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I'll make this "Pussy-Leak-Blood" So many Bullet Holes this "Rookie-Need-Plugs"
He's Mopped Up, MAXI PAD's are INCREDIBLE, who knew they worked on HANDICAP
VEGETABLES, Niggah rides in TAXICAB'S that are EDIBLE, He's a Proved-Liar,
he aint hetero-SEXUAL, He got things only gay Dudes-Acquire, Like *Shit Flows*
and hes top of his class in CHOIR, I Lunge Punches leavin his face like Michael MYERS(oh!),
The fact hes battlin me is SATIRE, I'm the Shepherd of this HAMPSHIRE, his
fire's gone give em a LAMPLIGHTER, No Direction give em a PATHFINDER!
Professional Dick Blower, LYRICAL BAGPIPER, I'm the "Big Picture", your just the GLASS FIBER
Dude thinks he's funny? But, I ain't no faimly guy, and you aint no QUAGMIRE,
Think's hes "Dope" cause his name Amphetamine, He just a HACK WRITER,
I'll flight this dude more then a HAND-GLIDER, and burn em like CAMPFIRE
Enough of your Asinine-Flow When Tech9-Show, On-My-Own I leave Heads-Blown
This dude will never "grow", His Alkaline-Low, He aint dope, So I'll bust the
Palatine's in his Nose! When It comes to the Reefer im Professionally Known,
Fresher then Cervantes from Ultimate-Grow! This battle a KO call me Sylvester STALLONE
He just a Dinner Plate with beef call em a COW-ZONE/CALZONE, Don't talk
back to pimp, I'll grab my glove and Slap This HOE, say Watch ya FOUL TONE
He got Shit-Connections, Talkin to this "asshole" is like callin a BOWEL-PHONE
Server Provider- Anonymous he must be "John-Doe", Ill this dude Rambo Wit HANDS-SEWN
The only gona win this battle is if his 1 FAN CLONED
Easy.. last parts a bit quick I gotta leave in a few hours. So I dropped what I could.
Ill drop expo's tomorrow. so if, you dont understand my bars dont fukin vote.
My headaches from this web fake that writes tuff, but in the streets he peace makes,
any beef, his piece shakes, never used..only flashed as a keep sake//
Rap about dro but only dealt~with~shake~n.. rap about coke but never seen~a~cake~n,
battlin me was bad thinkin, i got this rap~sport centered like troy aikman//
Im ridin-on-top, while u thinking in ya mind-that-you-hot,
son you get grounded like I-was-ya-pops, the internet gave birth to the lies-that-u-drop,
so I’ll spray five-of-them-shots to "e-trade" ya bullshit and liven-ya-stocks//
i'm ruthless, bet that shit. Run over ya wit an SUV, dead~ya~n~jet,
the Navigator tire will be the only thing Link~n your head to your neck//
((Lincoln))
your lines are overdone. cluttered. hurts when spittin~it.
i ain't seen that many unnecessary words since your birth~certificate//
Fill in ya bars homie its a 10BAR battles (20 lines) I only see 12 there.
Ill make this pussy leak blood
So manny bullet hole this pussy need plugs
Vs
Your lines are overdone, cluttered, hurts when spitting it
I ain't seen that many unnecessary words since your birth certificate
Opener: tie
Closer:amp
Punches :amp
Creativity : amp
Nameplay : L.p
overall : amphetamines
L.p... that shit was real hard to follow, your opener was your best line, and it was pretty Corny. Just keep battling mane. Amphetamine, you got potential. Just don't be so wordy, cause niggas will get at you for "forcing bars" trust me I know.but both y'all need work.
Vote amphetamine
I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
Lyrical Prophecy
I'll make this "Pussy-Leak-Blood" So many Bullet Holes this "Rookie-Need-Plugs"
He's Mopped Up, MAXI PAD's are INCREDIBLE, who knew they worked on HANDICAP
VEGETABLES, Niggah rides in TAXICAB'S that are EDIBLE, He's a Proved-Liar,
he aint hetero-SEXUAL, He got things only gay Dudes-Acquire, Like *Shit Flows*
and hes top of his class in CHOIR, I Lunge Punches leavin his face like Michael MYERS(oh!),
The fact hes battlin me is SATIRE, I'm the Shepherd of this HAMPSHIRE, his
fire's gone give em a LAMPLIGHTER, No Direction give em a PATHFINDER!
Professional Dick Blower, LYRICAL BAGPIPER, I'm the "Big Picture", your just the GLASS FIBER
Dude thinks he's funny? But, I ain't no faimly guy, and you aint no QUAGMIRE,
Think's hes "Dope" cause his name Amphetamine, He just a HACK WRITER,
I'll flight this dude more then a HAND-GLIDER, and burn em like CAMPFIRE
Enough of your Asinine-Flow When Tech9-Show, On-My-Own I leave Heads-Blown
This dude will never "grow", His Alkaline-Low, He aint dope, So I'll bust the
Palatine's in his Nose! When It comes to the Reefer im Professionally Known,
Fresher then Cervantes from Ultimate-Grow! This battle a KO call me Sylvester STALLONE
He just a Dinner Plate with beef call em a COW-ZONE/CALZONE, Don't talk
back to pimp, I'll grab my glove and Slap This HOE, say Watch ya FOUL TONE
He got Shit-Connections, Talkin to this "asshole" is like callin a BOWEL-PHONE
Server Provider- Anonymous he must be "John-Doe", Ill this dude Rambo Wit HANDS-SEWN
The only gona win this battle is if his 1 FAN CLONED
VS.
Amphetamine
My headaches from this web fake that writes tuff, but in the streets he peace makes,
any beef, his piece shakes, never used..only flashed as a keep sake//
Rap about dro but only dealt~with~shake~n.. rap about coke but never seen~a~cake~n,
battlin me was bad thinkin, i got this rap~sport centered like troy aikman//
Im ridin-on-top, while u thinking in ya mind-that-you-hot,
son you get grounded like I-was-ya-pops, the internet gave birth to the lies-that-u-drop,
so I’ll spray five-of-them-shots to "e-trade" ya bullshit and liven-ya-stocks//
i'm ruthless, bet that shit. Run over ya wit an SUV, dead~ya~n~jet,
the Navigator tire will be the only thing Link~n your head to your neck//
((Lincoln))
your lines are overdone. cluttered. hurts when spittin~it.
i ain't seen that many unnecessary words since your birth~certificate//
Vote Now!
i ain't seen that many unnecessary words since your birth~certificate, is so over-played he had basic concepts. It's not my fault yall retarded and cant understand my structure, or cant understand my concepts. He didnt even fill in his bars, half the shit he put was forced and over strung out, and on top of that some of it didnt even make any since or rhyme well.
Im ridin-on-top, while u thinking in ya mind-that-you-hot,
son you get grounded like I-was-ya-pops, the internet gave birth to the lies-that-u-drop,
so I’ll spray five-of-them-shots to "e-trade" ya bullshit and liven-ya-stocks//
Really? For real?
Yall voters are a fuckin joke. this why I never text-battle. The tracks and freestyle AUDIO's is what really show skill.
Easy chief. I'm all audio too. But this text battle shit is way different. I was real salty too when niggas wasn't feeling my shit at first.
They judge battles way differently here. Just step your game up
I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
Both of u have 24 hours to get 3 links or Ur Dq'ed
Yeah lyrical, I know exactly how it feels becuase I've only had 5 battles here and voting seems ridiculous. So either stick to the audio battles that do show the skill or get familiar with the battling style that gets u wins here, its what I've been trying to do. Even though you had some tight shit, by these standards I'd give the battle to Amphetamine who clearly has more experience battling or just a better style for it.
...No Direction give em a PATHFINDER!
Professional Dick Blower, LYRICAL BAGPIPER, I'm the "Big Picture", your just the GLASS FIBER
Dude thinks he's funny? But, I ain't no faimly guy, and you aint no QUAGMIRE,
Think's hes "Dope" cause his name Amphetamine, He just a HACK WRITER
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your lines are overdone. cluttered. hurts when spittin~it.
i ain't seen that many unnecessary words since your birth~certificate//
It may seem overplayed but here this closer by Amp is just a solid punch. Lyrical gets the complexity during most of his verse aside from Amp's stock concept but as far as punches and the closer goes, Amp was cleaner.
Breakdown:
Punches- Amp
Flow- Lyrical
Opener- agree with Heff, its a tie
Closer- Amp
Creativity- Tie
I give this to Amp but it was a close battle. Lyrical u just need to tailor your style differently to fit the standards for this forum if you want to win, I can see the skill from audio coming through but it doesn't work the same way here. No hate, keep up the good writin!
fire's gone give em a LAMPLIGHTER, No Direction give em a PATHFINDER!
Professional Dick Blower, LYRICAL BAGPIPER, I'm the "Big Picture", your just the GLASS FIBER
thats the only thing that had ne bang in ur whole post audio or not...this shit just over stretched even on audio ull sound stupid cuz its too many syllables that stretch ur voice in too close a proximity...its like a bad cassidy impression without the swag and n hardpunch...
amp had 2 lines lincoln/opener...both came decent...the rest were hell nos...dont feel like breaking it down in depth...
however...lyrical still muscled through it...tho u got to realize just because it rhymes doesnt mean it fits...yall both had this old AZN dialouge...rap style goin on...lol thats shits old man
"the ink of a scholar, is worth a thousand times more, than the blood of a martyr"--lupe fiasco
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Both don't have links this is closed
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