Chrit. 6-2(wins) Vs. Cred 4-3

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 9

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be Dqued
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
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[Chrit.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...848/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...847/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...904/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...855/index.html

[Cred]

We all hate this bitch.

Chrit, not even God likes u! Death awaits as fists & kicks make ur side split
& U could thank the man above.. ur body, the Dr. cuz he finished slappin' u lifeless
I'm disrespectful, u don't have a chance & that's coming from urs truely
Cuz u couldn't stand spit in ur face last week..
.. & after this match it'll just be covered in loogies
Chrit u ain't married to ya gun, u ain't tough so we ain't believing this bitch
Cuz in all honesty u wouldn't dump it.. if u found out it was cheating and shit
One chirp & goons fixing to shoot, u top tier? We ain't believing this dude
Cuz it'd just be a waste of fucking minutes.. if anyone gave ur ego a Boost
& Stop hating u bitch, I'm a punisher - plus I swing crazy with my fists
Cuz I'll punch the flesh off ur skull so bad.. Orc'll replace his avy with ur pic
I'M the king of this jungle, flow & punches precise but u ain't worth the static
Cuz If I spit divine.. I'll leave u hanging from one, for thinking u're Tarzan faggot
This fag been exposed, u're a biter flipping concepts, stop thinkin' ur smart guy
& With all the old heads back.. it's gonna be hard winning, when u dig in the archives
This week I stood blunted, u're weak as fuck & there's no doubt I'll hurt this snitch
Difference between us, I get sky high.. that's where ur spirit'll roam when I merk u bitch

[Chrit.]

You may as well have no showed.

This kid is a bitch, say I didn't bash $pit, ur a trite liar
now this week im outta the woods, guess Ill bash this fag with a 9 iron
Its playoff time again, that time of the season that I smash punks
I bring Thunder with my verses, ur just the nugget we cant flush
Ur chances at winning are fleeting, Its gruesome how I leave this geek bleeding
soon you'll have a gut feeling like you'd rather die than attempt to keep breathing
Never made a run in the league, while every season I hurt rookies
Cred a bully? Well, I'd lose all of mine if I said that you weren't pussy
Even with all that babble you speak, you'll never be the man in the league
but Ill admit, Im addicted to the street cred, til I kick that habit with ease
Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service
Aint no games, ur concepts will make ur existence hang in the balance
so better share ur words with friends, and watch em laugh at the lack of a challenge

[Raydeoh]

I'm disrespectful, u don't have a chance & that's coming from urs truely
Cuz u couldn't stand spit in ur face last week..
.. & after this match it'll just be covered in loogies
Decent enough
Chrit u ain't married to ya gun, u ain't tough so we ain't believing this bitch
Cuz in all honesty u wouldn't dump it.. if u found out it was cheating and shit
One chirp & goons fixing to shoot, u top tier? We ain't believing this dude
Cuz it'd just be a waste of fucking minutes.. if anyone gave ur ego a Boost

vs

Its playoff time again, that time of the season that I smash punks
I bring Thunder with my verses, ur just the nugget we cant flush
Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service


Decent battle here.. Cred a few of your lines came off stretched to me.. the divine and old heads lines could've been executed much better imo.. and Chrit.. the Cred a bully line kinda threw me off because the way it was it seemed like you were trying to say credibility.. which wouldn't have worked out.. and if it was just you losing all of your 'Cred' then it limits the line to just being Ok to me because of the wording.. but Chrit's verse came off as more direct and polished.. Cred tighten up your wording just a bit and you could've had this because I liked where you were going with a lot of your concepts.. good shit guys

Vote: Chrit

[.deadproof.]

Chrit, not even God likes u! Death awaits as fists & kicks make ur side split
& U could thank the man above.. ur body, the Dr. cuz he finished slappin' u lifeless
I wasn't feeling this
I'm disrespectful, u don't have a chance & that's coming from urs truely
Cuz u couldn't stand spit in ur face last week..
.. & after this match it'll just be covered in loogies
ok
Chrit u ain't married to ya gun, u ain't tough so we ain't believing this bitch
Cuz in all honesty u wouldn't dump it.. if u found out it was cheating and shit
lol
One chirp & goons fixing to shoot, u top tier? We ain't believing this dude
Cuz it'd just be a waste of fucking minutes.. if anyone gave ur ego a Boost
I thought this was clever
& Stop hating u bitch, I'm a punisher - plus I swing crazy with my fists
Cuz I'll punch the flesh off ur skull so bad.. Orc'll replace his avy with ur pic
no
I'M the king of this jungle, flow & punches precise but u ain't worth the static
Cuz If I spit divine.. I'll leave u hanging from one, for thinking u're Tarzan faggot
no
This fag been exposed, u're a biter flipping concepts, stop thinkin' ur smart guy
& With all the old heads back.. it's gonna be hard winning, when u dig in the archives
lol
This week I stood blunted, u're weak as fuck & there's no doubt I'll hurt this snitch
Difference between us, I get sky high.. that's where ur spirit'll roam when I merk u bitch
no


vs



This kid is a bitch, say I didn't bash $pit, ur a trite liar
now this week im outta the woods, guess Ill bash this fag with a 9 iron
[ b]dont really see how this is a punch[/b]
Its playoff time again, that time of the season that I smash punks
I bring Thunder with my verses, ur just the nugget we cant flush
again I dont really get the connection between the first part of your sentence to the second part
Ur chances at winning are fleeting, Its gruesome how I leave this geek bleeding
soon you'll have a gut feeling like you'd rather die than attempt to keep breathing
now this was really nice
Never made a run in the league, while every season I hurt rookies
Cred a bully? Well, I'd lose all of mine if I said that you weren't pussy
I am not sure credible was used correctly I mean i have never seen someone say credibly by itself
Even with all that babble you speak, you'll never be the man in the league
but Ill admit, Im addicted to the street cred, til I kick that habit with ease
this was ok a bit played but so is his biting line so i give this one daps to
Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years
this was ok
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service
[b]ok
Aint no games, ur concepts will make ur existence hang in the balance
so better share ur words with friends, and watch em laugh at the lack of a challenge
no


Ok I think Cred had an ok verse but there was a good amount of ups and downs I also thought Chrit had a few nice hits but his lows were really low and a few of the punches made no sense so they did not work at all. While Cred was a little stretched at times and was simple at times as well I think his highs was as high but his lows wasn't as low as Chrits.

vote; Cred

[Rant]

One chirp & goons fixing to shoot, u top tier? We ain't believing this dude
Cuz it'd just be a waste of fucking minutes.. if anyone gave ur ego a Boost

vs

Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service


Ok battle, was actually really disappointed w creds verse this week. Thought u would come better since you've had a couple nice ones. Chrit u barely squeezed this one out. Your verse was pretty average as well bit ehh I guess u did just barely enough.


V chrit

[The Archetype]

Chrit, not even God likes u! Death awaits as fists & kicks make ur side split
& U could thank the man above.. ur body, the Dr. cuz he finished slappin' u lifeless
nah... not feeling...
I'm disrespectful, u don't have a chance & that's coming from urs truely
Cuz u couldn't stand spit in ur face last week..
.. & after this match it'll just be covered in loogies
eh... almost... wording is off but i get what you were doing...
Chrit u ain't married to ya gun, u ain't tough so we ain't believing this bitch
Cuz in all honesty u wouldn't dump it.. if u found out it was cheating and shit
again... i see what you were trying to do, but something's off...
One chirp & goons fixing to shoot, u top tier? We ain't believing this dude
Cuz it'd just be a waste of fucking minutes.. if anyone gave ur ego a Boost
eh... okish...
& Stop hating u bitch, I'm a punisher - plus I swing crazy with my fists
Cuz I'll punch the flesh off ur skull so bad.. Orc'll replace his avy with ur pic
ok...
I'M the king of this jungle, flow & punches precise but u ain't worth the static
Cuz If I spit divine.. I'll leave u hanging from one, for thinking u're Tarzan faggot
not a good "divine" flip...
This fag been exposed, u're a biter flipping concepts, stop thinkin' ur smart guy
& With all the old heads back.. it's gonna be hard winning, when u dig in the archives
too straight forward...
This week I stood blunted, u're weak as fuck & there's no doubt I'll hurt this snitch
Difference between us, I get sky high.. that's where ur spirit'll roam when I merk u bitch
okish...

vs

This kid is a bitch, say I didn't bash $pit, ur a trite liar
now this week im outta the woods, guess Ill bash this fag with a 9 iron
eh... ok...
Its playoff time again, that time of the season that I smash punks
I bring Thunder with my verses, ur just the nugget we cant flush
good basketball flip... but the punch wasn't that strong imo...
Ur chances at winning are fleeting, Its gruesome how I leave this geek bleeding
soon you'll have a gut feeling like you'd rather die than attempt to keep breathing
good hit...
Never made a run in the league, while every season I hurt rookies
Cred a bully? Well, I'd lose all of mine if I said that you weren't pussy
forced... i'm not sure if you're going for credibility or credibly...
Even with all that babble you speak, you'll never be the man in the league
but Ill admit, Im addicted to the street cred, til I kick that habit with ease
seen these on him but an ok punch...
Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years
good...
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service
decentish...
Aint no games, ur concepts will make ur existence hang in the balance
so better share ur words with friends, and watch em laugh at the lack of a challenge
weakish...

vote Bartender

[The Archetype]

Chrit, not even God likes u! Death awaits as fists & kicks make ur side split
& U could thank the man above.. ur body, the Dr. cuz he finished slappin' u lifeless
nah... not feeling...
I'm disrespectful, u don't have a chance & that's coming from urs truely
Cuz u couldn't stand spit in ur face last week..
.. & after this match it'll just be covered in loogies
eh... almost... wording is off but i get what you were doing...
Chrit u ain't married to ya gun, u ain't tough so we ain't believing this bitch
Cuz in all honesty u wouldn't dump it.. if u found out it was cheating and shit
again... i see what you were trying to do, but something's off...
One chirp & goons fixing to shoot, u top tier? We ain't believing this dude
Cuz it'd just be a waste of fucking minutes.. if anyone gave ur ego a Boost
eh... okish...
& Stop hating u bitch, I'm a punisher - plus I swing crazy with my fists
Cuz I'll punch the flesh off ur skull so bad.. Orc'll replace his avy with ur pic
ok...
I'M the king of this jungle, flow & punches precise but u ain't worth the static
Cuz If I spit divine.. I'll leave u hanging from one, for thinking u're Tarzan faggot
not a good "divine" flip...
This fag been exposed, u're a biter flipping concepts, stop thinkin' ur smart guy
& With all the old heads back.. it's gonna be hard winning, when u dig in the archives
too straight forward...
This week I stood blunted, u're weak as fuck & there's no doubt I'll hurt this snitch
Difference between us, I get sky high.. that's where ur spirit'll roam when I merk u bitch
okish...

vs

This kid is a bitch, say I didn't bash $pit, ur a trite liar
now this week im outta the woods, guess Ill bash this fag with a 9 iron
eh... ok...
Its playoff time again, that time of the season that I smash punks
I bring Thunder with my verses, ur just the nugget we cant flush
good basketball flip... but the punch wasn't that strong imo...
Ur chances at winning are fleeting, Its gruesome how I leave this geek bleeding
soon you'll have a gut feeling like you'd rather die than attempt to keep breathing
good hit...
Never made a run in the league, while every season I hurt rookies
Cred a bully? Well, I'd lose all of mine if I said that you weren't pussy
forced... i'm not sure if you're going for credibility or credibly...
Even with all that babble you speak, you'll never be the man in the league
but Ill admit, Im addicted to the street cred, til I kick that habit with ease
seen these on him but an ok punch...
Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years
good...
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service
decentish...
Aint no games, ur concepts will make ur existence hang in the balance
so better share ur words with friends, and watch em laugh at the lack of a challenge
weakish...

vote Bartender

[miracle]

Its playoff time again, that time of the season that I smash punks
I bring Thunder with my verses, ur just the nugget we cant flush
Ur chances at winning are fleeting, Its gruesome how I leave this geek bleeding
soon you'll have a gut feeling like you'd rather die than attempt to keep breathing
Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years

vs

& Stop hating u bitch, I'm a punisher - plus I swing crazy with my fists
Cuz I'll punch the flesh off ur skull so bad.. Orc'll replace his avy with ur pic
I'M the king of this jungle, flow & punches precise but u ain't worth the static
Cuz If I spit divine.. I'll leave u hanging from one, for thinking u're Tarzan faggot

vote->chrit for less misses..he came with better hits

[$pitacular]

Chrit, not even God likes u! Death awaits as fists & kicks make ur side split
& U could thank the man above.. ur body, the Dr. cuz he finished slappin' u lifeless
didn't like this misdirection, poorly executed, had to re-read it before I even got it, and it still didn't seem like it flowed right. I think it's the way you threw in "the Dr." all weird
I'm disrespectful, u don't have a chance & that's coming from urs truely
Cuz u couldn't stand spit in ur face last week..
.. & after this match it'll just be covered in loogies
see one of these every week..
Chrit u ain't married to ya gun, u ain't tough so we ain't believing this bitch
Cuz in all honesty u wouldn't dump it.. if u found out it was cheating and shit
cool concept, could have been worded harsher
One chirp & goons fixing to shoot, u top tier? We ain't believing this dude
Cuz it'd just be a waste of fucking minutes.. if anyone gave ur ego a Boost
nice.
& Stop hating u bitch, I'm a punisher - plus I swing crazy with my fists
Cuz I'll punch the flesh off ur skull so bad.. Orc'll replace his avy with ur pic
I didn't care for this, the concept was cool'ish but not quite enough to use
I'M the king of this jungle, flow & punches precise but u ain't worth the static
Cuz If I spit divine.. I'll leave u hanging from one, for thinking u're Tarzan faggot
the "faggot" was unnecessary and ruined the impact. punch should have ended with "Tarzan", the rhyme scheme would have came off better than rhyming static and faggot
This fag been exposed, u're a biter flipping concepts, stop thinkin' ur smart guy
& With all the old heads back.. it's gonna be hard winning, when u dig in the archives
done to death, not really a fresh flip
This week I stood blunted, u're weak as fuck & there's no doubt I'll hurt this snitch
Difference between us, I get sky high.. that's where ur spirit'll roam when I merk u bitch
didn't like this at all. basically a comparison punch

vs

This kid is a bitch, say I didn't bash $pit, ur a trite liar
now this week im outta the woods, guess Ill bash this fag with a 9 iron
why do you keep using the word "trite" every week? it's wack. concept was cool, decent punch
Its playoff time again, that time of the season that I smash punks
I bring Thunder with my verses, ur just the nugget we cant flush
LMAOSFHIF (laughed my ass off so fucking hard I farted), this was was fucking hilarious.
Ur chances at winning are fleeting, Its gruesome how I leave this geek bleeding
soon you'll have a gut feeling like you'd rather die than attempt to keep breathing
concept was cool,decent execution, could have been better
Never made a run in the league, while every season I hurt rookies
Cred a bully? Well, I'd lose all of mine if I said that you weren't pussy
credibully for credibility? no dice.
Even with all that babble you speak, you'll never be the man in the league
but Ill admit, Im addicted to the street cred, til I kick that habit with ease
nah.
Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years
this was cool
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service
liked this, harsh.
Aint no games, ur concepts will make ur existence hang in the balance
so better share ur words with friends, and watch em laugh at the lack of a challenge
ha never seen someone use that yet. cool.


Seems like Chrit took this pretty much without effort.. Cred this was the worst I've seen you do in a while and you knew you were facing Chrit.. you're not going to win with no fresh concepts and poor wording against him.. The opener was a cool concept just executed poorly.. work harder on your delivery. Chrit seems like you got a little lazy after reading his verse but I can't blame you.

v/Chrit

[Untold.]

Chrit, not even God likes u! Death awaits as fists & kicks make ur side split
& U could thank the man above.. ur body, the Dr. cuz he finished slappin' u lifeless
Chrit u ain't married to ya gun, u ain't tough so we ain't believing this bitch
Cuz in all honesty u wouldn't dump it.. if u found out it was cheating and shit
This fag been exposed, u're a biter flipping concepts, stop thinkin' ur smart guy
& With all the old heads back.. it's gonna be hard winning, when u dig in the archives
This week I stood blunted, u're weak as fuck & there's no doubt I'll hurt this snitch
Difference between us, I get sky high.. that's where ur spirit'll roam when I merk u bitch

vs.

Its playoff time again, that time of the season that I smash punks
I bring Thunder with my verses, ur just the nugget we cant flush
Ur chances at winning are fleeting, Its gruesome how I leave this geek bleeding
soon you'll have a gut feeling like you'd rather die than attempt to keep breathing
Even with all that babble you speak, you'll never be the man in the league
but Ill admit, Im addicted to the street cred, til I kick that habit with ease
Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service
Aint no games, ur concepts will make ur existence hang in the balance
so better share ur words with friends, and watch em laugh at the lack of a challenge

damn. this battle turned out a lot better than i expected. i was feeling a good bit of cred's verse but some of the wording and execution to the punches were done poorly. i saw where you were going with it, but the lines i did quote were fresh to me. i especially liked your opener. work on wording and dropping more consistent punches. and damn @ chrit. dropped some fire this week. all that i quoted, i felt like they stung. keep droppin like this man, you'll be back in that champ match in no time.

v/ chrit

[Token]

Cred
One chirp & goons fixing to shoot, u top tier? We ain't believing this dude
Cuz it'd just be a waste of fucking minutes.. if anyone gave ur ego a Boost
This fag been exposed, u're a biter flipping concepts, stop thinkin' ur smart guy
& With all the old heads back.. it's gonna be hard winning, when u dig in the archives

These were the best lines you had, but a lot of your misses were really off target and showed that you are either still elevating, or just completely rushed your verse.

vs.

Chrit

This kid is a bitch, say I didn't bash $pit, ur a trite liar
now this week im outta the woods, guess Ill bash this fag with a 9 iron
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service

these were nice... wasn't feeling your verse this week like I normally do, I can tell you didn't put forth much effort. was the cred a bully line supposed to be a wordplay or just simply a punch? either way, your non quotes were much better than his. enough to take the win.

vote- chrit

[Tim]

Chrit, not even God likes u! Death awaits as fists & kicks make ur side split
& U could thank the man above.. ur body, the Dr. cuz he finished slappin' u lifeless
This was so-so
I'm disrespectful, u don't have a chance & that's coming from urs truely
Cuz u couldn't stand spit in ur face last week..
.. & after this match it'll just be covered in loogies
this was a close hit
Chrit u ain't married to ya gun, u ain't tough so we ain't believing this bitch
Cuz in all honesty u wouldn't dump it.. if u found out it was cheating and shit
this was alright
One chirp & goons fixing to shoot, u top tier? We ain't believing this dude
Cuz it'd just be a waste of fucking minutes.. if anyone gave ur ego a Boost
heh okay
& Stop hating u bitch, I'm a punisher - plus I swing crazy with my fists
Cuz I'll punch the flesh off ur skull so bad.. Orc'll replace his avy with ur pic
this was also okay
I'M the king of this jungle, flow & punches precise but u ain't worth the static
Cuz If I spit divine.. I'll leave u hanging from one, for thinking u're Tarzan faggot
nah not feeling this flip
This fag been exposed, u're a biter flipping concepts, stop thinkin' ur smart guy
& With all the old heads back.. it's gonna be hard winning, when u dig in the archives
this was predictable
This week I stood blunted, u're weak as fuck & there's no doubt I'll hurt this snitch
Difference between us, I get sky high.. that's where ur spirit'll roam when I merk u bitch
cool closer

vs

This kid is a bitch, say I didn't bash $pit, ur a trite liar
now this week im outta the woods, guess Ill bash this fag with a 9 iron
alright
Its playoff time again, that time of the season that I smash punks
I bring Thunder with my verses, ur just the nugget we cant flush
I kinda got a laugh outta this
Ur chances at winning are fleeting, Its gruesome how I leave this geek bleeding
soon you'll have a gut feeling like you'd rather die than attempt to keep breathing
nice
Never made a run in the league, while every season I hurt rookies
Cred a bully? Well, I'd lose all of mine if I said that you weren't pussy
nah this was too forced
Even with all that babble you speak, you'll never be the man in the league
but Ill admit, Im addicted to the street cred, til I kick that habit with ease
alright
Seen you in the FL tourney, its pathetic how Im killin those queers
feelin like Im in virgin territory, the place where Cred's been chillin for years
haha....nice
We should collab on an album duke, all of them tunes'll be perfect
Im sayin with Cred I'd make a killing... seem like community service
ehhhhh
Aint no games, ur concepts will make ur existence hang in the balance
so better share ur words with friends, and watch em laugh at the lack of a challenge
weak closer

Vote....Chrit

More rounded verse with less misses