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I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
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I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
Youll be creating damage to your record, after getting drowned with my flows
So fuck your crew. You're like the only son with a bunch of sisters, you're surrounded by hoes
And your verse is prolly stolen, highjacked, or confiscated
Cause you never drop hard shit. Lyrically you're constipated
So quit rapping all together, and try and come up with a new dance
Because if rap currency, youd be currently collecting foodstamps
I usually call you're wifey over for some nightly strokin
But the whore say she ain't into foreplay, so we just do it
like the Nike slogan
I skipped college,but its cool. I gets knowledge cause your bitch offers smarts
So don't me mad when you walk in on me mounting her,
And it looks like mixed martial arts
I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
Its Whatever. You can drop tomorrow pussy
I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
You’re the type of guy who scatters around looking for loose change
But you couldn’t find a dime; I guess Obama failed his presidential campaign
You’re probably sitting in front of your computer attacking it savagely
But the webcam won’t be enough to make L’s in your memory remain photographically
You’re a little bee, who bites with no sting and writes about nothing,
Anyone can see L coming for you, Im talking about a loss and not about love, youngin
You tried to go shootin at the range but you couldn’t even hit the trigger
I couldn’t blame ya for that, cause your fat ass must come with a huge finger
You and your dad probably like roleplayin’ where you talk to each other’s snickers
Bickering about whose is bigger, I guess you could call the game “Twitter”
...err, get your links in.
Youll be creating damage to your record, after getting drowned with my flows
So fuck your crew. You're like the only son with a bunch of sisters, you're surrounded by hoescould it get anymore forced? weak opener and overall it lacked all cats in this. nothin stood out.
And your verse is prolly stolen, highjacked, or confiscated
Cause you never drop hard shit. Lyrically you're constipatednaaah. thats a wack metaphore.
So quit rapping all together, and try and come up with a new dance
Because if rap currency, youd be currently collecting foodstampshalf an lol. but no real punch
I usually call you're wifey over for some nightly strokin
But the whore say she ain't into foreplay, so we just do it
like the Nike slogan sigh, another forced attempted punch. but the shits weak.
I skipped college,but its cool. I gets knowledge cause your bitch offers smarts
So don't me mad when you walk in on me mounting her,
And it looks like mixed martial arts forced...forced...forced..nothin to say on it
vs
You’re the type of guy who scatters around looking for loose change
But you couldn’t find a dime; I guess Obama failed his presidential campaignreally? loose change + presidential campaign?...ill let u figure out why i brought this up...fuck it. it was a bad opener and just bad bar plain n simple.
You’re probably sitting in front of your computer attacking it savagely
But the webcam won’t be enough to make L’s in your memory remain photographicallystop wit the forcin guys! sit back, think for a sec on what u can take out and add to make it flow. and theres nothin special really..
You’re a little bee, who bites with no sting and writes about nothing,
Anyone can see L coming for you, Im talking about a loss and not about love, younginwack. 0/10
You tried to go shootin at the range but you couldn’t even hit the trigger
I couldn’t blame ya for that, cause your fat ass must come with a huge fingerre-rap this to yourself out loud and see if that rhyme to you..lol.
You and your dad probably like roleplayin’ where you talk to each other’s snickers
Bickering about whose is bigger, I guess you could call the game “Twitter” noooooooooooooooooooooo. i cant believe thats a real bar.
weak v weak tonight.
Heff took it only cause there was more attempts directly aiming at Vinz. not the filler lines that dont mean nothin at the end of the day...no disrespect. call it like i see it.
vote - heff.
Last edited by Quest.; March 4th, 2011 at 09:12 PM
I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
eh.. not a very good battle. neither of ya'll had any real good punchlines or personals. based on that I gotta go w/ Vinzr. based on the fact that his overall structure and flow was better. If either one of ya'll dropped one decent personal/punch it would have won you this battle, but it was all irrelevant statements.
Youll be creating damage to your record, after getting drowned with my flows
So fuck your crew. You're like the only son with a bunch of sisters, you're surrounded by hoes
definately and obviously forced
And your verse is prolly stolen, highjacked, or confiscated
Cause you never drop hard shit.
Eww... clear analogy but not great here...
So quit rapping all together, and try and come up with a new dance
Because if rap currency, youd be currently collecting foodstamps
Eh... finish was okay
I usually call you're wifey over for some nightly strokin
But the whore say she ain't into foreplay, so we just do it
like the Nike slogan
weak for you Heff- I've seen you a lot better
I skipped college,but its cool. I gets knowledge cause your bitch offers smarts
So don't me mad when you walk in on me mounting her,
And it looks like mixed martial arts
Dece
vs
You’re the type of guy who scatters around looking for loose change
But you couldn’t find a dime; I guess Obama failed his presidential campaign
Good idea at best. Not a punch by any means though and bad opener
You’re probably sitting in front of your computer attacking it savagely
But the webcam won’t be enough to make L’s in your memory remain photographically
Very Forced
You’re a little bee, who bites with no sting and writes about nothing,
Anyone can see L coming for you, Im talking about a loss and not about love,
TOO simple
You tried to go shootin at the range but you couldn’t even hit the trigger
I couldn’t blame ya for that, cause your fat ass must come with a huge fingerre-
get the idea but not a good punch
You and your dad probably like roleplayin’ where you talk to each other’s snickers
Bickering about whose is bigger, I guess you could call the game “Twitter”
Very weak finish
I have to give this to Heff, but both sides had serious weaknesses. Serious work for both Heff and Vinzr on concepts. Flow was okay and just keep working on everything, keep elevatin, no hate
v/ Heff
I dropped my shit in 10mins. And I was drunk. Its all good tho
Preciate the feedback
I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
And your verse is prolly stolen, highjacked, or confiscated
Cause you never drop hard shit. Lyrically you're constipated
vs.
You’re the type of guy who scatters around looking for loose change
But you couldn’t find a dime; I guess Obama failed his presidential campaign
I quoted what I felt were the best attempts from both of you. However, I don't consider these to be hard hitting punches... They are both concepts that somehow got fucked up; they hit like the two of you were simply slapboxing one another. Overall I'm going to have to give the nod to Heff Dolla for better attempts and less misses. Both of y'all need to keep grinding and elevate though. No hate to either...
Vote: Heff
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I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
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