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    My 1st Loverap

    Baby I wanna be your man, I got a plan all laid out for you and me. Please just take my hand. I want you to so bad. Never seen a girl so beautiful, your definetly not the usual girl, I want you to come into my world, and be my girl. I write these songs about love, trying to express my self, hope im not falling too short of you possibly becoming my girl. I want to give you everything I can to keep you happy, to keep making you walk away with a smile on your face. This is why I write this song so maybe someday we can embrace. You and me thast all I want it to be. Please just listen to these words and accept my love for you baby. Please just maybe.
    Ya I know my name aint slim shady, but come lady, everytime I see your face. My heart melts cause you’re like a perfect ace and i start wishing I could be with you forever. I wanna run my hand down your face that’s soft as a feather. Don’t even get me started on your eyes. Beautiful like painting, that I could stare at for ages and ages. Your hair is so wonderful and everything else about you. I wouldn’t trade you for anything or anyone else in a heartbeat, girl you would make me so complete. I would make sure i never mistreated you because baby your so damn sweet. That’s a promise, and im keep it deep deep down like a dark secret. Lock it up and seal it. Im gonna be on this 24/7. Girl let me take you to seventh heaven

    Someday I picture you and me, together living so happily, but that’s just a dream for now until I make it a reality. If only you could see the bright future of you and me.

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    Re: My 1st Loverap

    This is certainly the wrong place for this, sir.

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    My 1st Loverap

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    Re: My 1st Loverap

    places where most people shouldnt go

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    Re: My 1st Loverap

    all i gotta say is wow
    yhu need mad improvement bro
    structure better nd put some rhyme scheme in it
    dat was jus like reading a paragraph for me
    elevate homie
    Sticky or da Kid, which one if these two is able to write and awe,
    One's business one artistic so its likely they would tie or draw,

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    Re: My 1st Loverap

    edit
    Last edited by Sticky da Kid; February 3rd, 2011 at 04:38 AM Reason: posted twice
    Sticky or da Kid, which one if these two is able to write and awe,
    One's business one artistic so its likely they would tie or draw,

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