go big or go home!
20 Lines
house rules...
...due Fri. night by midnight.
good luck SP..
Sir Plus..
(P.I.)GKillaZ
go big or go home!
20 Lines
house rules...
...due Fri. night by midnight.
good luck SP..
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
got this done quicker then I thought, so here it goes....
Sir Plus.. ayo,
with your played out name I wonder what you surfaced for
cuz your bars have more junk in them, then a sur-plus store
Plus the way you make raps is soft and thats a tell tale sign
never inbedded stories in ya lines.....
....thats why there so boring, were just snoring when ya rhyme
weakness is pourin from him I will rip the floor from under this guy
must be a carpenter in disguise cuz sir got fear forming in his eyes
and im your foreman so if you die, there will be a report to fill
nd as i tell em how horrible i feel
they ask me cause of death i wont say ill, cuz he never resorts to skill
plus, Sir is foaming from the mouth nothin` i heard him spit is clean
shit just seems he couldnt spit hot even if he was gurgling Listerine
heard his weird style rappin` so i urgently sent em to emergency
burning to pieces like third degree so I guess it should of occurred to P
when you try and murder G you better hope you word it perfectly
n even tho im droppin`first you see...
i can almost certainly say that sir plus made himself look worthless
and he is gonna come wit them same ol bars bout how he stay hard
so I made it a long battle just to show RB how played out they are
lm brave-heart, put you in the graveyard, like bernardo`s sister (killer from Canada)
and no one will miss you from how gay you are like ricardo`s picture
Sir Plus is a target and im a missile, so when I diss you i wont miss you
scarred your brain tissue so you down talk....
....my bars when you vote are you a retard or just have an issue?....... OR BOTH!
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"cuz they know I leave speakers abused I eat the EQs I eat through the beats whats the secret I think its the shoes" - Crooked I
all that shit for what ? 20 lines & you still blow
Shit only thing you quote from that verse is..
.... " got this done quicker then I thought, so here it goes...."
you N ' ya family is just a "junky" bunch
but y send'em to the clinic when he cant even deliver a dope punch
im over this dudes skills by 100's of miles
i'd say your phuccn sic... since yall work with the same style
ya gettin bulllied in FL, but i guess this fuckers here to stay
Shit I'd retire to the way you got dominated by marvelous j
nobody claims Gkillaz as far as i know
& its nukkas like you that make drake glad that he's from toronto
texting is my sport, & i own the whole court
"PI" is always infinte... but ya bars seem to always come up short
we expect greatness from this bafoon every once N' a blue moon
cnt have an effect w/o a kaze.....
.............. & well he's the reason you'll be exiting the gautlet soon
he aint real, b4 this shits over he will kneel
so chill, coz this hill billys the type to mink a coat outta road kill
voters look at ya shit & know it wont shine
hell, i'd still win even if every following line didnt fuckin rhyme
him FL champ ? shit maybe when P.I.Gs fly high
& i dont see that happening since he'll lose by a landslide
SIR PLUS
all that shit for what ? 20 lines & you still blow
Shit only thing you quote from that verse is..
.... " got this done quicker then I thought, so here it goes...."
-0 right of the bat, this looks like you fed
you N ' ya family is just a "junky" bunch
but y send'em to the clinic when he cant even deliver a dope punch
3
im over this dudes skills by 100's of miles
i'd say your phuccn sic... since yall work with the same style
3
ya gettin bulllied in FL, but i guess this fuckers here to stay
Shit I'd retire to the way you got dominated by marvelous j
3
nobody claims Gkillaz as far as i know
& its nukkas like you that make drake glad that he's from toronto
4 lol, drake's a puss
texting is my sport, & i own the whole court
"PI" is always infinte... but ya bars seem to always come up short
1
we expect greatness from this bafoon every once N' a blue moon
cnt have an effect w/o a kaze.....
.............. & well he's the reason you'll be exiting the gautlet soon
he aint real, b4 this shits over he will kneel
so chill, coz this hill billys the type to mink a coat outta road kill
2
voters look at ya shit & know it wont shine
hell, i'd still win even if every following line didnt fuckin rhyme
1
him FL champ ? shit maybe when P.I.Gs fly high
& i dont see that happening since he'll lose by a landslide
3
good punches, seemed like you fed in the beginning off his verse
liked your comparisons to other battles he's in
good shit....20
VS
PIGKILLAZ
with your played out name I wonder what you surfaced for
cuz your bars have more junk in them, then a sur-plus store
2 for the name shot
Plus the way you make raps is soft and thats a tell tale sign
never inbedded stories in ya lines.....
1
....thats why there so boring, were just snoring when ya rhyme
weakness is pourin from him I will rip the floor from under this guy
2
must be a carpenter in disguise cuz sir got fear forming in his eyes
and im your foreman so if you die, there will be a report to fill
nd as i tell em how horrible i feel
1 maybe some better wording here
they ask me cause of death i wont say ill, cuz he never resorts to skill
plus, Sir is foaming from the mouth nothin` i heard him spit is clean
2
shit just seems he couldnt spit hot even if he was gurgling Listerine
heard his weird style rappin` so i urgently sent em to emergency
1
burning to pieces like third degree so I guess it should of occurred to P
when you try and murder G you better hope you word it perfectly
3 i liked the wordplay
n even tho im droppin`first you see...
i can almost certainly say that sir plus made himself look worthless
and he is gonna come wit them same ol bars bout how he stay hard
1 statement
so I made it a long battle just to show RB how played out they are
lm brave-heart, put you in the graveyard, like bernardo`s sister (killer from Canada)
1 maybe stronger punch with rearranged wording here
and no one will miss you from how gay you are like ricardo`s picture
Sir Plus is a target and im a missile, so when I diss you i wont miss you
scarred your brain tissue so you down talk....
....my bars when you vote are you a retard or just have an issue?....... OR BOTH!
? did you run outta shit to say here, needs a stronger finish. long read, more try to be more creative with high impactive punches. good shit though keep atter14
V/SIRPLUS
getcha votin done. poll that shit
with your played out name I wonder what you surfaced for
cuz your bars have more junk in them, then a sur-plus store
meh,
word play could have been better
Plus the way you make raps is soft and thats a tell tale sign
never inbedded stories in ya lines.....
....thats why there so boring, were just snoring when ya rhyme
getting hotter
weakness is pourin from him I will rip the floor from under this guy
must be a carpenter in disguise cuz sir got fear forming in his eyes
and im your foreman so if you die, there will be a report to fill
nd as i tell em how horrible i feel
completely dope awsome verse word play and punch on point
v
we expect greatness from this bafoon every once N' a blue moon
cnt have an effect w/o a kaze.....
.............. & well he's the reason you'll be exiting the gautlet soon
punch was good , it came with sting
he aint real, b4 this shits over he will kneel
so chill, coz this hill billys the type to mink a coat outta road kill
voters look at ya shit & know it wont shine
hell, i'd still win even if every following line didnt fuckin rhyme
okay verse here
him FL champ ? shit maybe when P.I.Gs fly high
& i dont see that happening since he'll lose by a landslide
meh, not catchy lacking in sense
v/(P.I.)Gkillaz
PQ
I would say PI took this one. Sirplus' shit didn't flow as well to me. It was harder to follow and therefore I got lost rather quickly. One piece of advice: use proper writing techniques, otherwise you may get a shitty vote or no votes at all cause no one wants to decipher your shit.
plus, Sir is foaming from the mouth nothin` i heard him spit is clean
shit just seems he couldnt spit hot even if he was gurgling Listerine
i see it but needs to be worded differently
lm brave-heart, put you in the graveyard, like bernardo`s sister (killer from Canada)
and no one will miss you from how gay you are like ricardo`s picture
Played and really the only real punch that stung in your verse
vs.
we expect greatness from this bafoon every once N' a blue moon
cnt have an effect w/o a kaze.....
.............. & well he's the reason you'll be exiting the gautlet soon
he aint real, b4 this shits over he will kneel
so chill, coz this hill billys the type to mink a coat outta road kill
barely Decent and the ones that hit the hardest out of the whole battle
yea this is why ppl dont wanna vote ya'll had 10 bars and only a couple of quotes wtf? PI i know your getting better and this battle is old so keep battling with less bars. Sir plus i know you just did enough to get the win.
V/ S
RTF
PI
burning to pieces like third degree so I guess it should of occurred to P
when you try and murder G you better hope you word it perfectly
i thought this was pretty nice
and he is gonna come wit them same ol bars bout how he stay hard
so I made it a long battle just to show RB how played out they are
vs
Sir Plus
all that shit for what ? 20 lines & you still blow
Shit only thing you quote from that verse is..
.... " got this done quicker then I thought, so here it goes...."
i dont think this was a bite cuz it wasnt part of dudes verse/ descent
im over this dudes skills by 100's of miles
i'd say your phuccn sic... since yall work with the same style
voters look at ya shit & know it wont shine
hell, i'd still win even if every following line didnt fuckin rhyme
pretty one sided here. Sir Plus just had more direct punches. PI homie you had a nice rhyme scheme..cept for that one bar that didnt rhyme but you need to step up on the punches and concept.
v/Sir Plus
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PI
with your played out name I wonder what you surfaced for
cuz your bars have more junk in them, then a sur-plus store
k
Plus the way you make raps is soft and thats a tell tale sign
never inbedded stories in ya lines.....
....thats why there so boring, were just snoring when ya rhyme
Alright...too long
weakness is pourin from him I will rip the floor from under this guy
must be a carpenter in disguise cuz sir got fear forming in his eyes
Alright, cool concept......
and im your foreman so if you die, there will be a report to fill
nd as i tell em how horrible i feel
they ask me cause of death i wont say ill, cuz he never resorts to skill
Just alotta rhyming here
plus, Sir is foaming from the mouth nothin` i heard him spit is clean
shit just seems he couldnt spit hot even if he was gurgling Listerine
Alright........
heard his weird style rappin` so i urgently sent em to emergency
burning to pieces like third degree so I guess it should of occurred to P
when you try and murder G you better hope you word it perfectly
n even tho im droppin`first you see...
i can almost certainly say that sir plus made himself look worthless
Just alotta statements and rhyming here
and he is gonna come wit them same ol bars bout how he stay hard
so I made it a long battle just to show RB how played out they are
k
lm brave-heart, put you in the graveyard, like bernardo`s sister (killer from Canada)
and no one will miss you from how gay you are like ricardo`s picture
...
Sir Plus is a target and im a missile, so when I diss you i wont miss you
scarred your brain tissue so you down talk....
....my bars when you vote are you a retard or just have an issue?....... OR BOTH!
Sir Plus
all that shit for what ? 20 lines & you still blow
Shit only thing you quote from that verse is..
.... " got this done quicker then I thought, so here it goes...."
....
you N ' ya family is just a "junky" bunch
but y send'em to the clinic when he cant even deliver a dope punch
Alright......
im over this dudes skills by 100's of miles
i'd say your phuccn sic... since yall work with the same style
k
ya gettin bulllied in FL, but i guess this fuckers here to stay
Shit I'd retire to the way you got dominated by marvelous j
k
nobody claims Gkillaz as far as i know
& its nukkas like you that make drake glad that he's from toronto
?
texting is my sport, & i own the whole court
"PI" is always infinte... but ya bars seem to always come up short
Cool
we expect greatness from this bafoon every once N' a blue moon
cnt have an effect w/o a kaze.....
.............. & well he's the reason you'll be exiting the gautlet soon
Alright........
he aint real, b4 this shits over he will kneel
so chill, coz this hill billys the type to mink a coat outta road kill
.....
voters look at ya shit & know it wont shine
hell, i'd still win even if every following line didnt fuckin rhyme
.....
him FL champ ? shit maybe when P.I.Gs fly high
& i dont see that happening since he'll lose by a landslide
Alright......
Vote Sir Plus
