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    Shut up and make music Big Question's Avatar
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    My Pen

    [SOUNDCLICK]9418907[/SOUNDCLICK]

    or

    http://soundcloud.com/bigquestion/my-pen

    well i havent been around for months, had to sell all my gear...heres what i was workin on 6 months ago...never finished it, now the sessions lost lol

    but feed?

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...498/index.html

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...397/index.html
    Last edited by Big Question; November 26th, 2010 at 01:46 PM
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    Re: My Pen

    bump, will rtf
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    Re: My Pen

    links not working homie, can't hear it. try reloading it.

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    Re: My Pen

    done. ^ thanks..
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    Re: My Pen

    still not working for me, error xml
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    Re: My Pen

    still says xml error meyn. it's [ soundclick ]NUMBERS FROM LINK[ / soundclick ] (Minus spaces)
    and if anythin at least just post the direct link if its just beeing goofy

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    Re: My Pen

    workin for me

    added new link as well
    Last edited by Big Question; November 26th, 2010 at 01:44 PM
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    Re: My Pen

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    Re: My Pen

    fuck me
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    Re: My Pen

    Nice to see you still rapping Q. Nice joint presence was on, lyrics were nice, really felt them . Few small points only a word or so was off. Hook got me thinking, trippy hook lol, tad to much reverb on it for my liking though. But overall nice work q. I'm also getting use to english accent as of now aswell. Don't knnow if you heard of this guy name Tini Tempuh out of England, But has alot of views on youtube, also dope artist.

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    thanks bullet. yeah tiny is blowin up as are a lot of uk artists you`ll be hearing more of soon, pro green, tinchy stryder was signed by jay-z. but as always the real talents underground, check out jehst, devlin, kyza, klashnekoff, etc


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    lol fuck all them peeps u just mentioned man, its all about rhyme asylum and S.A.S

    this tracks quite good man, vocals got ALOT of echo tho? flow is tight.... dont like the chorus to be honest.... ur accent is makin me laugh a bit lol, u keep goin into yank mode lol....

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    ^lol...yeah im still tryna take the yank outta me, i sound a lot more natural now than i did when i started out tho...my old shit was proper ifluenced by american hop hop
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    haha fair enough....give me some feed on my short verse if u get time, its experimantal lol, dont normaly rap like that so im wanting feed, only got 1 so far tho

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    Re: My Pen

    One thing I def. like is your lyrics, because u paint the picture very well, but the structure needs to be reworked. Too mnay times u are trying to fit lines that the beat won't allow because they're too long and its making ur flow choppy at times, so just work on that. The mixing didn't seem too bad, the chorus wasn't that bad the echo wasn't needed and maybe a lil more layers to it would be nice. If you fix those things tho u would have a real solid track, and u have talent just keep improving. If u get chance check out: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...932/index.html

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