Week 4
10-16 lines.
Check-ins due wednesday.
Verses due friday.
Voting ends sunday.
Extensions may be granted if both opponents agree (24hr max)
Make it dope!
Week 4
10-16 lines.
Check-ins due wednesday.
Verses due friday.
Voting ends sunday.
Extensions may be granted if both opponents agree (24hr max)
Make it dope!
Diaf.
B.Simon
My Latest
sup.. 10s good.
カミノコトバ
10
First off nobody been feelin you, rusty ever since u hoped out the pod
Critics'll say that RB is atheist.. cuz nobody here adknowledge ahgod
Lacking comprehension, how u gonna troll?... fuck it i'll dangle this elf.
Dyslexic fuck'll read "wrap yo head around the idea", and strangled himself.
ill triangle your health, bitches'll never touch em so he askin for digits.
only time he gets it crackin wit shorty's is when he laughing with midgets.
Your worthless, fuck we could do an interview, and LLL could mag it.
we wont even ask you if your gay, just why you only body the faggots.
I think i saw ur pics in 08, anyone here'll still put u on a guerny in truck.
I was gonna punch you on being washed up.. but he's still dirty as fuck.
smdh...
B.Simon
My Latest
it seems to be tradition in text, feed me newb carcus with veel
all ur verse really proved.. concepts from 06' are just as wack STILL..
this homeless vermin enjoys the sewer, claims our lives are inferior
I bet he slipped through the cracks.. n couldn't wait to remodel the interior.
pussy, u anger me.. I should bend ur neck into shapes that would hurt
Im starting my 10 paces now.. here's hoping I can draw us away from THAT verse.
I was hoping for expirience but it seems that this fag needs mounds of work
I guess I could say "I took a Majic Trip.. but all I got was this lowsy shirt".
fucker, I should find ur bitch n slug her.. his elevations in a deep slumber..
only time he'd give me a pound.. s'when it comes to tossing his dead weight into a dumpster.
10. g'luck fam. still shaking rust. :hung:
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First off nobody been feelin you, rusty ever since u hoped out the pod
Critics'll say that RB is atheist.. cuz nobody here adknowledge ahgod
^the "atheist" / "god" concept has been used to death on every dude with god in his name..
Lacking comprehension, how u gonna troll?... fuck it i'll dangle this elf.
Dyslexic fuck'll read "wrap yo head around the idea", and strangled himself.
sorry don't how dyslexia applies to the punch. not feelin it.
ill triangle your health, bitches'll never touch em so he askin for digits.
only time he gets it crackin wit shorty's is when he laughing with midgets.
ok I guess
Your worthless, fuck we could do an interview, and LLL could mag it.
we wont even ask you if your gay, just why you only body the faggots.
not really any wit to this, just an insult.
I think i saw ur pics in 08, anyone here'll still put u on a guerny in truck.
I was gonna punch you on being washed up.. but he's still dirty as fuck.
again, not really any wit, just an insult
overall, not much creativity or wit in your verse, though you're definitely consistently insulting him
vs
it seems to be tradition in text, feed me newb carcus with veel
all ur verse really proved.. concepts from 06' are just as wack STILL..
ok, but veel and still don't rhyme.. this is text, you can't accent it right so when I read it I'm like "nah"
this homeless vermin enjoys the sewer, claims our lives are inferior
I bet he slipped through the cracks.. n couldn't wait to remodel the interior.
not really feeling this.. plus someone used the "slipped through the cracks" phrase on me recently. even though the punch is different, the similarity caused me to shrug this one off
pussy, u anger me.. I should bend ur neck into shapes that would hurt
Im starting my 10 paces now.. here's hoping I can draw us away from THAT verse.
decent. best of the battle so far
I was hoping for expirience but it seems that this fag needs mounds of work
I guess I could say "I took a Majic Trip.. but all I got was this lowsy shirt".
this is a miss IMO. could have used the concept better and made it hit, this did not.
fucker, I should find ur bitch n slug her.. his elevations in a deep slumber..
only time he'd give me a pound.. s'when it comes to tossing his dead weight into a dumpster.
so you're saying the only time he'd give you "a pound" aka daps aka skins aka props... is like saying he would never give you those.. which is insuting yourself. no dice
basically I got 1 decent punch from Wordz vs "ok I guess" from Majic.. gonna give this to Wordz
v/ Wordz Ahgod
I was hoping for expirience but it seems that this fag needs mounds of work
I guess I could say "I took a Majic Trip.. but all I got was this lowsy shirt".
^^^ I disagree with my man up there. This got me to laugh...
Lacking comprehension, how u gonna troll?... fuck it i'll dangle this elf.
Dyslexic fuck'll read "wrap yo head around the idea", and strangled himself.
^^^ I didn't necessarily think this was a good punch, but I thought the multi "dangle this elf" was funny.
I think i saw ur pics in 08, anyone here'll still put u on a guerny in truck.
I was gonna punch you on being washed up.. but he's still dirty as fuck.
^^^ I think the first multi was forced to set this up, played concept as well
pussy, u anger me.. I should bend ur neck into shapes that would hurt
Im starting my 10 paces now.. here's hoping I can draw us away from THAT verse.
^^^ Ha, I like how you just started your line calling him "Pussy" and then later "Fucker"... Anyways i thought this was a slick wordplay.
Overall, I think Words had a slight edge on delivery and originality, though the battle was pretty even.
Vote = Words AhGod
lmao wordz is terrible at life and pitiful with a keyboard. this is a dude who should stick to dancing w/ fags on youtube
majic didn't seem as much of a fag
v/majic
lmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoooo
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Ive never seen wordz battle so i cant say the god line was played. It connected, good opener. The dyslexic line was cool. The midgets line was kinda funny, good bar. The closer i think actually IS played but an ok flip.
The opener didnt really rhyme and the whole "old style, old wording being played" concept is played. the second bar was aight but it lacked sting. Ya next bar was prolly ya best, but i thought it shuda ended better. The magic trip bar was a good concept but i didnt like the bar. I really wasnt feeling the closer man.
Overall i have to say the better verse is V/Majic
T. P.
2 - 1.. Hush is a Puerto Rican homosexual and we don't let those kind of people vote... you know.. Puerto Ricans..
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First off nobody been feelin you, rusty ever since u hoped out the pod
Critics'll say that RB is atheist.. cuz nobody here adknowledge ahgod
God lines are played to death with anyone named god the their nameLacking comprehension, how u gonna troll?... fuck it i'll dangle this elf.
Dyslexic fuck'll read "wrap yo head around the idea", and strangled himself.
Alright concept but i though there was more you could do with it
ill triangle your health, bitches'll never touch em so he askin for digits.
only time he gets it crackin wit shorty's is when he laughing with midgets.
hmmmm this was alright
Your worthless, fuck we could do an interview, and LLL could mag it.
we wont even ask you if your gay, just why you only body the faggots.
Nah im not feeling this one
I think i saw ur pics in 08, anyone here'll still put u on a guerny in truck.
I was gonna punch you on being washed up.. but he's still dirty as fuck.
weak diss imo
vs
it seems to be tradition in text, feed me newb carcus with veel
all ur verse really proved.. concepts from 06' are just as wack STILL..
Ehhh you were stretching the rhyme a lil bit for me, but ight
this homeless vermin enjoys the sewer, claims our lives are inferior
I bet he slipped through the cracks.. n couldn't wait to remodel the interior.
Ive seen this kind of concept before
pussy, u anger me.. I should bend ur neck into shapes that would hurt
Im starting my 10 paces now.. here's hoping I can draw us away from THAT verse.
Haha' okay
I was hoping for expirience but it seems that this fag needs mounds of work
I guess I could say "I took a Majic Trip.. but all I got was this lowsy shirt".
This had potential but i felt like it was exectued poorly
fucker, I should find ur bitch n slug her.. his elevations in a deep slumber..
only time he'd give me a pound.. s'when it comes to tossing his dead weight into a dumpster.
This was alright at best
Well this battle was okay, I felt like magic, didnt come creative as Wordz and wordz had better executed punches. Just felt like Wordz came a little fresher and had two of the best punches of the battle so yeah
Vote...Wordz
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