10 lines.
One hour.
10 lines.
One hour.
Check.
Reading your Hanible battle, laughs were hard for me to choke back
If Hanible couldn't eat you, I'ma have to give Dallas Cowboy a broke back
Your sexuality's a mystery but there's one thing that's evident
if battle rap was the US..?
W wouldn't have received even one term as president
If everything's bigger in Texas, show me your rhymes are 'phatter'
But there's an old saying..
that only queers and steers come from Texas and you're the latter
Whenever I take a look at his name, I always think 'what the hell'?
cuz ya name shouldn't be W since you're bout to get your first L
If you chose to battle me, your winstreak has a removal waiting
and the chances of survival are officially lower than W's approval rating
you're outmatched kid. go run & hide, don't try to be brave dude
Hipster called the laws on me.. too bad your record can't save you!
all you've done is battle a group of noobs, so you don't have my respect
all it'll take is a quick reach to the Hip.. and I'll be strangling his neck.
go ahead, try and struggle, but you'll be dead soon and noone will care..
after I've 'Destroyed' his perfect record he'll 'tear' up.. like the jeans that he wears
you're just another follower .. quick to jump on the latest trend movement, queer!
so for now it's skinny jeans and v-necks, but in 03 his closet was full of G-Unit Gear
I'll wind up the .38 and have it throwin' fastballs that'll make a killing
& have Hipster in Boston with a bloodier uniform than Curt Schilling!
*Schilling's uniform no. was 38, just for those that may not know
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=440553
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=440677
* one more note.. his record is 5-0, which is what my opener was alluding too. I didn't know they didn't show records in FL.
but good shit Hipster, uppin this battle. don't sleep!
If you chose to battle me, your winstreak has a removal waiting
and the chances of survival are officially lower than W's approval rating
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you're outmatched kid. go run & hide, don't try to be brave dude
Hipster called the laws on me.. too bad your record can't save you!
this battle was aiight, overall i was feeling the law line....sick wordplay...hipster you gto potential but some of your comedic lines felt a bit corney to me so overrall im gonna give the w to w lmao.....that sounds weird
rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...553/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...561/index.html
Hipster
If you chose to battle me, your winstreak has a removal waiting
and the chances of survival are officially lower than W's approval rating
i liked this one
vs
W
all you've done is battle a group of noobs, so you don't have my respect
all it'll take is a quick reach to the Hip.. and I'll be strangling his neck
this was ok...but could have been a nasty hit if reworded
this battle was kinda close. alot of misses. W you had the better concepts but delivery KILLED YOU. Hip had stronger wording in his misses.
v/ Hipster
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If you chose to battle me, your winstreak has a removal waiting
and the chances of survival are officially lower than W's approval rating
good hit, I liked the nameplay
vs.
all you've done is battle a group of noobs, so you don't have my respect
all it'll take is a quick reach to the Hip.. and I'll be strangling his neck.
decent concept, but the flip was lacking... could have been a good
punch if worded right.
overall this battle was ok, but I was expecting more punchlines, I gotta
give this one to hipster cause of the better punches. Hip you really need
to work on your structure, you flow suffered from it...
vote- hipster
yall keep at it, and you will elevate. no hate.
DayumNation
If you chose to battle me, your winstreak has a removal waiting
and the chances of survival are officially lower than W's approval rating
The best bar of this batttle, easily. Good work man.
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all you've done is battle a group of noobs, so you don't have my respect
all it'll take is a quick reach to the Hip.. and I'll be strangling his neck.
Decent.. punch wasn't all that effective though.
Not a bad battle, both had some good lines here and there but I think Hipster's closing line really won this for him. I really like the whole concept and everything. Both might need a bit of working on some wording but other than that it wasn't a bad battle at all.
V/ The Hipster
rtf - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...923/index.html
The Hipster
Reading your Hanible battle, laughs were hard for me to choke back
If Hanible couldn't eat you, I'ma have to give Dallas Cowboy a broke back
ehh, needs to be stronger
Your sexuality's a mystery but there's one thing that's evident
if battle rap was the US..?
W wouldn't have received even one term as president
nahh.. you wanna relate your punch to the first part of the line, sexuality has nothin to do with being president
If everything's bigger in Texas, show me your rhymes are 'phatter'
But there's an old saying..
that only queers and steers come from Texas and you're the latter
its ok, structure is off needs revision
Whenever I take a look at his name, I always think 'what the hell'?
cuz ya name shouldn't be W since you're bout to get your first L
ok, a little better
If you chose to battle me, your winstreak has a removal waiting
and the chances of survival are officially lower than W's approval rating
best bar merely better than ok tho
W
you're outmatched kid. go run & hide, don't try to be brave dude
Hipster called the laws on me.. too bad your record can't save you!
eh opener, doesnt really punch, could have been worded better
all you've done is battle a group of noobs, so you don't have my respect
all it'll take is a quick reach to the Hip.. and I'll be strangling his neck.
maybe i just dont get it
go ahead, try and struggle, but you'll be dead soon and noone will care..
after I've 'Destroyed' his perfect record he'll 'tear' up.. like the jeans that he wears
ehh
you're just another follower .. quick to jump on the latest trend movement, queer!
so for now it's skinny jeans and v-necks, but in 03 his closet was full of G-Unit Gear
funny actually, decent bar
I'll wind up the .38 and have it throwin' fastballs that'll make a killing
& have Hipster in Boston with a bloodier uniform than Curt Schilling!
its a ok closer, too much detailing
overall
hipster came with some lines that could have been better if included punches. The nameplay was there but didnt relate exactly to the bar, when you get that part down, you'll be alright
W was alright also, came with a few harder bars than hipster. mainly the last 2. just keep working and elevate, you both will be stronger when you got your metaphors and shit down.
Vote
W
really close battle here. both had some decent punches.. although nothing spectacular.. and both had some good name play/flips as well personals.
Hipster - Your opener was decent, but forced. the wording was just off and it made the punch miss. your closer was your best line, but after the president line before it didn't hit as hard, cause it was kinda the same subject or concept (W=President Bush)
W - overall you had a decent verse. the opener was a good personal and punch, but worded better it could have hit harder. I liked the 5-0 cops thing though.. Im with Class Akt about the Hip line.. I understand it, but again wording and shit just kind of makes it a little harder to understand.. the G-Unit line was pretty funny to me as well.. good nameplay. and the closer was good too, a little wordy but overall a good finisher and personal w/ the Boston hometown ..
overall pretty close battle. I'd have to choose W in the end because I just enjoyed his verse a little better and thought he came a little more original and unique towards Hipster than he came towards W. good battle, both of ya'll keep elevating.
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The Hipster
Reading your Hanible battle, laughs were hard for me to choke back
If Hanible couldn't eat you, I'ma have to give Dallas Cowboy a broke back
Your sexuality's a mystery but there's one thing that's evident
if battle rap was the US..?
W wouldn't have received even one term as president
^second bar was a creative idea but flow and punches werent.
If everything's bigger in Texas, show me your rhymes are 'phatter'
But there's an old saying..
that only queers and steers come from Texas and you're the latter
^so he's a steer? lol
Whenever I take a look at his name, I always think 'what the hell'?
cuz ya name shouldn't be W since you're bout to get your first L
If you chose to battle me, your winstreak has a removal waiting
and the chances of survival are officially lower than W's approval rating
^now i like your closer.. best bar of your verse but you already made a george joke so it took away from the last one.
W
you're outmatched kid. go run & hide, don't try to be brave dude
Hipster called the laws on me.. too bad your record can't save you!
eh
all you've done is battle a group of noobs, so you don't have my respect
all it'll take is a quick reach to the Hip.. and I'll be strangling his neck.
^eh
go ahead, try and struggle, but you'll be dead soon and noone will care..
after I've 'Destroyed' his perfect record he'll 'tear' up.. like the jeans that he wears
^ok
you're just another follower .. quick to jump on the latest trend movement, queer!
so for now it's skinny jeans and v-necks, but in 03 his closet was full of G-Unit Gear
^haha okay
I'll wind up the .38 and have it throwin' fastballs that'll make a killing
& have Hipster in Boston with a bloodier uniform than Curt Schilling!
^eesh it was his sock not his uniform lol
Vote: W
Kinda close, looks like W's gonna edge this one.
If you chose to battle me, your winstreak has a removal waiting
and the chances of survival are officially lower than W's approval rating
Okay, decent.
vs.
all you've done is battle a group of noobs, so you don't have my respect
all it'll take is a quick reach to the Hip.. and I'll be strangling his neck.
Meh...too simple get more complex, not bad though.
Vote Hipster...with that one bar.
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