"SO COLD" Feat. Red the KnuckleHead and Rob Illo

[LEWSHiS]

This Is A New Song That Ive Recently Finished Up With My New Group "GWB"
The Track Is Called "So Cold" and the topic should be pretty self explanitory.
Hit Me Up With Some Feedback.

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9889032

Im On First Verse and The Hooks.
Second Verse is Rob Illo
Third Verse Is Red the Knucklehead.



Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...120/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...05942&posted=1

[LEWSHiS]

Hit me with some Feedback

[Bar-Buryin]

aight.. beat is cool.. grimey so its my kinda shit... sounds like ur whispering.. delivery sounds a bit forced man.. like your trying to be hard and i can tell.. quality is cool.. lyrics are alright... multis are lacking though and it would improve your flow alot.. second cat.. like this cats voice and delivery alot more... lyrics arent very good though.. flow is alright but again lyrically lacking so the multis just arent there...

decent track.. yall did your thing... both are decent.. the first cat has gotta switch up his delivery.. be yourself kid..

7/10

[LEWSHiS]

its not that im not focused on muti's on every song, im more focused on message and something that people can relate to.

[LEWSHiS]

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