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    Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 (wins) Vs. Chrit. 6-1

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1

    how about 40?

    Cool.
    Last edited by $pitacular; April 13th, 2011 at 07:18 PM

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    Re: Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1


    Ur feature in the mag was alright, but I cant say that you started off right
    you forgot your trademark step 1... find an idiom site or some archives
    The rest was preachy n trite, and a total waste of all of ur time
    hell, I almost applauded your concept nobody will fall for your lies
    If you think his gloatin is cool, Ill prove he's over the hill
    $pit loves starting in pole position, so he can smoke em at will
    This hoe'll get killed, for sure he'll be showing his best flips
    so we'll see $pit outrageous, n cuss out the league for voting against him
    Spending Friday with us instead of ur kid, Im sure she's missing you badly
    atleast tomorrow she'll have Sat mourning, the messy death of her daddy
    It takes effort when bestin this cheat, in an effort to forget my fatigue
    against $pit I'll just flip him the bird, and he'll flip the rest of the league
    Im quick when stunning this fake, I bet he cant keep up with the pace
    so it'll be a knee-jerk reaction as Im clinching n busting his face
    F'real its not a surprise, how he got with that slut of a wife
    $pit's what every woman wishes for, a tiny pussy that aint had a job in its life
    ur daughter is needing friends, I aint talking about her eating when
    she always has a fruit by the foot, talking $pit outta leaving again
    Ask about his green card status, Bet money that he'll just plead dumb
    so if we settle it like gents and fence, he'll just jump it n run for his freedom
    This spick is a failure and puke, but f'real that avy is cute,
    but to be accurate, all thats missing is a sign and a box fulla fruit
    Take advantage of this league, so when reading lines from this geek
    Voters'll swear his disses are outta the Blue... Bayou archive this week
    Dead presidents represent me, and in stayin true to form kid
    ur lines aint current, see and are as old as the dudes that adorn it
    I'll go overboard when I smash you, leave all of your family rattled
    like father, like son...ned, is what his daughter'll tell him regarding the battle
    in the deep water now,that cheating n biting'll leave this tard shanked
    so now voters sea world's of reasons that are makin this shark tank
    When seeing this battle on paper, im sure to be fading this faker
    too bad we cant hold a proper battle when all ur embracing is failure
    This fag cant afford to lose while I'm known for bombing on bitches
    so the second he sees this reality check he'll head back n start on the dishes
    Nobody see's the genius in $pit, so when I'm busting this kid
    Ill remind him, great minds think alike... able verse from you doesnt exist
    People ask me to help him, I tried, but f'real this dude is the dumb type
    I'm like, yo $pit, try Grindtime, but the fool would just rub on my thigh
    catching a loss, when it comes to ur edge ur losin it boss
    so when this battle turns heads, ur face just got too gruesome to watch





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    Last edited by Chrit.; April 15th, 2011 at 07:06 PM
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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1

    you're full of lies. "I never bit", "I never paid to win". yeah right.
    so you do 6 miles of cardio. but dog. you can't run away from your life



    the facts they fit. you ushered in the era of biting & lack of wit.
    president of wack. causing a campaign everytime they snap a pic
    I'll be real. there was a time I thought you were tight with sick lines
    I remember clearly. it was that six month stretch when you bit mine
    this time I'm clownin a bitch. get your mouth pounded & split
    I'm firing on all cylinders.. and you're about as round as it gets
    now I'm sealing it in stone, only the truest last forever.
    Im potent <-- and you just define those two words smashed together
    back to sever. once I drop you'll be reeling I'm wrecking thesis
    on the hunt for prey. n' my verse got you kneeling & begging Jesus
    we've been thru alot.. I know you think we're close despite it.
    but I'm gonna write the dopest cyanide punch EVER & hope you bite it
    bitch don't deny it. you graduated from a school of posers.
    you might have a dope phone but Atrix not gonna fool the voters.
    yeah that's relevant. easy to see the fact's, you're so related
    I knew you were with At&t, cuz U-verse's wack and overrated
    you're a liar & tool. throw you in the flames until the fire is full
    I don't know why you're fucking cows when you desirable
    you're not a man homie.. so I really doubt if you're stout.
    the only hair on your chest is what fell out of your scalp.
    been trying to rap for years. your voice is sucking so stop
    here's a hint.. a tuning fork isn't for grubbing on slop
    your concepts suck. shouldn't have to decipher what they mean
    cuz ideal punches and right now you're looking like a fucking fiend
    you tell us you never bit. always try & deceive dudes
    but the buzz is, what you must have if you think we believe you
    true art is back. but the U.S. is broke, times are hard it's fact.
    good thing about the deficit means they can't hear your garbage rap
    I'll put it bluntly. don't act brave. you're bitter & played
    it's that age old question, what came first? ..the Chrit or the Egg
    you suck at everything. even your day job testified you're weak.
    don't know if you commute, or I make you too petrified to speak
    I see you try & fool these writers. for now I'll prove he's biter
    someday my lines will be forgotten.. then all the sudden you'll be fire
    pumpin steroids, drinkin liquor. no wonder you sick & live a lie
    I hope keep abusing your body.. cuz no one cares if ya liver die.

    bye.

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1

    Ur feature in the mag was alright, but I cant say that you started off right
    you forgot your trademark step 1... find an idiom site or some archives
    ok opener
    The rest was preachy n trite, and a total waste of all of ur time
    hell, I almost applauded your concept nobody will fall for your lies
    ok flip, but not a hard hit
    If you think his gloatin is cool, Ill prove he's over the hill
    $pit loves starting in pole position, so he can smoke em at will
    ok
    This hoe'll get killed, for sure he'll be showing his best flips
    so we'll see $pit outrageous, n cuss out the league for voting against him
    decent
    Spending Friday with us instead of ur kid, Im sure she's missing you badly
    atleast tomorrow she'll have Sat mourning, the messy death of her daddy
    harsh... good flip
    It takes effort when bestin this cheat, in an effort to forget my fatigue
    against $pit I'll just flip him the bird, and he'll flip the rest of the league
    not bad
    Im quick when stunning this fake, I bet he cant keep up with the pace
    so it'll be a knee-jerk reaction as Im clinching n busting his face
    decent
    F'real its not a surprise, how he got with that slut of a wife
    $pit's what every woman wishes for, a tiny pussy that aint had a job in its life
    lol... good
    ur daughter is needing friends, I aint talking about her eating when
    she always has a fruit by the foot, talking $pit outta leaving again
    cool
    Ask about his green card status, Bet money that he'll just plead dumb
    so if we settle it like gents and fence, he'll just jump it n run for his freedom
    I like this... worded well
    This spick is a failure and puke, but f'real that avy is cute,
    but to be accurate, all thats missing is a sign and a box fulla fruit
    lol
    Take advantage of this league, so when reading lines from this geek
    Voters'll swear his disses are outta the Blue... Bayou archive this week
    cool
    Dead presidents represent me, and in stayin true to form kid
    ur lines aint current, see and are as old as the dudes that adorn it
    nice bar here
    I'll go overboard when I smash you, leave all of your family rattled
    like father, like son...ned, is what his daughter'll tell him regarding the battle
    decent flip
    in the deep water now,that cheating n biting'll leave this tard shanked
    so now voters sea world's of reasons that are makin this shark tank
    good, like the concept
    When seeing this battle on paper, im sure to be fading this faker
    too bad we cant hold a proper battle when all ur embracing is failure
    nice
    This fag cant afford to lose while I'm known for bombing on bitches
    so the second he sees this reality check he'll head back n start on the dishes
    ok...
    Nobody see's the genius in $pit, so when I'm busting this kid
    Ill remind him, great minds think alike... able verse from you doesnt exist
    I like this one
    People ask me to help him, I tried, but f'real this dude is the dumb type
    I'm like, yo $pit, try Grindtime, but the fool would just rub on my thigh
    eh... I get it, but not really harsh-ish
    catching a loss, when it comes to ur edge ur losin it boss
    so when this battle turns heads, ur face just got too gruesome to watch
    dope closer

    vs.

    you're full of lies. "I never bit", "I never paid to win". yeah right.
    so you do 6 miles of cardio. but dog. you can't run away from your life
    harsh opener in a deep sense...
    the facts they fit. you ushered in the era of biting & lack of wit.
    president of wack. causing a campaign everytime they snap a pic
    decent
    I'll be real. there was a time I thought you were tight with sick lines
    I remember clearly. it was that six month stretch when you bit mine
    self glory, but with a cruel arrogance... i like this one
    this time I'm clownin a bitch. get your mouth pounded & split
    I'm firing on all cylinders.. and you're about as round as it gets
    lol
    now I'm sealing it in stone, only the truest last forever.
    Im potent <-- and you just define those two words smashed together
    good flip, done a similar concept, ok hit
    back to sever. once I drop you'll be reeling I'm wrecking thesis
    on the hunt for prey. n' my verse got you kneeling & begging Jesus
    eh...
    we've been thru alot.. I know you think we're close despite it.
    but I'm gonna write the dopest cyanide punch EVER & hope you bite it
    lol... stuck a funny bone on this one
    bitch don't deny it. you graduated from a school of posers.
    you might have a dope phone but Atrix not gonna fool the voters.
    eh... not really feeling this one
    yeah that's relevant. easy to see the fact's, you're so related
    I knew you were with At&t, cuz U-verse's wack and overrated
    decent
    you're a liar & tool. throw you in the flames until the fire is full
    I don't know why you're fucking cows when you desirable
    rofl... dope
    you're not a man homie.. so I really doubt if you're stout.
    the only hair on your chest is what fell out of your scalp.
    lol... another funny one
    been trying to rap for years. your voice is sucking so stop
    here's a hint.. a tuning fork isn't for grubbing on slop
    decent
    your concepts suck. shouldn't have to decipher what they mean
    cuz ideal punches and right now you're looking like a fucking fiend
    nice bar
    you tell us you never bit. always try & deceive dudes
    but the buzz is, what you must have if you think we believe you
    ok flip... not a hard hitter
    true art is back. but the U.S. is broke, times are hard it's fact.
    good thing about the deficit means they can't hear your garbage rap
    eh... ok
    I'll put it bluntly. don't act brave. you're bitter & played
    it's that age old question, what came first? ..the Chrit or the Egg
    lol
    you suck at everything. even your day job testified you're weak.
    don't know if you commute, or I make you too petrified to speak
    nice flip
    I see you try & fool these writers. for now I'll prove he's biter
    someday my lines will be forgotten.. then all the sudden you'll be fire
    self glory, but ok
    pumpin steroids, drinkin liquor. no wonder you sick & live a lie
    I hope keep abusing your body.. cuz no one cares if ya liver die.
    ok closer

    this battle was gooooood, maybe forty lines was a bit much, because there
    was a lot of filler, but good battle none the less. Overall, Chrit had some
    consistency on his side and had a few harsh hitters, good verse imo.
    Spit had me crackin up on some of his bars and had a lot of filler-ish punches
    as well, but almost as consistent at Chrit. Close battle by any means.

    Vote- Spit... by a cunt hair.
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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1

    Ur feature in the mag was alright, but I cant say that you started off right
    you forgot your trademark step 1... find an idiom site or some archives
    ..lol. nice opener..
    The rest was preachy n trite, and a total waste of all of ur time
    hell, I almost applauded your concept nobody will fall for your lies
    ..naw, didn't really feel this one..
    If you think his gloatin is cool, Ill prove he's over the hill
    $pit loves starting in pole position, so he can smoke em at will
    ..hmm, kind of dug it, but i felt the wording could'a been a bit more crisp..
    This hoe'll get killed, for sure he'll be showing his best flips
    so we'll see $pit outrageous, n cuss out the league for voting against him
    ..naw! but i could see it happening..
    Spending Friday with us instead of ur kid, Im sure she's missing you badly
    atleast tomorrow she'll have Sat mourning, the messy death of her daddy
    ..eh! see where ya goin, but seen the concept done too many times, even tho flip's pretty decent..
    It takes effort when bestin this cheat, in an effort to forget my fatigue
    against $pit I'll just flip him the bird, and he'll flip the rest of the league
    ..ha! i dig it!..
    Im quick when stunning this fake, I bet he cant keep up with the pace
    so it'll be a knee-jerk reaction as Im clinching n busting his face
    ..naw. seen it before and the wordin could've made this doper..
    F'real its not a surprise, how he got with that slut of a wife
    $pit's what every woman wishes for, a tiny pussy that aint had a job in its life
    ..man, i think i got where u were going with this, but i think the wording didn't give the concept justice..
    ur daughter is needing friends, I aint talking about her eating when
    she always has a fruit by the foot, talking $pit outta leaving again
    ..DOPE! thought this shit was cool..
    Ask about his green card status, Bet money that he'll just plead dumb
    so if we settle it like gents and fence, he'll just jump it n run for his freedom
    ..haha! sick..
    This spick is a failure and puke, but f'real that avy is cute,
    but to be accurate, all thats missing is a sign and a box fulla fruit
    ..ok, this was pretty cool..
    Take advantage of this league, so when reading lines from this geek
    Voters'll swear his disses are outta the Blue... Bayou archive this week
    ..dope if he's really bit from blue, but other than that, ok punch..
    Dead presidents represent me, and in stayin true to form kid
    ur lines aint current, see and are as old as the dudes that adorn it
    ..man, once again, wording could've made this punch doper..
    I'll go overboard when I smash you, leave all of your family rattled
    like father, like son...ned, is what his daughter'll tell him regarding the battle
    ..yea, this was decent. i liked how u connected everything back to his daughter..
    in the deep water now,that cheating n biting'll leave this tard shanked
    so now voters sea world's of reasons that are makin this shark tank
    ..dope! liked this line..
    When seeing this battle on paper, im sure to be fading this faker
    too bad we cant hold a proper battle when all ur embracing is failure
    ..naw..
    This fag cant afford to lose while I'm known for bombing on bitches
    so the second he sees this reality check he'll head back n start on the dishes
    ..sweet! this was fire..
    Nobody see's the genius in $pit, so when I'm busting this kid
    Ill remind him, great minds think alike... able verse from you doesnt exist
    ..kind of like ur son..ned punch, but WAYY better..
    People ask me to help him, I tried, but f'real this dude is the dumb type
    I'm like, yo $pit, try Grindtime, but the fool would just rub on my thigh
    ..cool flip. haven't seen the on the grind/grindtime line been done like this before..
    catching a loss, when it comes to ur edge ur losin it boss
    so when this battle turns heads, ur face just got too gruesome to watch
    ..nope. weak closer. seen this concept done too many times. n prolly seen it done better..

    vs.

    you're full of lies. "I never bit", "I never paid to win". yeah right.
    so you do 6 miles of cardio. but dog. you can't run away from your life
    ..cool idea, but it didn't hit hard for me..
    the facts they fit. you ushered in the era of biting & lack of wit.
    president of wack. causing a campaign everytime they snap a pic
    ..another cool idea..
    I'll be real. there was a time I thought you were tight with sick lines
    I remember clearly. it was that six month stretch when you bit mine
    ..dope. lil self-glory but cool..
    this time I'm clownin a bitch. get your mouth pounded & split
    I'm firing on all cylinders.. and you're about as round as it gets
    ..hahaha. i laughed at this one..
    now I'm sealing it in stone, only the truest last forever.
    Im potent <-- and you just define those two words smashed together
    ..ha! this was a lil forced but creative..
    back to sever. once I drop you'll be reeling I'm wrecking thesis
    on the hunt for prey. n' my verse got you kneeling & begging Jesus
    ..this was a decent flip..
    we've been thru alot.. I know you think we're close despite it.
    but I'm gonna write the dopest cyanide punch EVER & hope you bite it
    ..eh, kind of weak..
    bitch don't deny it. you graduated from a school of posers.
    you might have a dope phone but Atrix not gonna fool the voters.
    ..this was aiight. could'a been worded more effectively..
    yeah that's relevant. easy to see the fact's, you're so related
    I knew you were with At&t, cuz U-verse's wack and overrated
    ..another creative line, but a lil forced. i was feelin tho..
    you're a liar & tool. throw you in the flames until the fire is full
    I don't know why you're fucking cows when you desirable
    ..haha! a lil corny but funny..
    you're not a man homie.. so I really doubt if you're stout.
    the only hair on your chest is what fell out of your scalp.
    ..NICE! this was fuckin sick..
    been trying to rap for years. your voice is sucking so stop
    here's a hint.. a tuning fork isn't for grubbing on slop
    ..haha! nother funny hit..
    your concepts suck. shouldn't have to decipher what they mean
    cuz ideal punches and right now you're looking like a fucking fiend
    ..hmm, seen an ideal punch the other day at NC, was a nameplay, but this was aiight..
    you tell us you never bit. always try & deceive dudes
    but the buzz is, what you must have if you think we believe you
    ..nice. this was cool..
    true art is back. but the U.S. is broke, times are hard it's fact.
    good thing about the deficit means they can't hear your garbage rap
    ..this was cool. i been tryin to think of a good way to word a "deficit" line. you beat me to it..
    I'll put it bluntly. don't act brave. you're bitter & played
    it's that age old question, what came first? ..the Chrit or the Egg
    ..this was lame. no hate, but i wasn't feelin..
    you suck at everything. even your day job testified you're weak.
    don't know if you commute, or I make you too petrified to speak
    ..feel like this has been done before, but i can't remember so its fresh. dope..
    I see you try & fool these writers. for now I'll prove he's biter
    someday my lines will be forgotten.. then all the sudden you'll be fire
    ..kind of reminds me of the "6 month stretch" line you had above, but the flow was on point..
    pumpin steroids, drinkin liquor. no wonder you sick & live a lie
    I hope keep abusing your body.. cuz no one cares if ya liver die
    ..i know i've seen some liver punches before and this just didn't seal the deal at the end..

    wow! what'a read. felt there was a lot more filler in this battle then actual RAW rhymez and honestly, i felt as if $pit brought more fire last week. i think i've read this battle about 3-4 times and it's definately a GOOD read. a lot of stuff these new cats could learn in here. i must say the personals are definately what made this battle what it is. this is what cats need to be doing more, including myself. i feel that personals definately make the battle a lot better with punches because they have the potential to expose the other person and clown him better. overall, chrit had some dope lines, like the "fruit by the foot" line, "gents and fence", and the "reality check" lines. he had some other cool punches thrown in the mix to. $pit had some crisp shit to like his "im potent", "scalp" and some his opener was cool. there was also a mix of hits in there that connected well, but $pit definately lacked some originality/creativity in his verse with all the fat jokes and biting lines. some were cool, but others have been done before. this battle could go either way but this came down to originality, creativity, and harder punches and honestly i felt as if chrit just wanted this more. g/l to both, but i vote..

    v/ Chrit

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1

    Ur feature in the mag was alright, but I cant say that you started off right
    you forgot your trademark step 1... find an idiom site or some archives

    not bad

    The rest was preachy n trite, and a total waste of all of ur time
    hell, I almost applauded your concept nobody will fall for your lies

    na

    If you think his gloatin is cool, Ill prove he's over the hill
    $pit loves starting in pole position, so he can smoke em at will

    pole jokes = played.. decent flip though

    This hoe'll get killed, for sure he'll be showing his best flips
    so we'll see $pit outrageous, n cuss out the league for voting against him

    haha nice

    Spending Friday with us instead of ur kid, Im sure she's missing you badly
    atleast tomorrow she'll have Sat mourning, the messy death of her daddy

    nice

    It takes effort when bestin this cheat, in an effort to forget my fatigue
    against $pit I'll just flip him the bird, and he'll flip the rest of the league

    LOL, dope

    Im quick when stunning this fake, I bet he cant keep up with the pace
    so it'll be a knee-jerk reaction as Im clinching n busting his face

    average

    F'real its not a surprise, how he got with that slut of a wife
    $pit's what every woman wishes for, a tiny pussy that aint had a job in its life

    wording could have been better... the concept wasn't clear enough

    ur daughter is needing friends, I aint talking about her eating when
    she always has a fruit by the foot, talking $pit outta leaving again

    not bad

    Ask about his green card status, Bet money that he'll just plead dumb
    so if we settle it like gents and fence, he'll just jump it n run for his freedom

    lol @ a fencing battle. forced multies but not a bad line, was nice

    This spick is a failure and puke, but f'real that avy is cute,
    but to be accurate, all thats missing is a sign and a box fulla fruit

    meh

    Take advantage of this league, so when reading lines from this geek
    Voters'll swear his disses are outta the Blue... Bayou archive this week

    used this concept already but was still nice

    Dead presidents represent me, and in stayin true to form kid
    ur lines aint current, see and are as old as the dudes that adorn it

    na

    I'll go overboard when I smash you, leave all of your family rattled
    like father, like son...ned, is what his daughter'll tell him regarding the battle

    nice

    in the deep water now,that cheating n biting'll leave this tard shanked
    so now voters sea world's of reasons that are makin this shark tank

    nice wordplay

    When seeing this battle on paper, im sure to be fading this faker
    too bad we cant hold a proper battle when all ur embracing is failure

    seemed weak

    This fag cant afford to lose while I'm known for bombing on bitches
    so the second he sees this reality check he'll head back n start on the dishes

    haha

    Nobody see's the genius in $pit, so when I'm busting this kid
    Ill remind him, great minds think alike... able verse from you doesnt exist

    nice

    People ask me to help him, I tried, but f'real this dude is the dumb type
    I'm like, yo $pit, try Grindtime, but the fool would just rub on my thigh

    lol'd, nice

    catching a loss, when it comes to ur edge ur losin it boss
    so when this battle turns heads, ur face just got too gruesome to watch

    lol not bad.


    the facts they fit. you ushered in the era of biting & lack of wit.
    president of wack. causing a campaign everytime they snap a pic

    not bad

    I'll be real. there was a time I thought you were tight with sick lines
    I remember clearly. it was that six month stretch when you bit mine

    pretty simple, nice personal though

    this time I'm clownin a bitch. get your mouth pounded & split
    I'm firing on all cylinders.. and you're about as round as it gets

    nice

    now I'm sealing it in stone, only the truest last forever.
    Im potent <-- and you just define those two words smashed together

    not feeling

    back to sever. once I drop you'll be reeling I'm wrecking thesis
    on the hunt for prey. n' my verse got you kneeling & begging Jesus

    not bad

    we've been thru alot.. I know you think we're close despite it.
    but I'm gonna write the dopest cyanide punch EVER & hope you bite it

    sick, liked this one

    bitch don't deny it. you graduated from a school of posers.
    you might have a dope phone but Atrix not gonna fool the voters.

    bleh

    yeah that's relevant. easy to see the fact's, you're so related
    I knew you were with At&t, cuz U-verse's wack and overrated

    not bad

    you're a liar & tool. throw you in the flames until the fire is full
    I don't know why you're fucking cows when you desirable

    lol

    you're not a man homie.. so I really doubt if you're stout.
    the only hair on your chest is what fell out of your scalp.

    LOL

    been trying to rap for years. your voice is sucking so stop
    here's a hint.. a tuning fork isn't for grubbing on slop

    lol

    your concepts suck. shouldn't have to decipher what they mean
    cuz ideal punches and right now you're looking like a fucking fiend

    not bad

    you tell us you never bit. always try & deceive dudes
    but the buzz is, what you must have if you think we believe you

    SICK

    true art is back. but the U.S. is broke, times are hard it's fact.
    good thing about the deficit means they can't hear your garbage rap

    wow... dope

    I'll put it bluntly. don't act brave. you're bitter & played
    it's that age old question, what came first? ..the Chrit or the Egg

    wording doesn't work for me, good idea though

    you suck at everything. even your day job testified you're weak.
    don't know if you commute, or I make you too petrified to speak

    nice

    I see you try & fool these writers. for now I'll prove he's biter
    someday my lines will be forgotten.. then all the sudden you'll be fire

    haha

    pumpin steroids, drinkin liquor. no wonder you sick & live a lie
    I hope keep abusing your body.. cuz no one cares if ya liver die.

    never heard this concept so i thought it was dope.




    Wow, closest battle I've read.. 40 fucking lines and most of em were good.

    Multies - Tie.. both were on point.
    Personals - Chrit. The daughter jokes edged it.
    Flow - I felt like $pit edged it out.
    Nameplay - Chrit, $pits attempts failed and Chrit hit with a few lines.
    Wordplay - $pit easily.
    Creativity - Tie.


    Really close..... $pit had the hottest lines, but less of them.. and Chrit really got em with the personals... it really is a toss up, but I think I'm going to have to give it to Chrit for his personals and consistency as I felt $pit fell off a few to many times in his verse.

    Really close battle, good job to both I know 40 lines aint easy!

    V-Chrit.

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1

    Spending Friday with us instead of ur kid, Im sure she's missing you badly
    atleast tomorrow she'll have Sat mourning, the messy death of her daddy
    It takes effort when bestin this cheat, in an effort to forget my fatigue
    against $pit I'll just flip him the bird, and he'll flip the rest of the league
    I'll go overboard when I smash you, leave all of your family rattled
    like father, like son...ned, is what his daughter'll tell him regarding the battle
    This fag cant afford to lose while I'm known for bombing on bitches
    so the second he sees this reality check he'll head back n start on the dishes
    People ask me to help him, I tried, but f'real this dude is the dumb type
    I'm like, yo $pit, try Grindtime, but the fool would just rub on my thigh


    v


    you're full of lies. "I never bit", "I never paid to win". yeah right.
    so you do 6 miles of cardio. but dog. you can't run away from your life
    I'll be real. there was a time I thought you were tight with sick lines
    I remember clearly. it was that six month stretch when you bit mine
    we've been thru alot.. I know you think we're close despite it.
    but I'm gonna write the dopest cyanide punch EVER & hope you bite it
    bitch don't deny it. you graduated from a school of posers.
    you might have a dope phone but Atrix not gonna fool the voters.
    your concepts suck. shouldn't have to decipher what they mean
    cuz ideal punches and right now you're looking like a fucking fiend
    you tell us you never bit. always try & deceive dudes
    but the buzz is, what you must have if you think we believe you
    I see you try & fool these writers. for now I'll prove he's biter
    someday my lines will be forgotten.. then all the sudden you'll be fire
    pumpin steroids, drinkin liquor. no wonder you sick & live a lie
    I hope keep abusing your body.. cuz no one cares if ya liver die

    dope battle here but i have spit taking this due to way more consistancy & harder hitting punches. chrit's personals were a lil a lacking and he kept taking shots @ his daughter which got old fast,both were really direct but again,spits wording lead to his advantage in this battle... & the whole swag/flow of his verse was way doper. v/spit due to more consistancy wit harder hitting bars..just a more enjoyable read imo.

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1

    F'real its not a surprise, how he got with that slut of a wife
    $pit's what every woman wishes for, a tiny pussy that aint had a job in its life
    ur daughter is needing friends, I aint talking about her eating when
    she always has a fruit by the foot, talking $pit outta leaving again
    Take advantage of this league, so when reading lines from this geek
    Voters'll swear his disses are outta the Blue... Bayou archive this week
    Dead presidents represent me, and in stayin true to form kid
    ur lines aint current, see and are as old as the dudes that adorn it
    in the deep water now,that cheating n biting'll leave this tard shanked
    so now voters sea world's of reasons that are makin this shark tank
    Nobody see's the genius in $pit, so when I'm busting this kid
    Ill remind him, great minds think alike... able verse from you doesnt exist
    catching a loss, when it comes to ur edge ur losin it boss
    so when this battle turns heads, ur face just got too gruesome to watch

    vs.

    the facts they fit. you ushered in the era of biting & lack of wit.
    president of wack. causing a campaign everytime they snap a pic
    I'll be real. there was a time I thought you were tight with sick lines
    I remember clearly. it was that six month stretch when you bit mine
    this time I'm clownin a bitch. get your mouth pounded & split
    I'm firing on all cylinders.. and you're about as round as it gets
    now I'm sealing it in stone, only the truest last forever.
    Im potent <-- and you just define those two words smashed together
    bitch don't deny it. you graduated from a school of posers.
    you might have a dope phone but Atrix not gonna fool the voters.
    you're not a man homie.. so I really doubt if you're stout.
    the only hair on your chest is what fell out of your scalp.
    true art is back. but the U.S. is broke, times are hard it's fact.
    good thing about the deficit means they can't hear your garbage rap
    you suck at everything. even your day job testified you're weak.
    don't know if you commute, or I make you too petrified to speak
    (shoulda said commuted or I made)
    I see you try & fool these writers. for now I'll prove he's biter
    someday my lines will be forgotten.. then all the sudden you'll be fire
    pumpin steroids, drinkin liquor. no wonder you sick & live a lie
    I hope keep abusing your body.. cuz no one cares if ya liver die.



    Chrit, nice drop. You had some really nice lines in there... I enjoyed reading your verse. I was however, disappointed that some of your lines were played. Some that I would have even quoted if they had been original. So that lost points for you.


    Spit, Bravo. Seriously, half your verse was quotable, literally & safely. There were even some I didn't quote that I was tempted to, but they lacked a little. Way to bring the heat, time for me to sharpen up my swag.

    Overall, I kind of wish you guys agreed to around 20 lines. I think it would have had a shot at the most current legend battle nominated, but with as many as you guys went there were just too many filler to decent lines. Great job to the both of you, keep the fire coming.

    Vote: Spit

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1

    F'real its not a surprise, how he got with that slut of a wife
    $pit's what every woman wishes for, a tiny pussy that aint had a job in its life
    ur daughter is needing friends, I aint talking about her eating when
    she always has a fruit by the foot, talking $pit outta leaving again
    Take advantage of this league, so when reading lines from this geek
    Voters'll swear his disses are outta the Blue... Bayou archive this week
    Dead presidents represent me, and in stayin true to form kid
    ur lines aint current, see and are as old as the dudes that adorn it
    in the deep water now,that cheating n biting'll leave this tard shanked
    so now voters sea world's of reasons that are makin this shark tank
    Nobody see's the genius in $pit, so when I'm busting this kid
    Ill remind him, great minds think alike... able verse from you doesnt exist
    catching a loss, when it comes to ur edge ur losin it boss
    so when this battle turns heads, ur face just got too gruesome to watch

    vs

    the facts they fit. you ushered in the era of biting & lack of wit.
    president of wack. causing a campaign everytime they snap a pic
    I'll be real. there was a time I thought you were tight with sick lines
    I remember clearly. it was that six month stretch when you bit mine
    this time I'm clownin a bitch. get your mouth pounded & split
    I'm firing on all cylinders.. and you're about as round as it gets
    now I'm sealing it in stone, only the truest last forever.
    Im potent <-- and you just define those two words smashed together
    bitch don't deny it. you graduated from a school of posers.
    you might have a dope phone but Atrix not gonna fool the voters.
    you're not a man homie.. so I really doubt if you're stout.
    the only hair on your chest is what fell out of your scalp.
    true art is back. but the U.S. is broke, times are hard it's fact.
    good thing about the deficit means they can't hear your garbage rap
    you suck at everything. even your day job testified you're weak.
    don't know if you commute, or I make you too petrified to speak
    pumpin steroids, drinkin liquor. no wonder you sick & live a lie
    I hope keep abusing your body.. cuz no one cares if ya liver die.



    This was a good read.....chrit-you came with some really good lines, but also a lot of played shit and some filler...which is why this would've been better if you guys went less than 40...spit-your wording as usual was pretty flawless, and most of the lines were executed very well.....you had some really sick shit such as the "firing on all cylinders" and "liver die"....like chrit, you also had some filler, but not nearly as much, and your verse was overall a lot more polished

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    Re: Champ: $pitacular1 6-0 Vs. Chrit. 6-1

    Ur feature in the mag was alright, but I cant say that you started off right
    you forgot your trademark step 1... find an idiom site or some archives
    lol alright
    The rest was preachy n trite, and a total waste of all of ur time
    hell, I almost applauded your concept nobody will fall for your lies
    nah this was weak
    If you think his gloatin is cool, Ill prove he's over the hill
    $pit loves starting in pole position, so he can smoke em at will
    this was okay
    This hoe'll get killed, for sure he'll be showing his best flips
    so we'll see $pit outrageous, n cuss out the league for voting against him
    ehhh
    Spending Friday with us instead of ur kid, Im sure she's missing you badly
    atleast tomorrow she'll have Sat mourning, the messy death of her daddy
    nah not digging it
    It takes effort when bestin this cheat, in an effort to forget my fatigue
    against $pit I'll just flip him the bird, and he'll flip the rest of the league
    that was ight, kinda played though
    Im quick when stunning this fake, I bet he cant keep up with the pace
    so it'll be a knee-jerk reaction as Im clinching n busting his face
    saw where it was going, but kinda fell short
    F'real its not a surprise, how he got with that slut of a wife
    $pit's what every woman wishes for, a tiny pussy that aint had a job in its life
    ehhh
    ur daughter is needing friends, I aint talking about her eating when
    she always has a fruit by the foot, talking $pit outta leaving again
    haha alright
    Ask about his green card status, Bet money that he'll just plead dumb
    so if we settle it like gents and fence, he'll just jump it n run for his freedom
    lmao nice
    This spick is a failure and puke, but f'real that avy is cute,
    but to be accurate, all thats missing is a sign and a box fulla fruit
    alright
    Take advantage of this league, so when reading lines from this geek
    Voters'll swear his disses are outta the Blue... Bayou archive this week
    heh, and what do you know blue signs up
    Dead presidents represent me, and in stayin true to form kid
    ur lines aint current, see and are as old as the dudes that adorn it
    could have been better
    I'll go overboard when I smash you, leave all of your family rattled
    like father, like son...ned, is what his daughter'll tell him regarding the battle
    okay
    in the deep water now,that cheating n biting'll leave this tard shanked
    so now voters sea world's of reasons that are makin this shark tank
    haha nice
    When seeing this battle on paper, im sure to be fading this faker
    too bad we cant hold a proper battle when all ur embracing is failure
    not digging it
    This fag cant afford to lose while I'm known for bombing on bitches
    so the second he sees this reality check he'll head back n start on the dishes
    lol alright
    Nobody see's the genius in $pit, so when I'm busting this kid
    Ill remind him, great minds think alike... able verse from you doesnt exist
    ehhh
    People ask me to help him, I tried, but f'real this dude is the dumb type
    I'm like, yo $pit, try Grindtime, but the fool would just rub on my thigh
    alright
    catching a loss, when it comes to ur edge ur losin it boss
    so when this battle turns heads, ur face just got too gruesome to watch
    no, seems filler ish

    vs.

    you're full of lies. "I never bit", "I never paid to win". yeah right.
    so you do 6 miles of cardio. but dog. you can't run away from your life
    haha nice
    the facts they fit. you ushered in the era of biting & lack of wit.
    president of wack. causing a campaign everytime they snap a pic
    haha decentish
    I'll be real. there was a time I thought you were tight with sick lines
    I remember clearly. it was that six month stretch when you bit mine
    haha even though its gloat nice
    this time I'm clownin a bitch. get your mouth pounded & split
    I'm firing on all cylinders.. and you're about as round as it gets
    lmao
    now I'm sealing it in stone, only the truest last forever.
    Im potent <-- and you just define those two words smashed together
    alright
    back to sever. once I drop you'll be reeling I'm wrecking thesis
    on the hunt for prey. n' my verse got you kneeling & begging Jesus
    ehhh
    we've been thru alot.. I know you think we're close despite it.
    but I'm gonna write the dopest cyanide punch EVER & hope you bite it
    its alright
    bitch don't deny it. you graduated from a school of posers.
    you might have a dope phone but Atrix not gonna fool the voters.
    haha alright
    yeah that's relevant. easy to see the fact's, you're so related
    I knew you were with At&t, cuz U-verse's wack and overrated
    kinda of off a bit
    you're a liar & tool. throw you in the flames until the fire is full
    I don't know why you're fucking cows when you desirable
    lol okay
    you're not a man homie.. so I really doubt if you're stout.
    the only hair on your chest is what fell out of your scalp.
    LMFAO
    been trying to rap for years. your voice is sucking so stop
    here's a hint.. a tuning fork isn't for grubbing on slop
    cool
    your concepts suck. shouldn't have to decipher what they mean
    cuz ideal punches and right now you're looking like a fucking fiend
    ehhh
    you tell us you never bit. always try & deceive dudes
    but the buzz is, what you must have if you think we believe you
    this was cool nice
    true art is back. but the U.S. is broke, times are hard it's fact.
    good thing about the deficit means they can't hear your garbage rap
    okayish
    I'll put it bluntly. don't act brave. you're bitter & played
    it's that age old question, what came first? ..the Chrit or the Egg
    nah
    you suck at everything. even your day job testified you're weak.
    don't know if you commute, or I make you too petrified to speak
    okay
    I see you try & fool these writers. for now I'll prove he's biter
    someday my lines will be forgotten.. then all the sudden you'll be fire
    alright
    pumpin steroids, drinkin liquor. no wonder you sick & live a lie
    I hope keep abusing your body.. cuz no one cares if ya liver die
    kinda weak wp

    Overall this was a dope battle, both you guys came with the heat and i felt like chrits verse really didnt get rolling till the end and was kind of up and down. Sopt i felt came more consistent and i felt had the more creatvie verse

    Vote: Spit

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