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Last edited by Uncle Sam; February 5th, 2011 at 03:04 AM
Last edited by Shunned1; February 7th, 2011 at 03:11 PM
Shunned since '01....
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Last edited by Jesus Christ; February 6th, 2011 at 02:05 PM
you're wack, trashy & tasteless, you know that nigga shunned1
so when i break him of nose n home i just consider it bum fun.
i'm a bit cliche`, these days its too hard not to be -
cuz when they say 'your outta your league' its cuz we want u to leave.
it's friday n shit, so you know i gotta get hammered n drunk - chill
cuz when the night ends you're gunna get a clubbin harder than i will.
ima make this quick because this bitch isn't even close to me
so i'ma crusifiy you n ya khanceps like Jesus was supposed to be.
you's a lost cause..... please restart cuz you ain't dope or gettin ya fix user
when i press ur buttons, hope its ^^ on your computer..
don't care what all the critics say... so i'll give you my thesis
ur verses are like this weeks mag..
..they'd say its dope when they dont even read it.
thats 12
It's like Talladega Nights how R.B. belittles this faggot,
This little 8lb., 6 ounce baby jesus, just fell out of the wicker basket.
Got caught in hell and high water, see him drowning viciously,
In an overbearing ocean of atheism, moses couldn't split this sea.
Girls take 1 look at ur face, scream ur name & run frantically,
You had to turn water to wine, ur legit attempts failed drastically.
In this crucifixion, i'll snap a photo to help you ease the pain,
Because we know a picture of Jesus only takes one nail to hang.
You claim to be original, named after a prophet, great disguise,
Your lines are like your religion, Jesus....nothing but plagiarized.
I'm dropping twelve......when you read that you were stifled,
When he talks of going twelve, he means riding on his disciples.
Shunned since '01....
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Damnit, you guys..
There is no quotable lines here
JC had some better attempts imo, worded better and shunned had some big big misses
man you just have to figure out how to word them and make them make sense, so work on your execution of your concept so your punches land
I'm gonna vote JC just because of a cleaner better written verse
i'm a bit cliche`, these days its too hard not to be -
cuz when they say 'your outta your league' its cuz we want u to leave.
vs
You claim to be original, named after a prophet, great disguise,
Your lines are like your religion, Jesus....nothing but plagiarized.
vote--> jesus
weak battle both had a ton of misses..shunn seemed like he had the idea but just lacked delivery the punch. i thought u had good setups but thats it
came down to these 2 bars. n jc's was stronger
i'm a bit cliche`, these days its too hard not to be -
cuz when they say 'your outta your league' its cuz we want u to leave
vs
In this crucifixion, i'll snap a photo to help you ease the pain,
Because we know a picture of Jesus only takes one nail to hang.
You claim to be original, named after a prophet, great disguise,
Your lines are like your religion, Jesus....nothing but plagiarized.
battle was a weak one imo ...both missed a whole lot with their punches...but i felt that jesus was lacking creativity and he failed badly with his punches...shunned imo came with better attempts and with more creativity...
vote - shunned
you're wack, trashy & tasteless, you know that nigga shunned1
so when i break him of nose n home i just consider it bum fun.
missed here
i'm a bit cliche`, these days its too hard not to be -
cuz when they say 'your outta your league' its cuz we want u to leave.
decent
it's friday n shit, so you know i gotta get hammered n drunk - chill
cuz when the night ends you're gunna get a clubbin harder than i will.
ok... not that hard of a hit
ima make this quick because this bitch isn't even close to me
so i'ma crusifiy you n ya khanceps like Jesus was supposed to be.
meh...
you's a lost cause..... please restart cuz you ain't dope or gettin ya fix user
when i press ur buttons, hope its ^^ on your computer..
no
don't care what all the critics say... so i'll give you my thesis
ur verses are like this weeks mag..
..they'd say its dope when they dont even read it.
lol... decent
vs.
It's like Talladega Nights how R.B. belittles this faggot,
This little 8lb., 6 ounce baby jesus, just fell out of the wicker basket.
nah
Got caught in hell and high water, see him drowning viciously,
In an overbearing ocean of atheism, moses couldn't split this sea.
eh... missed here
Girls take 1 look at ur face, scream ur name & run frantically,
You had to turn water to wine, ur legit attempts failed drastically.
nah
In this crucifixion, i'll snap a photo to help you ease the pain,
Because we know a picture of Jesus only takes one nail to hang.
would have hit if JC was held by one nail... but he had three
You claim to be original, named after a prophet, great disguise,
Your lines are like your religion, Jesus....nothing but plagiarized.
meh
I'm dropping twelve......when you read that you were stifled,
When he talks of going twelve, he means riding on his disciples.
lol... funny
close battle here, but I got J.C. winning by a hair...
vote- J.C.
DayumNation
jc had sum swag, shunned fuckd up a few concepts but I can c his creativity.. I think jc was tighter n had the better wrdd shit vote jc
Fool ima vet u can bet that I can dance under water an not get wet
idk. I'm seeing shunned1 pulling this one. he had that Jesus/picture/nail line that I thought was clever and then his closer hit imo.. Jc had some attempts but no real hotters for me. The clubbin one almost landed but still kinda bland.. try to stay away from some of those cliches..
v shunned
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"Beauty is a cruel mistress, is it not?"
don't care what all the critics say... so i'll give you my thesis
ur verses are like this weeks mag..
..they'd say its dope when they dont even read it.
VS
In this crucifixion, i'll snap a photo to help you ease the pain,
Because we know a picture of Jesus only takes one nail to hang.
You claim to be original, named after a prophet, great disguise,
Your lines are like your religion, Jesus....nothing but plagiarized.
ok...this was a meh battle both of you had alot of misses especially jesus,i aint really see no haymakers punches from none of you but i gota say as a overall shunned took this
v/shunned
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