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    Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    just a verse... cryptic wisdom on the chorus.

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    you mixing sounds a little off. like theres a little too much bass. not sure what it is

    you ever heard of grieves? if not check him out hes dope. you remind me a lot of him

    flow is on point, doesn't switch up but it works out

    nice track man keep it up

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    thanks

    it's so strange, it wasn't this "bass-heavy" on my monitors/headphones.. I'll be sure to EQ it again for the final version

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    *elevator music*

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    cool hook, liked the beat, u have some good lyrics, flow was pretty good, delivery as well, nice ish, could have another verse in it

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    love this beat
    flowed nice on it

    coo vibe overall

    Slick drop



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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    First off the beat is really awesome. The chorus fits great, and It sounds really good too. The lyrics to the verse are decently good, but the mixing of the vocals in the verse is pretty bad. It sounds muddy and its just not very good sounding. Your delivery is good and everything else is great. The main thing i could recomend is just that mixing.

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    Beat is sick, and i like the hook, make the mixing of the vocals a lil cleary and less muddy and its on point. gg bro.

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    thanks fellas

    i agree with everyone on the "muddiness" of the vocals..

    i re-mixed the vocals a bit, and i am uploading it right now.

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    Hook sounds good right off the bat for sure.

    Flow is pretty decent, mixing sounds a bit on the hi end to me haha.

    Delivery could maybe have a bit more energetic but it was good over all.

    Whoa it was mad short though.

    Definitely could be longer but pretty solid over all man.

    Keep it up.



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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    not feeling the delivery, content was raw tho, vocals do sound a little muddy, tight flow, hook was interesting, good start maybe finish up with a 2nd verse & raise the mids on the vocals (also maybe drop the lows?)

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    peepin

    this remind me of that saigon joint bring me down part II, but a lil different, flow is good, delivery is good but could be upped because it stays the same all the way throughout, i can see the appeal on this track its mad short but you know i think you got more to it just you jus want us to hear the first verse..but word keep working on it, it needs remixing, the vocals do sound too muddy..but this got potential no doubt

    yo can you rtf please

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    cool voice, flow is nice, alott of people have trouble cause of their voice but this dope mixing is a lil off, just check on several sources before u finalize it. other then that good shit man.

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    thank you

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    Re: Never Enough f. Cryptic Wisdom (leave links!)

    this hook is sick brah

    flow was tight and the delivery was strong

    beat was hard definitely complemented the vocals
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