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    danja
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    Exclamation feeling on you....

    feelings for you strong so un percieved
    youre the light on my flame hidden so deep
    wivout u im weak huney, my heart feels so lonley
    come and swim in my sea and see what i see
    youre what i breathe
    what im here for, what i wake for each day
    promise me u'll stay and neva betray
    ur ways are engraved, on my heart a tattoo
    physically and mentally ill show love for you
    hold me in your arms, emotionlly subdued
    never confused never cold nor used
    wivout you im helpless almost incomplete
    as if i was a jigsaw u'd be my last piece
    words cant express what you mean to me
    and its not easy to show you
    just as u know aswell as i do, i live for you boo
    nothing can amount to, nothing compares to you
    and when we make love together i always reminise
    think of all the times that we shared it was bliss
    i remember every kiss and how everytime we amiss
    arguements and feuds we carry on its a trip


    for my girlx

    sorry guys been away for a bit but im back! this ones unfinished would just like to hear comments and suggestions crits welcome

    nuff love
    Last edited by danja; July 28th, 2002 at 12:08 PM

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