Week 4
10-16 lines.
Check-ins due wednesday.
Verses due friday.
Voting ends sunday.
Extensions may be granted if both opponents agree (24hr max)
Make it dope!
Week 4
10-16 lines.
Check-ins due wednesday.
Verses due friday.
Voting ends sunday.
Extensions may be granted if both opponents agree (24hr max)
Make it dope!
Last edited by TayTay; March 20th, 2011 at 10:07 PM
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Scytsophrenia
need an ext
Scytsophrenia
you had some bad habbits, and homie looking at you was real sad
but you teamed up with god.. and lost every tag battle u faggots had
people say you're weak but thats something i dont acknowledge
you definetely arent feeble..
...cuz he actually left the site when he started college
ure a groupie claiming uve been digging Nate since b4 his death
say u can relate to him, how? when ur strokes just result in a sticky mess
u drop weak on noobs n try vs vets its no wonder you get slaughtered
you think u can just hit the switch, but last week he hit back harder
youve never beaten me chump, thinking ur on my level u must be delirious
u arent in my conference so how do u expect me to take this meeting serious
I hope you realize you won't win... to try is fuckin pointless n' stupid
cuz beating me is such a stretch you'd have to be double jointed to do it
yeah I'm a hockey player.... I got the skills to leave this ho smothered
So I know a good stickhandler when I see one.. n' you jerk dick like no other
you should really look for advice... start pooling for some help
cuz your spitting image is just pictures of you drooling on yourself
ya girl's done with you to... she's already walkin straight to my hands
shit, she's on my wood head so much you'd think she was a patriots fan
if I were him I would stop rappin.....he's awful.. this prag's soft
but i'll admit ya verse moved me...I was on the floor laughin my ass off
Scytsophrenia
u drop weak on noobs n try vs vets its no wonder you get slaughtered
you think u can just hit the switch, but last week he hit back harder
youve never beaten me chump, thinking ur on my level u must be delirious
u arent in my conference so how do u expect me to take this meeting serious
vs.
I hope you realize you won't win... to try is fuckin pointless n' stupid
cuz beating me is such a stretch you'd have to be double jointed to do it
yeah I'm a hockey player.... I got the skills to leave this ho smothered
So I know a good stickhandler when I see one.. n' you jerk dick like no other
you should really look for advice... start pooling for some help
cuz your spitting image is just pictures of you drooling on yourself
if I were him I would stop rappin.....he's awful.. this prag's soft
but i'll admit ya verse moved me...I was on the floor laughin my ass off
man, pretty one sided battle here. tay, ur verse was either really play'd, very badly worded or just bland punches. ur best line was the conference line and that didn't really have the sting that it should have had. i see you have the ideas but if you got a bit more creative you could be a good writer. personal though had a pretty good verse this week. some goofy punches but they made me laugh, especially the spitting image line. look, a definate improvement from last week. good job.
v/ per$onal
u drop weak on noobs n try vs vets its no wonder you get slaughtered
you think u can just hit the switch, but last week he hit back harder
youve never beaten me chump, thinking ur on my level u must be delirious
u arent in my conference so how do u expect me to take this meeting serious
vs
you should really look for advice... start pooling for some help
cuz your spitting image is just pictures of you drooling on yourself
yeah I'm a hockey player.... I got the skills to leave this ho smothered
So I know a good stickhandler when I see one.. n' you jerk dick like no other
i'm having a hard time deciding this personally... i read Untold's vote.. and I agree that Tay did have some bland lines.. but they were at least personal attempts... Personal had a few lines that I didn't like or had seen messed with like the closer and the stretch line. I liked the quotes from both, Spitting Image was funny, but I liked the swagger of Tay's meeting line.. tough one to vote on in my opinion.. I think I'm gonna vote for Tay's personals
vote tay
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I hope you realize you won't win... to try is fuckin pointless n' stupid
cuz beating me is such a stretch you'd have to be double jointed to do it
aight
yeah I'm a hockey player.... I got the skills to leave this ho smothered
So I know a good stickhandler when I see one.. n' you jerk dick like no other
cool
you should really look for advice... start pooling for some help
cuz your spitting image is just pictures of you drooling on yourself
lmao.. funny but not that hard of a hit
ya girl's done with you to... she's already walkin straight to my hands
shit, she's on my wood head so much you'd think she was a patriots fan
sortof self hyped in this one
if I were him I would stop rappin.....he's awful.. this prag's soft
but i'll admit ya verse moved me...I was on the floor laughin my ass off
ok closer
vs
you had some bad habbits, and homie looking at you was real sad
but you teamed up with god.. and lost every tag battle u faggots had
weakish opener
people say you're weak but thats something i dont acknowledge
you definetely arent feeble..
...cuz he actually left the site when he started college
lmao
ure a groupie claiming uve been digging Nate since b4 his death
say u can relate to him, how? when ur strokes just result in a sticky mess
nice
u drop weak on noobs n try vs vets its no wonder you get slaughtered
you think u can just hit the switch, but last week he hit back harder
cool nameplay
youve never beaten me chump, thinking ur on my level u must be delirious
u arent in my conference so how do u expect me to take this meeting serious
weakish here too
v/Tay for some better hits.. this battle was good though
people say you're weak but thats something i dont acknowledge
you definetely arent feeble..
...cuz he actually left the site when he started college
u drop weak on noobs n try vs vets its no wonder you get slaughtered
you think u can just hit the switch, but last week he hit back harder
youve never beaten me chump, thinking ur on my level u must be delirious
u arent in my conference so how do u expect me to take this meeting serious
Vs.
you should really look for advice... start pooling for some help
cuz your spitting image is just pictures of you drooling on yourself
yeah I'm a hockey player.... I got the skills to leave this ho smothered
So I know a good stickhandler when I see one.. n' you jerk dick like no other
This was a close battle for sure, I liked how both you guys came out, i felt like pers came softer then he usually does cause, i think he maybe didnt have time. i thought he would have it in the bag after reading tays verse, but perse just lacked the punches in this one.
Vote...taytay
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