gettn tired of uppin this shit lol
MarvJ
PipeGunz
gettn tired of uppin this shit lol
.......
upppppp
pipe...u need to sit down and just construct a battle verse taking your
time...this seems so rushed and keystyle...with everyline damn near being a miss... u gotta take your time homie...more creativity better rhyme schemes... because this wasnt a well written battle verse
vs
marv... you had a decent verse probably didnt put to much into it...
i think the suicide line was the highlight... was def like line of the
battle...simple yet effective....but yea
overall vote marv for better punches more equipped battle verse
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