Shunned1 3-2 Vs. TayTay 2-1 (wins)

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 7

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
Must Leave 4 links to the battles you voted on in this thread somewhere. I'm not going to search for your votes. Failing to vote will result in -2 votes for every missing link.

[Shunned1]

check

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...042/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...040/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...136/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...030/index.html

[TayTay]

i voted on 4 battles. the ones that were 10 lines lol

[Shunned1]

strangled w/ a bling chain, there'll no resurrection when I beat this bitch,
see me bringin T-pain, and I'm not talkin about that freaknik shit.
your concepts old & weak, w/ ease heart attacks strike this gay whore,
only elizabeth comes to mind, when you get me thinkin of some tay-lore.
i'll send divine sparks, that cause this cheerleader to break into seizures,
Tay wont have any spirit left, it all got spent on the fag's shakin fingers.
I key a verse in which savage bites land precise on target,
while he's tryin.....
.......to worm his way out of this, like dog ass draggin on the carpet.
cheer up, after I murk you, i'll let you take a photo with me,
i'll be raisin this kids head up, like I was part of that army "kill team".

10.

[TayTay]

I don't need to try, everyone overlooks ur verse bro get the message
lets face it homie even Dwight Howard couldn't give ur post presence
you beat me via no show years ago, stop bragging and leave it alone
cuz if hes got my number, he must of been going thru his girls phone
all your wins are by no-show,ur real opponents have slaughtered' ya
when he saw this matchup he was asking for a pass like hall monitors
your verses are all lies while everything i say is factual and just right
people believe in my verses,...
...while they have a hard time believing what u write
whose better faggot? me or u is something pple wouldnt debate bitch
cuz u winning is such a long shot, even jimmer fredette wouldnt take it

[Raydeoh]

strangled w/ a bling chain, there'll no resurrection when I beat this bitch,
see me bringin T-pain, and I'm not talkin about that freaknik shit.
Played.. not that great of a punch either
your concepts old & weak, w/ ease heart attacks strike this gay whore,
only elizabeth comes to mind, when you get me thinkin of some tay-lore.
Not feelin
i'll send divine sparks, that cause this cheerleader to break into seizures,
Tay wont have any spirit left, it all got spent on the fag's shakin fingers.
Ok
I key a verse in which savage bites land precise on target,
while he's tryin.....
.......to worm his way out of this, like dog ass draggin on the carpet.
I guess
cheer up, after I murk you, i'll let you take a photo with me,
i'll be raisin this kids head up, like I was part of that army "kill team".
Nah

vs

I don't need to try, everyone overlooks ur verse bro get the message
lets face it homie even Dwight Howard couldn't give ur post presence
Decent
you beat me via no show years ago, stop bragging and leave it alone
cuz if hes got my number, he must of been going thru his girls phone
Ok
all your wins are by no-show,ur real opponents have slaughtered' ya
when he saw this matchup he was asking for a pass like hall monitors
Nah
your verses are all lies while everything i say is factual and just right
people believe in my verses,...
...while they have a hard time believing what u write
Nah
whose better faggot? me or u is something pple wouldnt debate bitch
cuz u winning is such a long shot, even jimmer fredette wouldnt take it
Ok

Tay's opener won this

Vote: Tay

[$pitacular]

strangled w/ a bling chain, there'll no resurrection when I beat this bitch,
see me bringin T-pain, and I'm not talkin about that freaknik shit.
too obvious IMO. As soon as I see "T-pain" I already knewwhere you were headed
your concepts old & weak, w/ ease heart attacks strike this gay whore,
only elizabeth comes to mind, when you get me thinkin of some tay-lore.
weak attempt at a wordplay, it just didn't seem insulting or clever
i'll send divine sparks, that cause this cheerleader to break into seizures,
Tay wont have any spirit left, it all got spent on the fag's shakin fingers.
kind of a cool concept, except the execution ruined the impact.
I key a verse in which savage bites land precise on target,
while he's tryin.....
.......to worm his way out of this, like dog ass draggin on the carpet.
[/B]lmao, no. how is a dog dragging its ass across carpet related to trying to "worm your way out" of something? Nah [/B]
cheer up, after I murk you, i'll let you take a photo with me,
i'll be raisin this kids head up, like I was part of that army "kill team".
wasn't feeling this.

Vs

I don't need to try, everyone overlooks ur verse bro get the message
lets face it homie even Dwight Howard couldn't give ur post presence
wasn't feeling this as an opener or a concept
you beat me via no show years ago, stop bragging and leave it alone
cuz if hes got my number, he must of been going thru his girls phone
I've seen quite a few got/number punches but not this one, so ok. Delivery was weak tho
all your wins are by no-show,ur real opponents have slaughtered' ya
when he saw this matchup he was asking for a pass like hall monitors
hall monitors don't ask for passes that way. If anything they make your show a pass - but you're saying he's asking to get a pass - so no, not what hall monitors do. Didn't hit
your verses are all lies while everything i say is factual and just right
people believe in my verses,...
...while they have a hard time believing what u write
you rhymed right and write. And had no concept or punch
whose better faggot? me or u is something pple wouldnt debate bitch
cuz u winning is such a long shot, even jimmer fredette wouldnt take it
don't know who that is so not hitting for me


this ones very close because neither really came with any fresh punches. I guess I'm going to go with Shunned because even tho he tried to pass off that dog dragging his ass/worm out punch, Tays hall pass punch was just so off to me. Plus Shunned had some direct hits even if they were predictable

Close battle tho

V/ Shunned1

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[TayTay]

www.google.com

[$pitacular]

lol.

[Tim]

strangled w/ a bling chain, there'll no resurrection when I beat this bitch,
see me bringin T-pain, and I'm not talkin about that freaknik shit.
ehhhh its ight
your concepts old & weak, w/ ease heart attacks strike this gay whore,
only elizabeth comes to mind, when you get me thinkin of some tay-lore.
nah
i'll send divine sparks, that cause this cheerleader to break into seizures,
Tay wont have any spirit left, it all got spent on the fag's shakin fingers.
ight
I key a verse in which savage bites land precise on target,
while he's tryin.....
.......to worm his way out of this, like dog ass draggin on the carpet.
so-so
cheer up, after I murk you, i'll let you take a photo with me,
i'll be raisin this kids head up, like I was part of that army "kill team".
weak

vs

I don't need to try, everyone overlooks ur verse bro get the message
lets face it homie even Dwight Howard couldn't give ur post presence
alright
you beat me via no show years ago, stop bragging and leave it alone
cuz if hes got my number, he must of been going thru his girls phone
cool
all your wins are by no-show,ur real opponents have slaughtered' ya
when he saw this matchup he was asking for a pass like hall monitors
ehhhh.
your verses are all lies while everything i say is factual and just right
people believe in my verses,...
...while they have a hard time believing what u write
nope
whose better faggot? me or u is something pple wouldnt debate bitch
cuz u winning is such a long shot, even jimmer fredette wouldnt take it
ight

I felt like TayTay came better and more consistant then shunned1

vote.TayTay