LLL Week #5 Chat

[Orc]

You suck.

u shudnt be telling anyone they suck droppin verses like urs this week

a record/cd line in 2011, lmao

[Chrit.]

u shudnt be telling anyone they suck droppin verses like urs this week

a record/cd line in 2011, lmao

Better than biting everything Ive ever written like you have.

Cheers Burden.

[A.T.]

*whistles*...

[Diso]

sorry tim can i still drop in my battle?

[Whys Weighs]

hey chrit.. how does it feel to be a bitch..?

[Marv.J]

lol

[Tim]

sorry tim can i still drop in my battle?

its all go man personal isnt even going to drop anyways

[Charlie Sheen]

wAS GOOD BRUDDAS FROM ANOTHER MUDDAS

[Orc]

chrit u calling me a biter is laughable

keep being wack thooo

[Untold.]

like the last guy who fucking said my bars were stretched they still fucking flowed!, like get a clue man... buddy I battled had a real short first line with a real long second line and thats so much fucking better cuz an amercian spit it or what?


like I keep on trying and fucking everyone hating meanwhile I show these battles to other people and they got a whole differnt view on things .. like I dont know if its mad dick riding or what the fuck is going on here ... but fuck it atleast i dont know show like half you clowns

Tbh homie, I think you've stepped your game up 100% since you've started in this league. Honestly, at the rate you keep learning, I truly feel you'll be solid competition 1 day. Instead of everone else being a bitch and saying you suck, peeps should try to help you elevate. The wording and multis you use are dope, but it won't win you battles.. At least on an online text battle site. It's going to be witty/creative punchlines. Read some old battles to get ideas(but don't steal other cats lines and bite ideas). Reading past verses will give you a foundation at what the league is looking for and styles vary from site to site. If one don't work, move on and find another.

Hawla back. Mondo style

[Charlie Sheen]

chrit u calling me a biter is laughable

keep being wack thooo

He probably means bitter

youre acting very bitter today Mr.Orc

[Diso]

^ your a sad fuck having a picture of someone else claiming its you
grow up

[Charlie Sheen]

Dont hate homie.. Appreciate

Mad cuz im thuggin on you, is that it, homie??

[Diso]

thugin on me?
you like 12? go outside n grow up

[$pitacular]

like the last guy who fucking said my bars were stretched they still fucking flowed!, like get a clue man... buddy I battled had a real short first line with a real long second line and thats so much fucking better cuz an amercian spit it or what?


like I keep on trying and fucking everyone hating meanwhile I show these battles to other people and they got a whole differnt view on things .. like I dont know if its mad dick riding or what the fuck is going on here ... but fuck it atleast i dont know show like half you clowns

I'll be real with you since I know where you're coming from

You're used to RAPPING. This is TEXT BATTLES.

You obviously know there's a huge difference, you just haven't been able to evolve to the style yet.

You'll get it. But on the real, you have to let go of what SOUNDS good, and write what LOOKS good when you read it. It changes flow, meaning, style, everything. Until you get that, embrace it and learn from it, you will continue to lose and be frustrated as to why no one thinks you're dope when all the people you know in your real life give you props.

Rap and text battling are two completely different things.

And you're not dope. at all, rap or otherwise, so if you can accept that and work on it, you've gotten past the first hurdle of being a successful artist.

If you still think you're dope and we're all blind and stupid, well... good luck to you.