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good luck!
12 Lines...
verse due 1 hour from your check.
house rules.
good luck!
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
make it 24 hours to drop and im good
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links coming after he checks in and posts a verse!...
you see M he tries to act all loco wit his raps but thats a joke tho
we have all seen MCs forget there lines b4........
...but Vs stuck in a choke-hold
your signature is a sign your whack Var and thats all we usually see
cuz here zombies are not a threat to kill like this was call of duty 3
why you battle still a mystery M-Var!o`s the badest in the history
you cant get all mad and pissed at me...
cuz ya punches miss ya fist resists this friction like static electricity
plays the rap game like an old tymer thats why hes obscure and senile
always droppin his played lines...
...then acting like thats some shit we havnt seen or heard in awhile!
step in the ring ive had you on the ropes since the opening ding
so the only way your not gettin KO`d is if I forget to post my links!
he tries to rap with enthusiasm his name even has an exclamation mark
but M-Var just know...everything after it....!
..... are exactly what our expectations are!(0)
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
your forever bummy dumbie, saying u get pussys a dead lie
you'll never be fresh, so the day that u get laid'll be the day that PIGs' Fly
im dylan spitting hot fire, while your drops are barely even interestin
the way my bars burn P, you would think he had a venereal infection
your skills are weak as fuck King and Arch had no problems to bury you
battled Marv before he's strong competition...
but that doesnt mean he should have to carry you
You have ADHD and still people find you awkward and gay
avy shows how to get your attention...just dangle balls in your face
PIG KILLAZ? your from a family of farmers, this hill billys a trickster
so when i said i fucked his bitch, he immediately broke up with his sister
end you through ya family, if i see ya son imma torture the fat kid
cut his spine reach in, then imma pull out Pigs baby back ribs
good luck homie
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M-Var!o
your forever bummy dumbie, saying u get pussys a dead lie
you'll never be fresh, so the day that u get laid'll be the day that PIGs' Fly
This line went completely over my head the first time I read it and I thought it was just a basic little "oh haha cliche saying" diss. But when I reread I was like "Ohhhhhh. Shit, kinda dope. Never be Fresh until Pig's Fly" Double entendre like shit.
(P.I.)GKillaZ
he tries to rap with enthusiasm his name even has an exclamation mark
but M-Var just know...everything after it....!
..... are exactly what our expectations are!(0)
Bodybag Ending right here. Flawless and hard hitting. Some of your bars seemed forced and soft, like the Static Electricity line, but this definitely covered for it.
Overall, dope battle. Hard to say who I'd choose to win. Rereading over them both now, I think by like a milli-margin, I'd give the W to P.I.
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
he tries to rap with enthusiasm his name even has an exclamation mark
but M-Var just know...everything after it....!
..... are exactly what our expectations are!(0)
this was iight
step in the ring ive had you on the ropes since the opening ding
so the only way your not gettin KO`d is if I forget to post my links!
mild hit here
vs
your forever bummy dumbie, saying u get pussys a dead lie
you'll never be fresh, so the day that u get laid'll be the day that PIGs' Fly
cool hit
m dylan spitting hot fire, while your drops are barely even interestin
the way my bars burn P, you would think he had a venereal infection
mild nameflip
You have ADHD and still people find you awkward and gay
avy shows how to get your attention...just dangle balls in your face
i liked it
vote--> m vario. his lines were deliveryed better and he was more consistent with stronger hits
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...393/index.html
Battle's Best Lines
your signature is a sign your whack Var and thats all we usually see
cuz here zombies are not a threat to kill like this was call of duty 3
he tries to rap with enthusiasm his name even has an exclamation mark
but M-Var just know...everything after it....!
..... are exactly what our expectations are!(0)
^^ nice personal hits, decent multis
your skills are weak as fuck King and Arch had no problems to bury you
battled Marv before he's strong competition...
but that doesnt mean he should have to carry you
^^ kinda simple wordplay but i thought it was ur best attack in the verse
INTRO/CLOSER -- GKILLAZ
i wasnt really feelin either's opener, but g ended with a hard personal
PUNCHLINES -- GKILLAZ
a lil bit of filler from both, but g's 4 lines above & his static electricity line trumped most of m-var's played concepts
MULTIS -- GKILLAZ
both emcees could use some internal rhyming in there lines, but g took this by a long shot. not necessarily cuz of the length (g had a 7-syll multi) but the creativity in the choice of words used.
WORDPLAY -- GKILLAZ
i thought g had better similies & metas, but no one came with any wordplay that made me wish i wrote that shit
PERSONALS -- TIE
both hit each other on the personal tip for almost every attack so i'ma give this a tie, but i thought g's USE of the personals were better.
vote (P.I.)GKILLAZ
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Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Iz
Okay I don't have enough posts so cant vote but I'll feed.
GKillaz- your shit wasn't that bad. You had some nice concepts in there definalty. My advice would be to try to word the metaphors better so they can become more direct. Ya know? and then make the punchline hit hard. Your flow is nice. But i think you should just work on your concepts and wording.
step in the ring ive had you on the ropes since the opening ding
so the only way your not gettin KO`d is if I forget to post my links!
^I actually liked that line.
Keep it up bro.
vs.
M-Vario - not bad at all man. your flow isn't to bad. i meen, it was off at points. you stretched out the sentences and it kinda threw stuff off. here and there you hit it on point. your concepts were funny, and landed a couple pretty smoothly. you can work a little on the wording and concepts, but keep it up. i would work on your flow and trying to shorten the shit. it's different not on a mic.
im dylan spitting hot fire, while your drops are barely even interestin
the way my bars burn P, you would think he had a venereal infection
PIG KILLAZ? your from a family of farmers, this hill billys a trickster
so when i said i fucked his bitch, he immediately broke up with his sister
^These were kinda funny.
Anyway, overall this battle wasn't bad. Both of you have potential. so i like to see that. I'll read more of your shit in the future.
v/ - vario.
haha I was just waiting for someone to say my only line that didnt rhyme was my only good one! good stuff thx for the feed, ill keep that in mind for my next battle.
upping
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
bump!, why are people sleeping!. this battle has bars!
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
bump
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gkillaz killed this with the punchs it was a rap the closer nice
m varo or what ever you was killin it to you just didnt come as hard aas him
lets get some more votes!
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