10 lines, due 3 hours after your check. Regular rules. Get to it....CHECKmate
10 lines, due 3 hours after your check. Regular rules. Get to it....CHECKmate
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Ya Basic Raps Will Leave You Basically Wrapped...
It Is What It Is...
The Specialist: \ thu spe-sul-ist\ n 1. One You Don't Want To See In A Battle 2. adj. Deadly 3. Lyrically Combative Beyond Lethalness 4. Also Known As TS / sent: "For Health Reasons, It Is Not Wise To Mess With The Specialist."
When I woke up, the thought "I should fix and devour some Special K" popped in my head
I knew his bag of "Trix" was empty, so I went to his house to bust "Nuts 'n Honey" instead
Remember, the next time you call up sex lines, you really need to put down the phone
and demand that your own hand leaves the baloney between your ham hock legs alone
I'm dark and demeaned, wrap you in plastic, then beat you with unsharpened things
So I won't need nothin Special to clean your apartment's carpet before I depart the scene
I made sex tapes with your bitch, you're at home livin' the "Married with Children" life
You watched it like a TV "Special", hand in pants like Al Bundy as I "Peg" your wife
He wears rhinestone coats and glitter on his face so its clear he's hardly tough
But don't listen to me,look at his pic and you'll see this fake G loves sparkley stuff
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From The Rip Let Me Tell You What You Demonstrate
Pause...(Peep Verse)...Allow Me To Reinterate, My Style My Bitch 2 Things You Could Neva Penatrate
You Ass, Nothing Can Mask The Stintch That He Has
Im Iron Clad, You Just A Bitch In Disguise...Another Queen Dragged
I Take The Fight Outta You, Un Original What You Write You The Type To Bite A Few, True
Epic In Battles Only Cause You Slide Back, You Know...How Michael Would Move
I'm Over Ya Head, Tommorrow You'll Get Todays Subliminals
I Got This Covered, Leave Em In More Dirt Than Life Long Criminals.
You Can't Win, Dispise All Ya Shanaganisa And Stunts
Cause MCMD Tight Wit L's Like He Stife Wit The Blunt
Links Comin...
I Have Spoken...
Ya Basic Raps Will Leave You Basically Wrapped...
It Is What It Is...
The Specialist: \ thu spe-sul-ist\ n 1. One You Don't Want To See In A Battle 2. adj. Deadly 3. Lyrically Combative Beyond Lethalness 4. Also Known As TS / sent: "For Health Reasons, It Is Not Wise To Mess With The Specialist."
MCMD
When I woke up, the thought "I should fix and devour some Special K" popped in my head
I knew his bag of "Trix" was empty, so I went to his house to bust "Nuts 'n Honey" instead
this was a wordy. could have been trimmed down a bit. but i liked this one
Remember, the next time you call up sex lines, you really need to put down the phone
and demand that your own hand leaves the baloney between your ham hock legs alone
lol
I'm dark and demeaned, wrap you in plastic, then beat you with unsharpened things
So I won't need nothin Special to clean your apartment's carpet before I depart the scene
multies and visual were there but the punch was soft
I made sex tapes with your bitch, you're at home livin' the "Married with Children" life
You watched it like a TV "Special", hand in pants like Al Bundy as I "Peg" your wife
lol used tolike that show
He wears rhinestone coats and glitter on his face so its clear he's hardly tough
But don't listen to me,look at his pic and you'll see this fake G loves sparkley stuff
wasnt feeling the closer
vs
TS
From The Rip Let Me Tell You What You Demonstrate
Pause...(Peep Verse)...Allow Me To Reinterate, My Style My Bitch 2 Things You Could Neva Penatrate
not sure if you are actually talking about his verse. but i like this opener
You Ass, Nothing Can Mask The Stintch That He Has
Im Iron Clad, You Just A Bitch In Disguise...Another Queen Dragged
wp was kinda off on this one. ok at best because this was a played concept
I Take The Fight Outta You, Un Original What You Write You The Type To Bite A Few, True
Epic In Battles Only Cause You Slide Back, You Know...How Michael Would Move
this was ok. set-up could have related a little more but i gotcha
I'm Over Ya Head, Tommorrow You'll Get Todays Subliminals
I Got This Covered, Leave Em In More Dirt Than Life Long Criminals.
solid hit here
You Can't Win, Dispise All Ya Shanaganisa And Stunts
Cause MCMD Tight Wit L's Like He Stife Wit The Blunt
good concept could have been worded better
okay battle here. imma have to go with MCMD, you were a little wordy but overall your punches hit harder. TS you had some kinna played bars but dropped stronger at the end. if you would have kept it like that through the whole verse it would have been alot closer.
v/MCMD
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Ya Basic Raps Will Leave You Basically Wrapped...
It Is What It Is...
The Specialist: \ thu spe-sul-ist\ n 1. One You Don't Want To See In A Battle 2. adj. Deadly 3. Lyrically Combative Beyond Lethalness 4. Also Known As TS / sent: "For Health Reasons, It Is Not Wise To Mess With The Specialist."
mcmd wins
I made sex tapes with your bitch, you're at home livin' the "Married with Children" life
You watched it like a TV "Special", hand in pants like Al Bundy as I "Peg" your wife
vs
I Take The Fight Outta You, Un Original What You Write You The Type To Bite A Few, True
Epic In Battles Only Cause You Slide Back, You Know...How Michael Would Move
The specialist has a unique form of writing but alot o them didn't hit hard..overall mcmd had a stronger verse..i some some original pucnes buh some of it had bad wording but my vote will go to mcmd
I made sextapes with your bitch your living the married with children life
you watched it like a TV special,hands in pants like al Bundy as I peg your wife
Vs
You can't win despise your shananigans and stunts
Cause mcmd tight with ls like he trife wit the blunt
Opener:MC
Punches :TS
Name play:MC
Closer :TS
Creativity: TS
Vote :TS
MC you was throwing heavy punches no bullshit, put a bit wordy
TS you had enough for the win IMO
I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
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v/ MCMD
overall pretty close, but weak battle. I went w/ MCMD because he had a little bit better attempts at punches with the wordplay and the concepts. don't use " though. it makes your text look forced. both emcees need to work on your structure as well as deliver and punches. The Specialist, your best line was that blunt line, but I just felt like your structure and flow were everywhere.. one bar would be should, the next would be long and felt like it kept going forever. both keep elevating.
When I woke up, the thought "I should fix and devour some Special K" popped in my head
I knew his bag of "Trix" was empty, so I went to his house to bust "Nuts 'n Honey" instead
-good opener
Remember, the next time you call up sex lines, you really need to put down the phone
and demand that your own hand leaves the baloney between your ham hock legs alone
-decent hit
I made sex tapes with your bitch, you're at home livin' the "Married with Children" life
You watched it like a TV "Special", hand in pants like Al Bundy as I "Peg" your wife
-LOTB
vs.
I Take The Fight Outta You, Un Original What You Write You The Type To Bite A Few, True
Epic In Battles Only Cause You Slide Back, You Know...How Michael Would Move
-cool
I'm Over Ya Head, Tommorrow You'll Get Todays Subliminals
I Got This Covered, Leave Em In More Dirt Than Life Long Criminals.
-good hit
Vote: MCMD for more wit, creativity and solid punches. The opener was a dope concept, but the line length was somewhat wordy. Same is true with the second bar, but it still hit, imo. I also liked how you crafted the 'Married With Children' punch. That joint made me LOL! Specialist had some cool concepts, but overall I think he had more misses than MCMD. The MJ line and dirt were cool concepts, so this decision came down to consistency and the line of the battle. No hate to either...
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Remember, the next time you call up sex lines, you really need to put down the phone
and demand that your own hand leaves the baloney between your ham hock legs alone
vs
I'm Over Ya Head, Tommorrow You'll Get Todays Subliminals
I Got This Covered, Leave Em In More Dirt Than Life Long Criminals.
simply had more imagery but weakass battle
v/MCMD
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