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Thread: Memory

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    Memory



    ^^hit the link above


    i left feed on these links below vv
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...585/index.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...520/index.html




    all feedbacc will be returned.remember to like the video if you do and leave a comment on it.

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    ^^^My YOUTUBE IS CRACCIN^^^

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    Re: Memory

    fix your sig...
    Straight from the start of the hook i knew i'd like this. Your voice is nice has a comfortable vibe to it, it's quite soothing. I liked the beat pretty nice, your flow on point. Lyrics could use a little work would be the only criticism i could give (Like i'd like some more metaphors but thats just preference i guess coming from a topical background)

    All your audio skills are nice, delivery flow mic presence...keep it up fam

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    Re: Memory

    um feeling this track my g...one of my fav ones from ya album...real smooth, hook was nice, everything flowed nicely...lyrics wer decent...overall this track iz good man...u got on some personal shit on this one n um feelin it...i checked ya feed u left me too and yea we can definitely collab um actually gotta track u can hop on right now ...ill pm u about it
    My New Mixtape On Datpiff -
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    Re: Memory

    well cuz of this song i d/l'ed ur mixtape on datpiff, good shit. you know how how to flow on beat, good rapping voice. picked a nice beat for your verses. nice intro too, short opener w/ a soft beat then it picks up w/ the guy singing, and of corse that guy sings well, gave you a nice hook for the song. and ya this was an emotional track for you, some personal shit, it's good. lyrics were ok, not that great, but im sure you can get better at that. you got some good potential in you, keep elevating dog

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    Re: Memory

    beats a bit slow and low for me but u flowed to it well, lyrics were ok, hook sounded good

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    Re: Memory

    thanks for the feedbacc and the download as well bro.if you need me to rtf on anything leave a link

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    Re: Memory

    uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppp

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    Re: Memory

    it was a very relaxing track,a step back from all the noise we been hearing in here lately
    as Kauz 'N Effectz said the onlying thing it could have used was a little more creativity
    in the use of your metas.Flow ,rhythmic tone everything was nice
    good work to you and anyone who may have helped you on this track
    PQ

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    Re: Memory

    fix your sig...

    Straight from the start of the hook i knew i'd like this. Your voice is nice has a comfortable vibe to it, it's quite soothing. I liked the beat pretty nice, your flow on point. Lyrics could use a little work would be the only criticism i could give (Like i'd like some more metaphors but thats just preference i guess coming from a topical background)



    All your audio skills are nice, delivery flow mic presence...keep it up fam










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    Re: Memory

    thanks for the feed.i think personally if i was more lyrical it would over complicate the tracc.

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