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    papiswifey
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    Exclamation †h£ñ & ñØw

    It used ta be that when i asked u, u promised u would call//
    U also said i was your everything, and to me u'd give your all//
    Well that was then and this iz now and baby its all changed//
    I started thinking, no longer dreaming and got my attitude rearranged//

    It used ta be i'd say things like "i'll be you Superwoman if u just gimme a Lil Mo//
    If you commit yourself to me, my love will erupt like an endless volcano"//
    Well that was then and this iz now and im not afraid to hurt you//
    I deserve to be treated better after all you've put me thru//


    But that's not the end, ladies and gentlemen, of this story i do tell//
    For that was the "Then" and this iz tha "Now" which actually turns out quite well//


    After our big fight, late that night i thought i actually got thru to u//
    I thought "Well if i yell summore, you'll think 'Oh god, what have i done, what did i do?//
    And maybe he'll figure it out, without a doubt, that his love he did not show//
    And from now on, he'll be more conscience of what then, he did not know//

    And despite his fake lies, i've come to realize, his priorities he did arrange//
    And for me, his love, his best friend, he decided he would change//
    Even tho he was scared, not wanted a broken heart to be repaired, his love he did not withdrawal//
    For he knew my love for him and his for mine was true and together, in love, we would fall//


    yo-if u noticed, the second half of my poem i went backwards wit da rhyming sound at tha end from "oo" to "oh" to "-ange" to "all" its like a reflection of da first part b/c it starts out wit "all" and ends wit "oo"--i did dat b/c it reflects my situation in dis poem--theres more but i'll just leave u wit dat.

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    ~*Lil' Miss Caramel*~ Calisto's Avatar
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    stop sleepin e'ery1!!!!!!!!
    Formerly known as ThundaThighz
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    And death I think is no parenthesis"-E.E. Cummings

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    ~*Lil' Miss Caramel*~ Calisto's Avatar
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    man fuck all u non-readers!!! ya'll be sleepin too damn much!!
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    "...For life is not a paragraph.
    And death I think is no parenthesis"-E.E. Cummings

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    LaDy TrInItY
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    dang..i know where your coming from with this...but i haven't fought with my baby yet..fortunately....haha...nah this was a good piece...i really liked it....always elevate..much luv..God bless..1..

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    Skitz Frynik
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    ..OMG!!...tha fukkin' flo' was mo' on key...this was definetly ya best post so far...lots of emotion....(see wut happens when u put ur mind to it!)

    Fav line:"It used ta be i'd say things like "i'll be you Superwoman if u just gimme a Lil Mo//"

    ^^dats pretty dope...u elevatin' a lot....

    pizzle n' pieces!!

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    [*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ]
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    Dang gurl ...
    This was sad ... one of those poems
    im sure alot of peeps can relate to
    well bit of it ...
    Much props ...
    Keep doin ur thang,
    u got much talent dont go think its
    not noticed..
    pz
    1luv dime
    ~1~

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