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    Endless Lifeline

    Just wrote this up really quick. Tried focusing on multis, and there's no real story...links coming soon

    you hear me spittin out these rhymes, these rhymes im gettin out on time
    these times im in prime, in my prime i am sublime
    although sublime i feel enshrined in my mind, i feel inclined to confine
    my lyrics inside this healthy divide
    i tried and tried, tried to make my inner pain subside
    but still im losin my mind and becomin blind to my malign
    and by design i feel entwined in these lines, i feel im running outta time
    time is the only thing that keeps me alive
    and though i barely survive im still strivin to thrive
    in a world of cruels intentions, a world where no one contrives
    and still, i despise, those who surmise
    those who theorize that my life cannot be revived
    i derive, from the greatest lyrical mastermind
    and you'll find that life is one big rollercoaster ride
    in my lifetime, i've gone from champ to chump on a dime
    i find that sometimes fate is just an endless lifeline

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    Re: Endless Lifeline

    my dude, you have the wrong definition of what a multi (fuck i hate that word) is...find out what one is, then write this piece again and i'll feed it

    #1 stay up
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    closed get links pm me

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