Chrit. 4-0 Vs. $pitacular1 3-0 (wins)

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 5

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

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[Chrit.]

In.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...304/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...312/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...302/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...311/index.html

[Chrit.]

Teach you a lesson, when it comes to money this faggot is stressin
since whenever we see $pit shine its shoes in his daily profession
Never been in the ABL, your audio is more than a reach son
And for the record... we'd bet our lives you never release one
You aint bombin folk, nor have you ever been jockin hoes
this dude's crib's a no fly zone rivaling Gadhafi's home
$pit's game with the ladies is thrivin, but we're hopin ur fetish is private
you can't hit the broad side of a barn, so you enjoy the livestock inside it
Now days ur a trite hoe, and though we used to be tight bro
now spittin image of me, with less talent that bites more
Duke'll get rattled, talk tough n ur jaw'll get shattered
best believe your ego tripping... falling, and running in fear of this battle
Muhfucka, you arent live, so if ur ever spitting them harsh lines
its when you rep that Philly style, n lines straight outta his archive
a proven liar and cheat, if you ever think ur the best mayne
Ill be real n admit you got a bad rap... reputation, and text game

[$pitacular]

2 Weeks ago:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=zone+no%20fly


stupid fuck. I can't believe you even step with the nonsense
I'm at a loss for words. which basically means you're fresh out of concepts
have to admit, first I was impressed. you came steady with jabs
your execution was flawless. one clean slice I put your head in a bag
we used to talk on myspace. now I'm smackin ya. I'ma end this.
I know the truth, don't lie. I seen Dracula on your friends list
don't surprise me you piece your verse from other's partial bars.
it's just a habit that you picked up always mixing martial arts.
you shoulda never stepped to me. bitch I'm snapping knees
& you're about to have a fucking fallout like you're Japanese
you've known me since I started. & it's true I was nervous
I mean there's a lot of history, you search through for your verses
you're done wit. watch you fold I bring it son I'ma stunt it.
I'm on a roll that rivals every single one on your stomach
you've had some impressive runs. theres nothing I can say with it
everytime you brought the fire, I can't believe you got away with it

but not this time.

bye.

[Tae]

The misdirection was cool on the opener but i aint like the end of the bar, good opener. The second bar was aight, a little predictable. Im pretty sure Spit had a much better flip on the no fly/ghadaffi line earlier. The barn line was funny. The spittin image line didnt rhyme, u shuda typed it how u meant it. People'll prolly quote the ego trippin line but that style a' bar has been done so many times i think it shud be better here. The philly bar and closer were both ok but i feel the same way as the ego trippin line. Every bar hit except that no fly, had good two bars, aight verse.

Im guessin the opener was for the no fly zone line in chrits verse, good ass flip, funny as hell. the clean slice line was aight. The dracula line didnt seem like much, idk. The martial arts line wasnt really good to me either. The history bar was dope. Nah i aint like the stomach bar man. the closer was ok to me.

Ok verse, didnt really like the end and sum just didnt hit for me.

Didnt really like either verse here, bars were well executed but nothing was really funny or creative to me. After i read Chrit's verse, thought i was goin vote Spit especially after that first bar but imma have say V/Chrit.

[TayTay]

Teach you a lesson, when it comes to money this faggot is stressin
since whenever we see $pit shine its shoes in his daily profession
cool opener
Never been in the ABL, your audio is more than a reach son
And for the record... we'd bet our lives you never release one
played stuff here
You aint bombin folk, nor have you ever been jockin hoes
this dude's crib's a no fly zone rivaling Gadhafi's home
pretty cool
$pit's game with the ladies is thrivin, but we're hopin ur fetish is private
you can't hit the broad side of a barn, so you enjoy the livestock inside it
lol nice
Now days ur a trite hoe, and though we used to be tight bro
now spittin image of me, with less talent that bites more
nah not feeling
Duke'll get rattled, talk tough n ur jaw'll get shattered
best believe your ego tripping... falling, and running in fear of this battle
not feeling this either
Muhfucka, you arent live, so if ur ever spitting them harsh lines
its when you rep that Philly style, n lines straight outta his archive
alright
a proven liar and cheat, if you ever think ur the best mayne
Ill be real n admit you got a bad rap... reputation, and text game
cool closer

vs

stupid fuck. I can't believe you even step with the nonsense
I'm at a loss for words. which basically means you're fresh out of concepts
real nice opener/hard hitting
have to admit, first I was impressed. you came steady with jabs
your execution was flawless. one clean slice I put your head in a bag
mehhh
we used to talk on myspace. now I'm smackin ya. I'ma end this.
I know the truth, don't lie. I seen Dracula on your friends list
ummmmm?
don't surprise me you piece your verse from other's partial bars.
it's just a habit that you picked up always mixing martial arts.
lol cool
you shoulda never stepped to me. bitch I'm snapping knees
& you're about to have a fucking fallout like you're Japanese
ehhh, played concept lately
you've known me since I started. & it's true I was nervous
I mean there's a lot of history, you search through for your verses
LOL cool flip
you're done wit. watch you fold I bring it son I'ma stunt it.
I'm on a roll that rivals every single one on your stomach
lol funny
you've had some impressive runs. theres nothing I can say with it
everytime you brought the fire, I can't believe you got away with it
lol funny and clever

I thought chrits quotes were creative and funny, while on the other hard Spits were hard hitting direct and sometimes personal. although you both had some ncie stuff i vote for Spit cuz i liked his personals more than chrits clever lines

[Orc]

Teach you a lesson, when it comes to money this faggot is stressin
since whenever we see $pit shine its shoes in his daily profession

i used the np on him last yr, so nah

Never been in the ABL, your audio is more than a reach son
And for the record... we'd bet our lives you never release one

jesus playd

You aint bombin folk, nor have you ever been jockin hoes
this dude's crib's a no fly zone rivaling Gadhafi's home

spit used this, lol

$pit's game with the ladies is thrivin, but we're hopin ur fetish is private
you can't hit the broad side of a barn, so you enjoy the livestock inside it

played cliche, ok flip

Now days ur a trite hoe, and though we used to be tight bro
now spittin image of me, with less talent that bites more

not feeling

Duke'll get rattled, talk tough n ur jaw'll get shattered
best believe your ego tripping... falling, and running in fear of this battle

terrible

Muhfucka, you arent live, so if ur ever spitting them harsh lines
its when you rep that Philly style, n lines straight outta his archive

better line, prob been done before

a proven liar and cheat, if you ever think ur the best mayne
Ill be real n admit you got a bad rap... reputation, and text game

cool misdirection

vs

stupid fuck. I can't believe you even step with the nonsense
I'm at a loss for words. which basically means you're fresh out of concepts

lmaoo, feeding. but, funny

have to admit, first I was impressed. you came steady with jabs
your execution was flawless. one clean slice I put your head in a bag

is this recycled?

we used to talk on myspace. now I'm smackin ya. I'ma end this.
I know the truth, don't lie. I seen Dracula on your friends list

swag was ok line overall not too hot

don't surprise me you piece your verse from other's partial bars.
it's just a habit that you picked up always mixing martial arts.

haha cool flip

you shoulda never stepped to me. bitch I'm snapping knees
& you're about to have a fucking fallout like you're Japanese

cool again

you've known me since I started. & it's true I was nervous
I mean there's a lot of history, you search through for your verses

good misdirection, i dug it

you're done wit. watch you fold I bring it son I'ma stunt it.
I'm on a roll that rivals every single one on your stomach

played

you've had some impressive runs. theres nothing I can say with it
everytime you brought the fire, I can't believe you got away with it

okayish



v/ spit, less played. more creative. less statementish, hit harder. better personals. more consistent. overall way better verse than chrits.

[Wordz AhGod.]

$pit's game with the ladies is thrivin, but we're hopin ur fetish is private
you can't hit the broad side of a barn, so you enjoy the livestock inside it
seen flips on this but it was still dope.
Duke'll get rattled, talk tough n ur jaw'll get shattered
best believe your ego tripping... falling, and running in fear of this battle
cool, seen this before too but not a bad flip

vs

stupid fuck. I can't believe you even step with the nonsense
I'm at a loss for words. which basically means you're fresh out of concepts
have to admit, first I was impressed. you came steady with jabs
your execution was flawless. one clean slice I put your head in a bag
both dope lines
you've known me since I started. & it's true I was nervous
I mean there's a lot of history, you search through for your verses
biter jokes never get old..

seemed to be more one-sided then I originally thought it would be.. $pit just came out with fresher concepts and better wording..

v/$pit

[Shunned1]

$pit's game with the ladies is thrivin, but we're hopin ur fetish is private
you can't hit the broad side of a barn, so you enjoy the livestock inside it
Muhfucka, you arent live, so if ur ever spitting them harsh lines
its when you rep that Philly style, n lines straight outta his archive
a proven liar and cheat, if you ever think ur the best mayne
Ill be real n admit you got a bad rap... reputation, and text game


vs

stupid fuck. I can't believe you even step with the nonsense
I'm at a loss for words. which basically means you're fresh out of concepts
have to admit, first I was impressed. you came steady with jabs
your execution was flawless. one clean slice I put your head in a bag
don't surprise me you piece your verse from other's partial bars.
it's just a habit that you picked up always mixing martial arts.
you've known me since I started. & it's true I was nervous
I mean there's a lot of history, you search through for your verses
you're done wit. watch you fold I bring it son I'ma stunt it.
I'm on a roll that rivals every single one on your stomach

solid verses from both here. but I was feeling spit's more. I liked his concepts, and it had more of the funny factor to it. cool battle.

V/ spit

[H.McCoy]

Muhfucka, you arent live, so if ur ever spitting them harsh lines
its when you rep that Philly style, n lines straight outta his archive
a proven liar and cheat, if you ever think ur the best mayne
Ill be real n admit you got a bad rap... reputation, and text game


v


stupid fuck. I can't believe you even step with the nonsense
I'm at a loss for words. which basically means you're fresh out of concepts
you shoulda never stepped to me. bitch I'm snapping knees
& you're about to have a fucking fallout like you're Japanese
you've known me since I started. & it's true I was nervous
I mean there's a lot of history, you search through for your verses

v spit,good battle but spit just had the harder hitters.

[Supernat]

stupid fuck. I can't believe you even step with the nonsense
I'm at a loss for words. which basically means you're fresh out of concepts
have to admit, first I was impressed. you came steady with jabs
your execution was flawless. one clean slice I put your head in a bag
you've known me since I started. & it's true I was nervous
I mean there's a lot of history, you search through for your verses

vs


Teach you a lesson, when it comes to money this faggot is stressin
since whenever we see $pit shine its shoes in his daily profession
$pit's game with the ladies is thrivin, but we're hopin ur fetish is private
you can't hit the broad side of a barn, so you enjoy the livestock inside it
a proven liar and cheat, if you ever think ur the best mayne
Ill be real n admit you got a bad rap... reputation, and text game

Well i have this tied in quote`s but if i was to pick the line of the battle i`d say the livestock line gets it, but both did good here, enjoyable read but i`m giving it to chrit for that livestock line.

vote - Chrit

[$pitacular]

votes...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...311/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...302/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...312/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...304/index.html

[Untold.]

Teach you a lesson, when it comes to money this faggot is stressin
since whenever we see $pit shine its shoes in his daily profession
..this was done already, by barcotic. and it was better when he did it..
Never been in the ABL, your audio is more than a reach son
And for the record... we'd bet our lives you never release one
..i've done a punch like this, years ago. it was an aight flip but nothing too special..
You aint bombin folk, nor have you ever been jockin hoes
this dude's crib's a no fly zone rivaling Gadhafi's home
..man, $pit used this same concept on me, what, 2 weeks ago. sorry homie, but play'd/on the verge of being bitten..
$pit's game with the ladies is thrivin, but we're hopin ur fetish is private
you can't hit the broad side of a barn, so you enjoy the livestock inside it
..u know. i've seen similar punches like this, but you executed this one well..
Now days ur a trite hoe, and though we used to be tight bro
now spittin image of me, with less talent that bites more
..this barely rhymed and u dissed yourself here. i dunno, didn't really hit for me..
Duke'll get rattled, talk tough n ur jaw'll get shattered
best believe your ego tripping... falling, and running in fear of this battle
..not a bad flip. this made me chuckle a bit..
Muhfucka, you arent live, so if ur ever spitting them harsh lines
its when you rep that Philly style, n lines straight outta his archive
..good personal. pretty cool..
a proven liar and cheat, if you ever think ur the best mayne
Ill be real n admit you got a bad rap... reputation, and text game
..another decent flip. i like the way u executed it at the end..

vs.

stupid fuck. I can't believe you even step with the nonsense
I'm at a loss for words. which basically means you're fresh out of concepts
..decent opener. cool personal..
have to admit, first I was impressed. you came steady with jabs
your execution was flawless. one clean slice I put your head in a bag
..no sir! it wasn't bad wording, but definately old concept..
we used to talk on myspace. now I'm smackin ya. I'ma end this.
I know the truth, don't lie. I seen Dracula on your friends list
..lol. no. but it was funny/corny..
don't surprise me you piece your verse from other's partial bars.
it's just a habit that you picked up always mixing martial arts.
..this was pretty cool..
you shoulda never stepped to me. bitch I'm snapping knees
& you're about to have a fucking fallout like you're Japanese
..cool recent event..
you've known me since I started. & it's true I was nervous
I mean there's a lot of history, you search through for your verses
..rofl! dope personal..
you're done wit. watch you fold I bring it son I'ma stunt it.
I'm on a roll that rivals every single one on your stomach
..rofl! another dope personal/fat joke..
you've had some impressive runs. theres nothing I can say with it
everytime you brought the fire, I can't believe you got away with it
..this was alright. kind of like ya opener, nothing over the top..

damn, this battle went on longer than it needed to, lol. j/k but seriously, this was weak compared to what i expected. chrit had some really play'ed lines and some shit looked like it could have been taken from other verses. i dunno, just some pretty play'ed ideas. but i will give him this, his wording is pretty crisp. and $pit had some cool stuff. he was definately more consistent and brought some heat towards the end. the opener was ok and the middle was hit and miss. anywho, my vote is..

v/ $pitacular