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    Re: 30 days of Kon

    XII.

    Bloody inside, black and tempurpedic.
    death swallowed her whole;
    and her soul remained imprinted
    on that dumb fucking mattress.
    the one that she made me buy,
    the one that I didn't want to try.

    but now that she's gone, it's the
    only way I can remember her body,
    the way it curved and fit into mine.
    incredible.

    still awe struck
    stuck in awe.

    holy shit.

    it hits me, everytime
    my useless head hits that
    pillow. the eighty dollar pillows
    we just had to have.
    because they matched.

    but when there's just 1 pillow,
    it's not longer a match.
    it's lonely.
    the night still sets,
    and the sun still rises.

    but the day goes so much slower
    without you to pass the time
    with.

    i guess things happen for a reason,
    and eventually i'll throw out the mattress.

    but; until then.
    i guess i'm sleeping with my misery.


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    Re: 30 days of Kon

    XIII.

    If I apologzied,
    would it matter?
    it wouldn't change anything.

    it wouldn't change the
    number of nights
    when I stumbled home,
    incoherent, too loud
    and obnoxious.
    the love hasn't changed,
    but maybe the feeilngs have.

    I'm out of fuel here..

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    Re: 30 days of Kon

    Aww Kon. These last two made me want to give you a hug.

    More like a glimpse into a diary with a poetic twist, I've found these 30 day threads force you to dig into feelings that have been simmering below the surface and they tend to become much more personal than when writing with a given topic or for a league. Both 12 and 13 were so honest and I appreciate that above all else in writing.

    Loved this:

    her soul remained imprinted
    on that dumb fucking mattress.
    the one that she made me buy,
    the one that I didn't want to try.

    but now that she's gone, it's the
    only way I can remember her body,
    the way it curved and fit into mine.
    incredible.
    because that sentiment hits so close to home. Sometimes absence feels more heavy than presence.
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    Re: 30 days of Kon

    XIV.

    all of the lights, blend
    together in unity;
    blinded by stage fright.

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    Re: 30 days of Kon

    XV.


    Who do I listen to?
    the voices that are most familiar..
    or the ones that
    tempt me with pleasure.

    I guess it's a one way street,
    but my direction
    is completely misguided.
    I don't know which way to turn.


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    Re: 30 days of Kon

    XVI.



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    Re: 30 days of Kon

    XVII.

    the perfume I bought you
    still lingers around the air.
    and I honestly
    want the stinch to go away.
    I don't want anymore
    memories of you.
    I burned all the pictures,
    (not really)
    and I deleted all our videos.
    (lying, again)
    but I want to feel better,
    I want to feel whole,
    I want you to give back
    what you took when you walked out the door.

    my heart.
    it wants to heal,
    but you're not helping.
    everytime you call,
    crying.
    I just want to break down,
    cave in and take you back.

    But I can't.
    the deceiving,
    lying,
    cheating,
    has broke me into pieces
    of a puzzle.
    and there will always be
    1 piece missing.

    like that 1 annoying puzzle
    that is impossible to put together.
    but you keep searching
    for that 1 piece,
    and when you can't find it.
    you just...give up.

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