10 EST, 10 lines.
BrI
Lil Whitey
10 EST, 10 lines.
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in it..ill prob drop less than 10.
You have to drop 10 or DQ..Read the rules..
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i posted 2-4 bars by tonight or tom. if needed...so u read the rules, im droppin around that..u can drop w.e...who cares. gl'
I asked for ten lines, you agreed. That's what your dropping or you'll prolly be dq'ed.
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This boy claims to shoot you with a gun, but he’ll only leave a scar,
You guys know if there was a movie about fags, he’d be the star,
Challenging anyone who dares him in the first day, 2-4 bars,
But If you change it to ten lines, he sits and cries like a child actor,
This boy wants a contract so he can hit it big time,
But It’ll be terminated while writing his first line,
In this case imagination is more important than knowledge, Einstein,
He sits at home in his chair, calling up record labels,
This boy is second in line to be the worst, only behind Bieber,
Oh wait I didn’t mean to insult your mentor, I know you got the fever.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...480/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=443554
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=443415
I'm back bitches!
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gl'..
Im so-stacked-with punches, but you..you flow-whack-kid..
Hall of Fame? na youll never see this white-head like usin proactiv…
Your weaker-fool, leave u barely standing so u need-your-stool..
Crowds say bri merked..but white-bored(board) like a teachers-tool…
my hits-shakin leavin this kid-achin, ur just a bitch-sayin…
Complainin about lines and times-too(2x) like multiplication…
i do this to-vent, leavin people wonderin where this dude-went...
givin respect..RB chose to leave white-out (whiteout) like a clumsy student...
let the clash-begin..better bars is what you never had-me-in...
cuz dope lines..you'll never see with white like kim kardashian..
This boy claims to shoot you with a gun, but he’ll only leave a scar,
You guys know if there was a movie about fags, he’d be the star,
set up was alright but didnt end well
Challenging anyone who dares him in the first day, 2-4 bars,
But If you change it to ten lines, he sits and cries like a child actor,
didnt rhyme
This boy wants a contract so he can hit it big time,
But It’ll be terminated while writing his first line,
nahh
In this case imagination is more important than knowledge, Einstein,
He sits at home in his chair, calling up record labels,
nope
This boy is second in line to be the worst, only behind Bieber,
Oh wait I didn’t mean to insult your mentor, I know you got the fever.
nahh
vs
Im so-stacked-with punches, but you..you flow-whack-kid..
Hall of Fame? na youll never see this white-head like usin proactiv…
decent
Your weaker-fool, leave u barely standing so u need-your-stool..
Crowds say bri merked..but white-bored(board) like a teachers-tool…
lol
my hits-shakin leavin this kid-achin, ur just a bitch-sayin…
Complainin about lines and times-too(2x) like multiplication…
ehh
i do this to-vent, leavin people wonderin where this dude-went...
givin respect..RB chose to leave white-out (whiteout) like a clumsy student...
iight
let the clash-begin..better bars is what you never had-me-in...
cuz dope lines..you'll never see with white like kim kardashian..
lol
Bri took this battle with better bunches, but a word of advice a lot of ur punches had the same concepts, try to switch it up a little
Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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appreciate it. 1-0
uppin
Nothing
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In this case imagination is more important than knowledge, Einstein,
He sits at home in his chair, calling up record labels,
This boy is second in line to be the worst, only behind Bieber,
Oh wait I didn’t mean to insult your mentor, I know you got the fever.
Lil whitey came nice on this one . BrI could have got more flow in his verse,
suckx. at any nice kind of, multies,punches ,metaphors and all
v/lil whitey
PQ
Lil Whitey:
he had a better flow but his punchlines are wack. :
"This boy is second in line to be the worst, only behind Bieber,
Oh wait I didn’t mean to insult your mentor, I know you got the fever."
^This explains alot.
VS.
Bri :
he had better punchlines, but your flow was wack :
"i do this to-vent, leavin people wonderin where this dude-went...
givin respect..RB chose to leave white-out (whiteout) like a clumsy student..."
^wasnt the best punchline, but better then lil whitey.
Basically you both had what each other lacked of.
You both need to work more on your punchlines.
In this case BrI had better punch lines, and this is a battle so punchlines will take more effect then flow.
Vote goes to BrI
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2-1...uppin
let the clash-begin..better bars is what you never had-me-in...
cuz dope lines..you'll never see with white like kim kardashian..
^ehh iight
Your weaker-fool, leave u barely standing so u need-your-stool..
Crowds say bri merked..but white-bored(board) like a teachers-tool…
^ cool
verse
nothing
vote--> bri -other guy didnt have shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...569/index.html
thanks, appreciate it..will return votes once able to..3-1
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