Quick track... on some "sorry girl, love you but i cant change" type shit. Didnt want to drag the topic out by making a whole song, so I made it 1 verse just breakin in the lab.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...976/index.html
cool beat with a nice vibe. you have a cool voice and I also like how you deliver it. You def brought ya swagger on this type joint. lyrics was straight. nothing really else too say. it's a short track but you came nice. good stuff
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good story telling, good flow, sounds chill. Pretty creative lyrics " The man in me adores you, but the kid in me ain't loyal" Good track man, nice drop.
rtf if possible:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...871/index.html
hit me up for collabs
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Pros:
The flow, the delivery, The lyrics
Cons:
The length of the track
The actual audio presentation was very flawless in terms of the execution. Your wording makes the flow smooth and the delivery is aided by a lot of emotion. The lyrics are great because they are of the personal nature.
The track's length presents the only flaw...
Return the Feed Please...
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was feeling this right here,thought the beat was pretty nice as well. i would like to do a track with you if your interested.
i'll pm you shortly if so.
once again good track and return the feed on mine if you have time - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...619/index.html
3:1 Feedback Format: I listen to the first 60 seconds of a song and critique it. If it's dope, I'll let it ride out for the full length.
3 +s (Pros)
1 - (Cons)
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Review:
(+)Beat...like the cadence of it...created the right atmosphere for the lyrical content
(+)Flow...solid
(+)Delivery...matched the beat well
(-)Chorus...sounds incomplete to me...where was it?
Overall: You can spit...def. keep droppin
Did I let it ride out? yes
Plz RTF on "Juz Rhymin'"
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wow, thanks a lot yall... look forward to hearin from you j. ima check out all the tracks right now. and yea, there is no chorus... its meant to be an interlude or somethin of that nature
I'm diggin this, the mix is off which is pretty much the downside of this however your flow is impressive, can't really make out all the lyrics because the mix is shaky but from what I can tell I can really dig this, hate that its so short tho...one verse...props for what its worth tho bruh keep droppin
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
good lookin, im still tryin to figure out how to mix properly.. shits aggrevatin haha
Peepin, this beat is somethin I'd fuck with for sure. whos on the production? vocals come in, smooth voice, smooth flow. its nice. I dont mind the mixing, i think it fits the beat well. the delivery is on point my man. this is real nice. nothin bad to say man, it was a cool drop.
the chorus is also nice, nice and quiet and smooth. the whole tracks tight.
you down for a collab get at me man.
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smooth, i can hear your swag in this, you got a good flow. i think the vocals could be turned up a bit, but its rides. i like the little bridge/hook thing at the end. i'd probably listen to a whole song of this, good shit my dude!
this is cool... beat is nicee... flow is cool... lyrics is aight... delivery is aight... im diggin this.. wish it was longer... good shit keep it up
good looks
this was good for a chick track, flow was smooth and lyrics were good for this, delivery was good too...i like the beat also
jammin...ok beat is cool just smooth...i thought it wud be longer...but yeah nice lil story...lyrics were nice....flow was good...idk shit bout mixing or w/e...but i def liked what u did on this...tha concept was well done too...enjoyed it...keep on writing bruh...
yo plz RTF on THA DRUNKEN TWIST...thanx
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