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    angels bleed

    An angel with wings to blood soaked to fly, your rapture in non-existence
    Take one more look, blow them a kiss and watch this all burn away
    Solemnly isolate yourself, sedate the rest
    Claw your way out from underneath
    Every last emotion drained from inside you, I’ve felt it to
    Walk through this lobby of mirrors, all showing a different reflection
    This house is filled with rooms, each emptier then the first
    Escape this? impossible, I know because I’ve tried
    Sequences of illusions is what this is, nothing more nothing less
    Close your eyes, for a moment everything stops.
    Fall with me into this dream of torture, panic, fear and mutilation
    Choked and gagged
    You calm one more breath will kill you,
    So you breathe in harder than ever before
    Grip this hand hold on tight and swear to me you’ll make it.



    Last two lines i was thinking of making oppisite, instead of "swear to me you'll make it" .. "i dont give a fuck if you make it".."or i dont give a fuck if i drop you" lol, something like that anyways..


    first post be harsh, feed back please !

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    Re: angels bleed

    i like your words. the title is sweet. this is pretty well done for your first piece I can not wait to read some more.

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    Re: angels bleed

    uppin this for peeps to feed on come on guys vendettas a female

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