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Thread: Ill be there for you......(slow)

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    ShaYneA
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    Exclamation Ill be there for you......(slow)

    in the creases of my soul you once held a place
    you held high standards for each tear the graced my face
    you were one of my crew from way back when...
    when you look back can you remeber then?
    tried to help you through ya gurl that lying hoe...
    tried to give you my hand when you were falling but either you didnt care or you didnt kno......
    Freinds over the net...is that really a big deal....
    it is when you obtain the essence to be so real...
    problems wit my man you gonna drive here and kick his ass...
    your the one freind i need and if your near you kno im holding on.
    these past few days i look for your name and its simply gone..
    Slow n steady rins the race...with you seems we set our own pace
    two years of boredom talk...seems t obe earsed like day old chalk
    the board is black without you in my threads..
    you remeber way back when collabin turnin heads...
    first incident with a soul thats infinite...she got games runnin through your head just to fukk wit it......
    dont get me wrong i like dat gurl.....she took our straight n steady n made it twist n twirl.....
    so many times i thought n wondered if i lived closer would i be ya gurl?
    then realized that freinds is our main title...nurse hazy to the rescue...
    kinda thought we had a good bond going.....if that was tru how comes its no longer showing...
    your a shining star boy im not gonna be th eone to stop you from glowing......
    and as this distance gros so much farther..and times for you get so much harder.....remember you can call upon me......
    for love fate hope or destiney.....
    empathy...


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    damn shaynea...that was most definetly a piece of pure emotions...

    ...it just seemed to drift effortlessly from one line to another....(or maybe thats just the mood i'm in right now)...but either way...really depicted the pure essence of the feelings and what not very well...



    ....and the ending...


    your a shining star boy im not gonna be th eone to stop you from glowing......
    and as this distance gros so much farther..and times for you get so much harder.....remember you can call upon me......
    for love fate hope or destiney.....
    empathy...


    was well put...esepcially how you used just one word in the end...very few can do that to good effect...but you did....


    ...respect shay...keep yo head up and stay strong (but you always do, so you dont need me to tell ya that)....and as always...'the door is always open'...blah!..yeah thats a bit cliche...but its all good...respect...
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