Battles Are Set Up On Monday
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Battles Are Set Up On Monday
Check In's Are Due by Wednesday at 11:59p.m. EST
Punches Are Due by Thursday at 11:59p.m. EST
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I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
die
You're not just going thru a phase(faze)
You really are the queerish type
And its funny, cause as much as he likes assholes
This pussy isn't near as tight
I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
My rhymes are on a much higher level, all yours are just keyd whack
nah your writing is up to my lines, ..when your giving me feedback
Umm wtf @ Heffs delivery.. the concept alright but that wording was just bad and i refuse to give a vote to someone who writes 4 lines in a 2 line battle so v/ Faze
heff, work on your wording, both those lines could have been fit to one line giving you two solid ones. take out some of the filler vocab, nice concepts. Faze your punch was bland to me... I didnt feel it at all. Even though your structure was way off I have to vote for heff in this, at least he had what could be called a punch, I didnt even think faze threw a small punch but just my opinion. For future ref I agree with what rapstyles said in that you shouldnt be writing quartets when you only need to write a couplet. Anyways.
V/Heff Dollas.
^ ditto. The concept was nice, heff..don't chop your lines like that just word it better.
Faze, I didn't think your punch was hard enough...
V-heff
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^ ditto. The concept was nice, heff..don't chop your lines like that just word it better.
Faze, I didn't think your punch was hard enough...
V-heff
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I don't break a sweat when i wreck creational damage.
I do that in my spare time.. that's recreational damage
ok..:
Heff pretty good entertaining bar nice and funny. good simple wordplay. Structure was kinda... blehh
Faze nice bar. pretty good personal was simple could have added more thought to make it hit a little more harder..
This was a close battle in my opinion but the vote is going to go to Heff..
His was funnier.
heffs was made played plus it had no sting to it. Faze's wasnt tight but it was a better punch. worded poorly but still better.
v. faze
both wack but faze had more thought behind it.. heff used an old children rhymes type of shit..
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heff's honest to god seemed a bit better to me...
despite his structure or how he put his lines together...still read's as a 1-2..although a comma wouldnt been sufficient instead of the 'enter' key
wasnt feelin faze's concept as much...heff's was funnier
V/Heff....suprisingly ....and of course no hate.
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faze has this one imo a little more complexity in his bar. heff did have a good punch but the wp was just ok
v/faze
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