Week 4
10-16 lines.
Check-ins due wednesday.
Verses due friday.
Voting ends sunday.
Extensions may be granted if both opponents agree (24hr max)
Make it dope!
Week 4
10-16 lines.
Check-ins due wednesday.
Verses due friday.
Voting ends sunday.
Extensions may be granted if both opponents agree (24hr max)
Make it dope!
check, you pick line amount duke.
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
Good ole inner Crew battle. Let's do 16.
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But actually ....
Ya whack n bound to disolve, dog vets all know what you 'bout
We used to tell people evolve...which explains how the site turned out
Bitch ya bad n getting worse. ..Ive dropped faggots like you for years
And fuck A.I...you've been taking em from your ass up to your ears
Get smashed, shook, n smeared. I saw ya last verse. Dog I'd be mad to own it
homie you ain't flawless cause you make less flaws then your whack opponents
I can't condone it. Matter of fact just dip, we'll forget you exist
I've heard of whack, but your beat down, blackened, n buried in a ditch
So don't act tight. Ya fag type is nothing more then a reporter for the league
Weve found a anchor...n tossed it with him off a boat over n into the sea
& stop witcha fable. It really doesn't take much for me to murder these fags
I could make jokes about how I pop e, or how its what your mother refers to me as
This kids soft. If you're the king then your cheating the throne
So piss off..... anyone else n I wont have continue this beating alone
We'll all join in. Bring my boys in to make this dude see his end
N beat the shit outta you so hopefully you never use it again...
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Your RBs most hated faggot, so after this easy win you should be done,
cuz lets face it we all want this dog to die... preferably before he reaches 41.
Make fun of my age prick, but the fact is im beating this tool,
yeah im old as fuck... me and your concepts attended the same school.
Your just a pain to this league, none of ur bars are even recycable,
this is one basket case not even little red riding hood would have on her bicycle.
You must of had a shitty life, your parents always wanted you out,
but you do have a proud father... somewhere, looking after the kids he cares about.
This guy isn't cool, he'd never smoke pot, join partys or plant his seed,
shit. If Ancel ever set caution to the wind... it's cuz he got a whiff of weed.
grandpa, even if u get a broad you'd find it hard to get inside her,
cuz ur sperms so old it would require an escalator to get from ya balls to her vagina.
fuck this guy. I could easily hurt him and turn this scene all gory,
but i wouldn't touch a hair on his head... I'd prefer cancer to do it for me.
You got nothing left, no wins, no credability and funniest of all no family dude,
tonly reason this fag had a colourful past... is cuz his mum beat him black n blue.
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Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
vsOriginally Posted by Ancel.
this was a decnt battle over all but i def have ancel taking this with a way more sollid direct bars. if evolve woulda wrote his whole verse like the two that i liked he wouldve tookin this but that isnt the case.. ancel gmv quite ezily imo. real talk..haha srry for being so critical im pretty drunk
Last edited by H.McCoy; March 19th, 2011 at 06:28 AM
Ancel..
Opener was ok at best dude, guess it did its job. The second bar i either wasnt feeling or didnt get it. Ha, the flawless bar was ok. Whack line was coo, first i didnt get it. Anchor was ok but i wasnt really feeling it. The pop e line was good i guess. Piss of line was pretty cool also, and ya closer was good.
Solid verse here but nothing stoming, everything was ok to good but no great.
Evolve..
I wasnt feelin ya opener.. think u shuda made it clearer. The second bar seemed to diss yaself a little cuz the flip on "im old" wasnt really harsh. The basket case was an ok wordplay but i didnt like the bar. LOL, proud father line was my favorite line in this one...good shit. Read the escalator bar a few times and nah...i didnt like this one. I might not of got this cancer wordplay but i wasnt feeling it. The closer?.. black n blue? C'mon man. Doesnt seem like u were really into it E man.
I thought Evolve wud storm this after reading Ancel's verse but i got V/Ancel taking this.
T. P.
v/ evolve
Ancel , I only dug that ex line - other then that missed bruh; evovle had three pretty good punches, riding hood / escalater / harm a hair...
, thought evolve was more consistent with less misses
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"Beauty is a cruel mistress, is it not?"
& stop witcha fable. It really doesn't take much for me to murder these fags
I could make jokes about how I pop e, or how its what your mother refers to me as
vs.
Make fun of my age prick, but the fact is im beating this tool,
yeah im old as fuck... me and your concepts attended the same school.
Your just a pain to this league, none of ur bars are even recycable,
this is one basket case not even little red riding hood would have on her bicycle.
You must of had a shitty life, your parents always wanted you out,
but you do have a proud father... somewhere, looking after the kids he cares about.
grandpa, even if u get a broad you'd find it hard to get inside her,
cuz ur sperms so old it would require an escalator to get from ya balls to her vagina.
fuck this guy. I could easily hurt him and turn this scene all gory,
but i wouldn't touch a hair on his head... I'd prefer cancer to do it for me.
man, evolve killed it this week. HUGE improvement from what he dropped last week. the whole verse was consistant as fawk. even though the cancer line wasn't "omg" rediculous it was still very creative. i really enjoyed reading his verse. and ancel, not really anything that great in your verse. although funniest line was the "pop-e" line, everything else just wasn't good. i've seen you drop in the past and i know your capable of doing better. just get a bit more creative, with delivery and punches.
v/ evolve
& stop witcha fable. It really doesn't take much for me to murder these fags
I could make jokes about how I pop e, or how its what your mother refers to me as
Get smashed, shook, n smeared. I saw ya last verse. Dog I'd be mad to own it
homie you ain't flawless cause you make less flaws then your whack opponents
vs.
Make fun of my age prick, but the fact is im beating this tool,
yeah im old as fuck... me and your concepts attended the same school.
Your just a pain to this league, none of ur bars are even recycable,
this is one basket case not even little red riding hood would have on her bicycle.
You must of had a shitty life, your parents always wanted you out,
but you do have a proud father... somewhere, looking after the kids he cares about.
i got Evolve taking this, that red riding hood line was nice. ancel did ok but should of came more consistant, anyways it was a decent read.
vote - Evolve
ok nice to see a longer battle from 2 vets on the site.. had no idea Wanderer was Ancel.. should be good..
ancel
Ya whack n bound to disolve, dog vets all know what you 'bout
We used to tell people evolve...which explains how the site turned out
got a laugh out of me.
Bitch ya bad n getting worse. ..Ive dropped faggots like you for years
And fuck A.I...you've been taking em from your ass up to your ears
ehhh, i didnt like the wording on this alot.. it's not bad
Get smashed, shook, n smeared. I saw ya last verse. Dog I'd be mad to own it
homie you ain't flawless cause you make less flaws then your whack opponents
wp was eh, line hits though
I can't condone it. Matter of fact just dip, we'll forget you exist
I've heard of whack, but your beat down, blackened, n buried in a ditch
came off a little simplistic, not real dope
So don't act tight. Ya fag type is nothing more then a reporter for the league
Weve found a anchor...n tossed it with him off a boat over n into the sea
lol cool
& stop witcha fable. It really doesn't take much for me to murder these fags
I could make jokes about how I pop e, or how its what your mother refers to me as
pretty cool
This kids soft. If you're the king then your cheating the throne
So piss off..... anyone else n I wont have continue this beating alone
alright..
We'll all join in. Bring my boys in to make this dude see his end
N beat the shit outta you so hopefully you never use it again...
dece closer
vs
evolve
Your RBs most hated faggot, so after this easy win you should be done,
cuz lets face it we all want this dog to die... preferably before he reaches 41.
aight
Make fun of my age prick, but the fact is im beating this tool,
yeah im old as fuck... me and your concepts attended the same school.
lol.. funny self diss flip, not bad
Your just a pain to this league, none of ur bars are even recycable,
this is one basket case not even little red riding hood would have on her bicycle.
pretty good, like the wording
You must of had a shitty life, your parents always wanted you out,
but you do have a proud father... somewhere, looking after the kids he cares about.
lol.. not bad
This guy isn't cool, he'd never smoke pot, join partys or plant his seed,
shit. If Ancel ever set caution to the wind... it's cuz he got a whiff of weed.
ehhh didint like this alot..not bad
grandpa, even if u get a broad you'd find it hard to get inside her,
cuz ur sperms so old it would require an escalator to get from ya balls to her vagina.
lmao
fuck this guy. I could easily hurt him and turn this scene all gory,
but i wouldn't touch a hair on his head... I'd prefer cancer to do it for me.
nahhh
You got nothing left, no wins, no credability and funniest of all no family dude,
tonly reason this fag had a colourful past... is cuz his mum beat him black n blue.
aight
this was a close read imo.. i read it, broke it down then read the verses through once.. i think both had 2 or 3 lines that i liked alot, I think Evolve's basketcase, escalator and concepts attended the same school lines were cool.. Ancel had the anchor, the Evolve line and the pop E... the rest was relatively even in terms of misses/playedish line.. I think Evolves hard hitters were a little better here.. Ancel was capeable of wininng but should have substituted a couple lines here to get a better verse as a whole
vote evolve
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Get smashed, shook, n smeared. I saw ya last verse. Dog I'd be mad to own it
homie you ain't flawless cause you make less flaws then your whack opponents
& stop witcha fable. It really doesn't take much for me to murder these fags
I could make jokes about how I pop e, or how its what your mother refers to me as
This kids soft. If you're the king then your cheating the throne
So piss off..... anyone else n I wont have continue this beating alone
vs
Make fun of my age prick, but the fact is im beating this tool,
yeah im old as fuck... me and your concepts attended the same school.
Your just a pain to this league, none of ur bars are even recycable,
this is one basket case not even little red riding hood would have on her bicycle.
You must of had a shitty life, your parents always wanted you out,
but you do have a proud father... somewhere, looking after the kids he cares about.
You got nothing left, no wins, no credability and funniest of all no family dude,
tonly reason this fag had a colourful past... is cuz his mum beat him black n blue.
Close battle but i give it to Evolve for the humor ancel had some pretty cool lines as well but i preffered E's
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