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$!cko0h
Filthy McNasty
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This is my check...
uppin for S!cko0h to check in...
check.
ready when you are.
lol none of your post feel! set up the thread.. but the host real?
'F MC-N' dont squel .... but your initials only explain how most feel this is brutally painful so stand it! ....now your bones feel the damage
Nasties face is my stomping ground! & im playing with home field advantage
in this one its do or die & fam your playing up against your rival
for you ppl callin they bookies taking the unders on likely hoods of ur survial
this faggit Filthy offend who? if you do show than the hollows bend you
but i doubt it probablly no 1 to tend to cause Mc Chicken... no dollar menu
to me your skills suck & so does ya swag... your still looking up at decent
everyone knows you couldnt drop POWER!.. got some of his recent?
Deadline is 24 hours from your check... I'll post sooner. Make sure you get your 3 voting links in.
What you spit lacks wit... his mom's should of swallowed or pops just jacked it
i'll put $!c in a casket like his life was a mistake surrounded by brackets [sic]
After this W, WE have something in common once I drop a load in your chick
I'll be sexing the bitch like some wrestling shit until she choke holding the dick
She wanted it Monday Night Raw, cause you get on top for 3 seconds wack clown
I have her tap out with precision, knocked out of submission once I lay the SmackDown
16 in the clip? Naw, I'll take it back to 16-bit without N.E.S. trouble fickle
Pull up & kill him busting 3 shots from the top like I'm playing Double Dribble
If any label believed $!ck'll sell........mission failed like his attempt to body me
His style of flow's been passed down like his father calls himself 'The-Prodigy'
lol none of your post feel! set up the thread.. but the host real?
'F MC-N' dont squel .... but your initials only explain how most feel this is brutally painful
nah this was too stretched and had bad wordplay
so stand it! ....now your bones feel the damage
Nasties face is my stomping ground! & im playing with home field advantage
was better than the last line but poorly structured
in this one its do or die & fam your playing up against your rival
for you ppl callin they bookies taking the unders on likely hoods of ur survial
ok concept, could have been worded much better
this faggit Filthy offend who? if you do show than the hollows bend you
but i doubt it probablly no 1 to tend to cause Mc Chicken... no dollar menu
was an ok line
to me your skills suck & so does ya swag... your still looking up at decent
everyone knows you couldnt drop POWER!.. got some of his recent?
terrible closer.
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What you spit lacks wit... his mom's should of swallowed or pops just jacked it
i'll put $!c in a casket like his life was a mistake surrounded by brackets [sic]
good opener
After this W, WE have something in common once I drop a load in your chick
I'll be sexing the bitch like some wrestling shit until she choke holding the dick
was ok
She wanted it Monday Night Raw, cause you get on top for 3 seconds wack clown
I have her tap out with precision, knocked out of submission once I lay the SmackDown
wrestling lines are played out
16 in the clip? Naw, I'll take it back to 16-bit without N.E.S. trouble fickle
Pull up & kill him busting 3 shots from the top like I'm playing Double Dribble
massively forced multi...the double dribble concept was fresh tho
If any label believed $!ck'll sell........mission failed like his attempt to body me
His style of flow's been passed down like his father calls himself 'The-Prodigy'
ok closer.
Pretty one sided battle here $ick seems new. Check Filthy's other battle it was sick but he doesnt want votes there for some reason.
V/Filthy
$!cko0h
lol none of your post feel! set up the thread.. but the host real?
'F MC-N' dont squel .... but your initials only explain how most feel this is brutally painful
first line was flowin good, second line was lookin promisin with the wordplay. looked like u were heading for a punch until u just ruined it (imo) with the brutally painful ish. so that shit backfired.
so stand it! ....now your bones feel the damage
Nasties face is my stomping ground! & im playing with home field advantage
pretty basic but it works. end bar in the second line is forced tho.
in this one its do or die & fam your playing up against your rival
for you ppl callin they bookies taking the unders on likely hoods of ur survial
holy shit, it was soo bad because of the filler u had in dog. jus get to the punch and deliver it smoothly. attempted punch but missed
this faggit Filthy offend who? if you do show than the hollows bend you
but i doubt it probablly no 1 to tend to cause Mc Chicken... no dollar menu
got the concept u brought, it was delivered so-so at best
to me your skills suck & so does ya swag... your still looking up at decent
everyone knows you couldnt drop POWER!.. got some of his recent?
oh man, the closer was wack ma dude. need to bring some punches to knock the fuck out ya challenger. the "got some of his recent?" was just a bad way to end it. it comes off boast like but it'd work if u dropped some flame that toasted the dude. unfortunately, that wasnt the case.
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Filthy McNasty
What you spit lacks wit... his mom's should of swallowed or pops just jacked it
i'll put $!c in a casket like his life was a mistake surrounded by brackets [sic]
the flow came off nice. the punch wasnt much to me but it was an ok opener. funny line wit the swallow ish.
After this W, WE have something in common once I drop a load in your chick
I'll be sexing the bitch like some wrestling shit until she choke holding the dick
besides the consistent multies u had goin for u which i was feelin in the bars, u weren't really clownin him besides some "i fucked ya bitch" remarks.
She wanted it Monday Night Raw, cause you get on top for 3 seconds wack clown
I have her tap out with precision, knocked out of submission once I lay the SmackDown
seen the concept, but the meta's were put together basic. not to mention it was forced and u spittin back to back "i fucked ya bitch" comments...again. get at your opponent, not his bitch!
16 in the clip? Naw, I'll take it back to 16-bit without N.E.S. trouble fickle
Pull up & kill him busting 3 shots from the top like I'm playing Double Dribble
if u think about it, last line doesnt make sense when u mention the double dribble. besides that u were flowin ok. again, a bit forced.
If any label believed $!ck'll sell........mission failed like his attempt to body me
His style of flow's been passed down like his father calls himself 'The-Prodigy'
it flowed and all but no real connect punch to me. need better bars when you tryna close out a battle and thats the last impression you leave on Sick himself, and the voters who ofcourse gotta read this.
opener - filthy
flow - filthy
multies - filthy
punches - filthy
complexity - filthy
personals - none
wordplay - $!c
metaphores - filthy
closer - filthy
vote - filthy
good luck to both.
$!cko0h u have 24 hours to get 3 links or Ur Dq'ed
this faggit Filthy offend who? if you do show than the hollows bend you
but i doubt it probablly no 1 to tend to cause Mc Chicken... no dollar menu
not really a hard punch but i decided to give u a quotable, definetly needs rewording
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What you spit lacks wit... his mom's should of swallowed or pops just jacked it
i'll put $!c in a casket like his life was a mistake surrounded by brackets [sic]
had potential but wording hurt it
She wanted it Monday Night Raw, cause you get on top for 3 seconds wack clown
I have her tap out with precision, knocked out of submission once I lay the SmackDown
ohkish
one sided battle, filth got this one with bettet attempts/structure. both need to work on wording. no hate
v/Filth
Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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so stand it! ....now your bones feel the damage
Nasties face is my stomping ground! & im playing with home field advantage
in this one its do or die & fam your playing up against your rival
for you ppl callin they bookies taking the unders on likely hoods of ur survial
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FM:
What you spit lacks wit... his mom's should of swallowed or pops just jacked it
i'll put $!c in a casket like his life was a mistake surrounded by brackets [sic]
She wanted it Monday Night Raw, cause you get on top for 3 seconds wack clown
I have her tap out with precision, knocked out of submission once I lay the SmackDown
vote - filth, he had the better punchlines there for sure.
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
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v/ filthy...even tho he almost lost instanteously for a FUCKING SMACKDOWN punchline...never bro ever do that lame ass punchline that u could see coming from a mile away...hmmm wat rhymes with "wack clown"...hmmm...lol...good bracket punch creative..
and for sic...for real a mcdonalds line...lol and ORANGE (ok concept)for real...lol...neways ur verse sucked for the most part only highlighted by advantage line that wasnt stretched but seemed stretched cuz bad wording...ne ways bro elevate
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this faggit Filthy offend who? if you do show than the hollows bend you
but i doubt it probablly no 1 to tend to cause Mc Chicken... no dollar menu
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After this W, WE have something in common once I drop a load in your chick
I'll be sexing the bitch like some wrestling shit until she choke holding the dick
Straight up Sic you got the rhyming potential and the ideas, but the punches just need to be more solid. Even flow was decent but Filthy got you on the landing more punches. Good creativity on both parts, but I cant say enough the punches are the key for you to elevate Sic. I can give you more detail if you want it in terms of how you could make your lines hit harder, etc. This just doesn't require breakdown because Filth had the punchlines. No hate, keep ya heads up
v/Filth
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