Battles Are Set Up On Monday
Check In's Are Due by Wednesday at 11:59p.m. EST
Punches Are Due by Thursday at 11:59p.m. EST
Battles Are Set Up On Monday
Check In's Are Due by Wednesday at 11:59p.m. EST
Punches Are Due by Thursday at 11:59p.m. EST
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Listen skirt, hit the dirt when the toast fire, or get the flame to ya head like ghostrider
And don't feel too bad about loosing ... blame it on your ghostwriter
this cowboy couldn't heff dolla$ in the cache, clutchin on a calf cramp
I'd lasso dudes food just to be crude, but couldnt get nothin offa half stamps
eh, weak battle here... I got Egaffur taking this by a hair for more creativity.
DayumNation
vote egaffur i thought his was harder and better structured den dollas, dollas bar was madd stretched
Both came weak.. Dolla it's was just a little too simple... Other dude came legit, better than dolla.. No hate to either but it was a weak battle but eg had the better concept and better way of delivering it.. V/Eg
vote egaffur heff came to basic
Gotta go with Egaffur for a little bit better concept and delivery. Heff came a little too soft imo...
Vote- Egaffur
Design.
Both came weak here tbh. Heff's concept was just too simple and lacked creativity. So im gonna go with Egaffur on this one.
V/Egafurr
Thx for all the votes so far, and I don't mean that because they're all for me. It's appreciated to see people voting up on these. Anyways. I would appreciate some feedback on how I could come with better concepts, or wordplay/nameplay, timing ect. I've looked around at some of the 'classic' battles and have an idea of what worked in the past but I'm trying to craft my own style in a way.
V/eg aka no meat
Weak battle bla bla etc. Egaff had the better attempt out of the two which is why he gets my vote. I liked the flow of heff's punch tho.
Heff...I felt your drop was a little too forced, and wasn't really any personals on your opponent, which I would've liked to have seen. Egaffur, weak punch..But I felt it was enough in this battle to get my vote. Came off better and had a little bit more sting I guess you can say
\/-Egaffur
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Eg, I like your word choice for this, the vocab fit your concept, so you at least have that going for you.
Heff, it's gonna be RREEAEAAAALLLLYYYYY difficult to come up with a fresh way to use ghostwriter, I would LOVE to see it, but for now it's the oldest punch in the text battle realm.
Vote = Eg
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