DEITY vs Hollow Cost (8)

[Hollow Cost]

upppp

[Express'on]

v/ hollow

personal stuck:everyhing else was worded poorly or just sucked
"Under that mask im sure u hide lipsticks and curls, but ill choke girls
Ur digging ur hole so deep, ill put one of ur feet in the grave ....
so you can see the best of 'both worlds'


deity was stretched and made a SEAMEN comment thats an auto loss...lol

[DEITY]

shut the fuck up its(Bwulf not hollow cost), this is a text battle so there are rules). and hollow cost no your not allowed to . the champ match was regulated and they allowed it cos they wanted to but we didn't talk about tit so its not allowed.

[DEITY]

will get links up tonight.

[DEITY]

v/ hollow

personal stuck:everyhing else was worded poorly or just sucked
"Under that mask im sure u hide lipsticks and curls, but ill choke girls
Ur digging ur hole so deep, ill put one of ur feet in the grave ....
so you can see the best of 'both worlds'


deity was stretched and made a SEAMEN comment thats an auto loss...lol

Lots of people talk about rude shit thats against the rules dont just single me out. I aint trying to start shit but cmon people if you can't vote or don't fully understand it then dont.

[Marv.J]

nothin..

vs

Under that mask im sure u hide lipsticks and curls, but ill choke girls
Ur digging ur hole so deep, ill put one of ur feet in the grave ....
so you can see the best of 'both worlds'

there was a whole lot of misses & jus wack punches in this battle...diety ur whole verse was weak to me you need to really work on ur shit..hollow the beginin of ur verse didnt move me but the opener did it for me

v/hc

[JayIgh™]

This “girls” a lesbian sailor spitting out semen (Sea Men) You ran
from me last battle like your name was Cathy freemen.
naw

You saying that you rich but you wallets “Hollow” and empty the
alphabet’s the only place that you will find any-G’s.
very simple didn't like
You aint black, you just a spray tanned wannabe tupac, And
the whole RB knows that your really EYE’RAC.
naw
Niggers should watch out cos Hollow Cost is coming but
The toilet seat is the only place he’ll be bombing.
lol wow you jus said nigger...and naw didn't hit
Got gas comin out your ass cos of nervousness.
I got ether coming out to bite you like Nas cos and I’m impervious.
nope
Now im finishin you off with one last punch you can read it and weep The only way you would escape this murder is if you were dead or you could read in you sleep.
nope

vs

New to rb but your already ina crew but they suck, so face it
All of your subs must have a cold cuz everything u produce is base sick
simple but execute it decent
Fuck what you say, this bitch is soft and would never operate K's
He's keepin 0 wins so he can be ranked number 1 on opposite day
no.
U a stupid beggar came asking for a win but ull leave with hands empty
I know u cant be from Chicago bcuz you will never see a win D
not feelin it
By ur sig i see u think u got skills like mig cotto, ill lay u flat fam
After i beat you blue in the ring ill eat ur ghost like Pac-Man
meh

Under that mask im sure u hide lipsticks and curls, but ill choke girls
Ur digging ur hole so deep, ill put one of ur feet in the grave ....
so you can see the best of 'both worlds'
this is stretched and it didn't hit for me

overall i gotta give this battle to hollow..deity you have alot to work on you should study the punches article rb has on here it'll perhaps help you elevate. Hollow gets this battle because his opening bar and deity's verse didn't have a single punch that landed.

v/hollow

[Filthy McNasty]

Deity: Work on your structure. Your lines word wrap and do not end properly. Your concepts were either weak, or didn't hit in my opinion. The second to last bar was more statementish/self-hype and the closer was definitely stretched.

vs.

Hollow: Your opener was aight. The Win D/windy concept was cool, but I think you could have flipped it a little better. I have seen you come more consistent in other battles, but anyways what I referenced was enough to take the win against your opponent. No hate to either, but continue to perfect your craft and step your game up (especially Deity)...

Vote: Hollow

[Filthy McNasty]

^Mods... change that poll vote to Hollow

[Hollow Cost]

4-0 up

[infinite bars]

This “girls” a lesbian sailor spitting out semen (Sea Men) You ran
from me last battle like your name was Cathy freemen.

vs

New to rb but your already ina crew but they suck, so face it
All of your subs must have a cold cuz everything u produce is base sick

id breakdown the rest but its weak v weak ish so this'll do.

hollow had the better flow, attempts at punches more prepared on clownin u

deity u had stretched bars all around and weak attempts. ur opener was the best bar u had only cause it was simple..flowed. and connected. these guys like the whole "structure" shit to so ur gonna get votes goin against u for that
opener - d
flow - h
punches - h
wordplay - d
personals - h
closer - h

vote - hollow