never grow into a champ
    man this was actually a good concept but the flow was so off. this kinda rhyme might work in audio, but didn't sound right here. either way, this was still decent.. just could've been nice
    the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
    thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
    lol
    & you ain't from the vario. wouldn't be hard on your best day
    how you gonna stomp a text battle? you can't even kill an essay
    not feelin it
    I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
    quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
    ha
    I hate to leave you empty. but you ain't about to beat this.
    see the bottom line is you're just an MV... without the P 'ness..
    lol, I'm liking the creativity here... this kinda creativity is almost a lost art now days. props
    me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
    I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
    I didn't like this as a punch... but made me laugh for corniness
    I pull alotta chicks. you wish you were a swinger but you're little
    & when you get a bitch's digits, it's just the two fingers in the middle
    meh
    you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
    I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.
    lol, NICE
    coward I rock. you can't compare my power is hot
    I'm mauling you.. like I got 20 thousand & an hour to shop
    haha, dope
    extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
    here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
    cool wordplay
    don't try to step to me. if I was you I'd be ducking fights
    now about face - never seen one so ugly in my fucking life
    not feelin
    LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
    I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
    i like where you went with this one, cool
    probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
    no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there
    blah
    even she knows you can't text. everything you bust sucks
    I'm the best to date, but don't even buy dinner we just fuck
    aight
    hey maybe you'll actually win. nothing's too impossible
    & looking at my verse I've got to admit.. you to the hospital
    cool closer

    I see you still bringing the heat, keep it up homie

    vs.

    thisll be kidnapping, torture, rape and murder if this verse goes to court spit
    alot of areas so this could be a broadcase legally dealing with this bitch
    not feelin it, poor wording... lack of a punch
    good at teaching punchlines but all your drops are lame
    ill putem to shame, show RB why coaches stay coaching and dont get in the game
    too simple
    swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
    let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck
    there we go... never seen this wordplay.. nice
    im the Cock in the hen house, if u dont care to lose tough shit
    to stand out swallow ya pride cuz my other biches don't, Spit
    more of a statement than a punch directly at spit
    first person to actually talk garbage so if i lose here i got robbed
    seriously you spit that New, clear waste its the only way your verse was bomb
    felt this was a LITTLE bit forced, but still appreciate the creativity so this was decent
    watch ya girl she got crazy stamina and is a freak
    as soon as she batted her eyes i knew i wouldnt get a wink of sleep
    blah
    your bars are basic,i feel everyone of your concepts are played
    after seeing the style you berthed, we'll make sure to give it a way
    ok
    i dont know what you heard but homie you need to get a clue
    so when you come to your census you can count that as the total votes against you
    lol, nice
    ya girl loves sucking my head, damn sluts been been around
    i swear she loves the cap size, explains why she's always going down
    lol...cool
    face it im smarter, there is no come back when i dont have to lie
    bet you figured you could counter intelligence by becoming a spy
    nah
    i waited for you to become champs so i could see you crash in defeat
    im making sure to destroy everything you billed i hope you kept a receipt
    forced.. it would be past tense which would be built... thus ruining the wordplay
    i got hands like a WR, so your chances to win are gone
    so imma have to catch the title since you will no longer hold the thrown
    forced man, sorry
    artist when it comes to sketching out lines of my victims no need to pay me
    for spit i just drewLs, well it was abstract so pictures slobbering babies
    not good...
    cool how you got a thread for props, but i hope the ploy was see through
    it was only posted to make it a bigger deal when i beat you
    too simple
    and to be honest you were opposed to this battle, i know things were said
    but we both know giving me the run around is the only way u'll stay ahead
    blah

    Feel like you have some good potential, not sure how much time you spent on this verse but there was a lot of filler. Which through me off because you had some good concepts and ideas, the execution could use some work. Anyways, keep ya head up.

    Vote: Spitacular

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
    thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
    I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
    quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
    me? I got that animal attraction. quit thinking it's funny
    I had to call PETA, cuz your girl won't stop spanking my monkey.
    you wanna be king. well you won't. I'm here to nail you.
    I'm the staple of this league, & you're the donkey I pin the tail to.

    vs


    nothing


    Vote-Spit...this was completely lopsided....spit had a pretty good verse, with some consistently solid punches throughout. Vario just didn't really have much, and his wording really brought him down and made some concepts with potential not hit very hard.
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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 7-0 Vs. M-Var!o 5-0

    the whole time I'm thinkin, yo this wussy won't stop me.
    thought you were a hermaphrodite. I've never seen pussy so cocky
    I know I been fucking the league. now you're taking a stand.
    quit trying to butt in.. and approach me face to face like a man
    extra extra, read all about it! you ain't fuckin with me.
    here's a special bulletin, your brain for actin tough in the street.
    LMAO! this shit is hilarious.. there's no denying
    I'd say we're laughing WITH you.. but I swear I just saw you crying
    probably cuz your girl's never satisfied. I know it's not fair.
    no worries.. this time I predict the bitch before you got there

    vs

    swear im bury you, but since your the champ ill be sure to show respect
    let you stand in your grave so we can add mire, until its covering ur face and neck


    Ok I have read this battle a few times and ment to break it down each time. I have gotten lazy each time I tried and since i waited until last minute I did this tye of break down. Spit was solid and consistent throughout the entire match with only a few off punches. M don't feel bad because you got to a champ match and was up against a good opponent so theres no shame in losing. But with that said dawg, you were way outdone here. I mean I think you got to a champ match before you was ready because your verse seemed really unpolished and the wording wasn't well. But keep writing man

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