Feed Please: Traj Exclusive (Promo Track)

[ShaDoWLesS]

im feeling this man good flow, vocally the mixin is sick!!!! beat its nice and chilled well put together..
good little peak to see whats coming fam

(must start making rishi the track he wanted lol )

Thanks man, appreciate the bump!

The beat is real chill and mellow, I didn't expect the type of delivery you went with on this, but this is cool. I think the hook could use some post work, layers, some delay and pan work. You know, just to give it a full feel to better compliment the beat. Lyrics are nice, and you can obviously rap, so Im looking at this from a production stand point. Like I said, work on the hook, give it a little more attention. Fatten it up with some high to low vox back ups. Keep the hustle up.

Thanks for the mini review man, much appreciated! This was just some quick promo shit I basically wrote on the spot, so wait until the album comes out later this year!

Great Beat on some get high and zone Intro is way too long nuff people will never get to the lyrics. Some crazy flow on this Really gives me a 90's MC style of flow. Nice track

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I would really love to hear back from you and believe that a colabo would be mutually and musically beneficial for both of us

Thanks for listening homie, and yeah I'll get at you about this collab, deff was feeling that video you posted so will be in touch.

i guess...

http://www.lostthoughts909.blogspot.com

Any feedback on the track man?

[L.E]

Feeling the beat nice and laid back I'm digging it. Blaze a blunt to this shit.

Flow comes in pretty nicely. Lyrics are pretty sick. Delivery was kind of energy-less at times, could use some more energy here and there. But the voice was good.

Hook was pretty straight. Could have had more dubs maybe to make it stick out better.

Pretty decent man, for sure.

Keep it up.

[Drunken Monk]

yeaaa love it!
what stuff do u use¿?

[Aversie]

damn this beat is chill!
Flow & delivery is dope.

dope track

keep it up

pz

[Rishi P]

Bumping this for my homie spitting on this and for my cousin in London producing this banger

Stop sleeeeeeeeeeping

[ShaDoWLesS]

Feeling the beat nice and laid back I'm digging it. Blaze a blunt to this shit.

Flow comes in pretty nicely. Lyrics are pretty sick. Delivery was kind of energy-less at times, could use some more energy here and there. But the voice was good.

Hook was pretty straight. Could have had more dubs maybe to make it stick out better.

Pretty decent man, for sure.

Keep it up.

Thanks for the bump man, and hell yeah blaze a blunt to this! Hahah

yeaaa love it!
what stuff do u use¿?

Thanks man, I use a Tascam US 122 (usb) Interface, a vocal booth and a Neumann tlm 103 mic

damn this beat is chill!
Flow & delivery is dope.

dope track

keep it up

pz

Thanks man!

Bumping this for my homie spitting on this and for my cousin in London producing this banger

Stop sleeeeeeeeeeping

Thanks menk

Those who didn't hit me back yet, get at me! Those who already did, hit this homies!

[Big Question]

beats hot. qualitys good. feelin your flow on this, i like the delivery...chorus does need more to it, like someone else said...

overall this is nice man, keep it up

[Rishi P]

liek she said in that track she did "Outer Space"....."bringin hiphop from the 90s back to the 2010s"

that what it izzzzzzzz

[J-min]

bumping this up mayne

also hit my link shad and rishi

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...362/index.html

[Blackflags]

I felt this was good enough for SoTW man. That other kid got banned for voting for himself on like 6 accounts, so I revoked his privilege to have a Showcase. Wasn't the mod before so I couldn't hand it out, but Congrats, I felt you had the Showcase for the week.

[Rishi P]

yo congrats on SOTW homie! its our fuckin year mang.....year of the motherfuckin albums....RB better be ready lol......glad ppl finally noticing my homies talent....and no I am not dick riding just the truth even tho I know homie personally we been putting in work this year

trying to keep HIP HOP ALIVE YOOOOO

Edit - somoene get this man his medal!

and LOL at the other dude voting for himself 6 times.....was it that kid with that "I'm Gone" track cuz thats a shame....that track was pretty good

[Possible]

Congrats on the award.

I like the laid back feeling. Just spittin some real shit. I actually feel like not much more should be added to the hook because if it was changed it would take away from that feeling that you were trying to achieve here, just my opinion. props on the song from lyrics to production..

[Cody Nash]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...529/index.html
^^^NEW TRACK PEEP MEH "Apolitical World"




This is sick dude... laid back shit. Really gritty feel to the track. I enjoy it. Lyrically this is bodyin' a lot of cats. I enjoyed this. "stimulate my brain sensors.. sensory pleasures" and "revolution erupts, now they outta luck" some pretty good words here man.. imo it sounds clean as hell and the hook isn't too much or too little.. but that's from a listeners standpoint so take what you will from it. Good drop... thanks.

[ShaDoWLesS]

beats hot. qualitys good. feelin your flow on this, i like the delivery...chorus does need more to it, like someone else said...

overall this is nice man, keep it up

Thanks for the feedback man, much appreciated. I agree chorus could have had another layer but it was a promo track so the verses I focused more on, finishing up writing the album this month, next month recording, so I got some dope songs up my sleeve :hung:

bumping this up mayne

also hit my link shad and rishi

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...362/index.html

Thanks for the bump man, I got you tomorrow night...

I felt this was good enough for SoTW man. That other kid got banned for voting for himself on like 6 accounts, so I revoked his privilege to have a Showcase. Wasn't the mod before so I couldn't hand it out, but Congrats, I felt you had the Showcase for the week.

Yo man, props for this, very very much appreciated dude!

Congrats on the award.

I like the laid back feeling. Just spittin some real shit. I actually feel like not much more should be added to the hook because if it was changed it would take away from that feeling that you were trying to achieve here, just my opinion. props on the song from lyrics to production..

Thanks homie! Yeah the hook was pretty much a "promo" kinda hook, just to let ppl know what I'm doing. Appreciate the feed man.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...529/index.html
^^^NEW TRACK PEEP MEH "Apolitical World"




This is sick dude... laid back shit. Really gritty feel to the track. I enjoy it. Lyrically this is bodyin' a lot of cats. I enjoyed this. "stimulate my brain sensors.. sensory pleasures" and "revolution erupts, now they outta luck" some pretty good words here man.. imo it sounds clean as hell and the hook isn't too much or too little.. but that's from a listeners standpoint so take what you will from it. Good drop... thanks.

Thanks for the feedback man! Appreciate the kind words, deff peep the album when it comes out, like I said got some real bangers on there, recording for it starting the end of May, so hopefully an early fall/late summer release.

yo congrats on SOTW homie! its our fuckin year mang.....year of the motherfuckin albums....RB better be ready lol......glad ppl finally noticing my homies talent....and no I am not dick riding just the truth even tho I know homie personally we been putting in work this year

trying to keep HIP HOP ALIVE YOOOOO

Edit - somoene get this man his medal!

and LOL at the other dude voting for himself 6 times.....was it that kid with that "I'm Gone" track cuz thats a shame....that track was pretty good

YEAR OF THE MUTHAFUCKIN ALBUMS MAN!!!!!!!!

[Art.]

ahh it started slow to mee, but it grew on me , cool flow voice is decent i do like the beat also... the lyrics are pretty ill some points of the flow i didnt like though not gonna lie, but it had a cool rhyme scheme ... good job i like it.