10 lines due 1 hour from check
this is my check
and you are now my little bitch
10 lines due 1 hour from check
this is my check
and you are now my little bitch
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We''ll see if your fake or just a pussy 13 year old in an hour.
Check, Also.
You keep telling all these easy battlers to take a long walk off a short pier,
But according to all these idiots and fucktards, your still here,
You got a fist called knowledge? You must have one called ignorant,
Because it seems to me your spelling worse than an immigrant,
You making these other fools crumble on tough decisions,
But you won’t make this nigga cause hes hitting with precision,
He must have battled you to start no where and go downhill,
If he battled you again, shit I think he might go down still,
Someone told me that you were fucking a mister,
Truth is, you been fucking your sister
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...477/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...309/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=443509
youve been written down in the books as a bitch thats jus as wack
sorry but the thing is by knocking white-out all over ... i wont turn the pages blank
youve been known to rage for sack, and if you reach ur gettin smacked
gettin aids from fuckin dads is the only time this kid will ever get an "ill contract"
this is noob speaking, im sonning this kid cus ive been a winner
i spit hot , but if this is my junior/june ur proving the theory bout nuclear winter
if u get souped u = dinner, kid prolly tastes as bad as his rhymes
and if thats true i guess i cant blame u for spittin em out half of the time
your talent meter aint equal to even half of mine ten bucks says i beat em fine
with 9 and a half lines.
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this faggot sweet on the dick? u not straight so stop it..
the last time i seen ya wit some Eye Candy..... i stuck ya bars in ya socket..
i get paid to kill faggots like you, here's another bid for a stack..
i'll just barbie cue this doll and pull the ribs outta Rac..
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You got a fist called knowledge? You must have one called ignorant,
Because it seems to me your spelling worse than an immigrant,
You making these other fools crumble on tough decisions,
But you won’t make this nigga cause hes hitting with precision,
He must have battled you to start no where and go downhill,
If he battled you again, shit I think he might go down still,
G!MMICK Good punches and flow though I debt if you already had some written for the call out
LilWhitey good verse though to much line biting
v/G!MMICK
PQ
thats not even in his verse?
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Thats not in your verse.. :P
lol yes thats wat imeant
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lil whitey... concepts werent really there...the style was really newbie
ish plus there wasnt any wordplay or creativity... seemed more like
a diss verse then an actual battle verse
vs
G!MMIK ... i thought you'd come harder than this but after i read his
verse i saw that you didnt have to come hard...one punch would have
ended his swiftly...wordplay was a little simple at times but decent...
but overall decent
overall G!mmik FTW
Why is everyone that can't vote, Commenting lol.
if u get souped u = dinner, kid prolly tastes as bad as his rhymes
and if thats true i guess i cant blame u for spittin em out half of the time
your talent meter aint equal to even half of mine ten bucks says i beat em fine
with 9 and a half lines.
this was nice i like the ending gimmick
this the only line from little whitey
He must have battled you to start no where and go downhill,
If he battled you again, shit I think he might go down still
i vote gimmick
Since none of you can actually fucking vote,
Uppin.
I'm back bitches!
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lil whitey:
You keep telling all these easy battlers to take a long walk off a short pier,
But according to all these idiots and fucktards, your still here,
2.5/5 - iight opener.
You got a fist called knowledge? You must have one called ignorant,
Because it seems to me your spelling worse than an immigrant,
3/5 - good punch.
You making these other fools crumble on tough decisions,
But you won’t make this nigga cause hes hitting with precision,
1/5 - weak.
He must have battled you to start no where and go downhill,
If he battled you again, shit I think he might go down still,
1/5 - nah.
Someone told me that you were fucking a mister,
Truth is, you been fucking your sister
0/5 - wtf? real weak closer.
7.5
your verse flowed well, it started off pretty decent, but I felt it just fell off after the first few bars.
Gimmic:
youve been written down in the books as a bitch thats jus as wack
sorry but the thing is by knocking white-out all over ... i wont turn the pages blank
2/5 - meh opener.
youve been known to rage for sack, and if you reach ur gettin smacked
gettin aids from fuckin dads is the only time this kid will ever get an "ill contract"
2/5 - another meh line.
this is noob speaking, im sonning this kid cus ive been a winner
i spit hot , but if this is my junior/june ur proving the theory bout nuclear winter
2.5/5 - iight. flow was a bit off.
if u get souped u = dinner, kid prolly tastes as bad as his rhymes
and if thats true i guess i cant blame u for spittin em out half of the time
3/5 - good.
your talent meter aint equal to even half of mine ten bucks says i beat em fine
with 9 and a half lines.
3/5 - lol, i liked this.
12.5
started off weak ended strong, clearly did enough to win this battle. peace.
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
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