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    Picture Perfect 12

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    Re: Picture Perfect 12

    you filthy whore, that's my avy?!!?!
    jk
    can I kick it?

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    Re: Picture Perfect 12

    She was/ is open to everything,
    everyone, everywhere.
    hard to approach;
    easy to obtain.

    She doesn't/ won't speak with words,
    just condescending actions.
    like bearing the bad news
    with uncrossed legs.

    She either will/ won't be back
    that is, if she ever leaves.
    if she ever closes the windows,
    locks the door and calls it a night.

    I doubt she'll give/ take it away
    she's much too indecisive,
    all these options and she's yet
    to choose the portal to "home"

    I refuse/ hate to be the one
    for the monster
    she's become. I don't want
    her to see the rising sun.
    our-son.

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    Re: Picture Perfect 12

    Primal Scream

    Catacomb Cathy,
    this woman is a tomb.
    Echoing voices
    leaking out through pores
    into rivulets of reminders
    running into her corners.
    Doors that open to empty rooms
    filled with the ghosts
    of those who've left.

    She splits herself
    like hairs,
    victimology collected
    at the nape of the neck,
    a noose to hang herself
    on her own separation anxieties.

    We fill the holes of absence
    with regret,
    collecting memories into boxes
    to remind us
    we were once whole.
    Hoarding shards of glass
    from former reflections
    that prick from beneath the skin.

    What sins are locked behind her doors?
    What faces haunt
    her midnight hours?
    Their portraits drip heavy with tears
    until watery paint
    clouds her eyes.

    And as she feels the emptiness
    crawling inside,
    is it any surprise
    when she screams?
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