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    the realest illest out there

    i m just need yall help wit my rap, flowng n wordplay or many more.. since i can write good but aint that good like you guys...


    i wrote for my commerical up coming as arby's offer me so if yall can help me out to elevate better, since they want signed me cos i m deaf, also knowing i have potential..


    here my lyrics


    binary star- dat fast food joint (instrumental)
    brainstorming

    (chorus)
    put a smile on your face, make more customers come to their favorite place
    (x2)

    "welcome to arby's, hi my name is kirby"
    chadwick sitting in the back, he is ready to make them sandwich,
    he is madquick, smooth as slick when he wrap the sandwich
    sandwich is his game
    we be up in arby's doing what taste right
    i ll be look at the menu i ll be here all night
    so i ll start off with one of em
    junior meal but make it value it is only megabucks
    lets keep it real
    i ve got more rhymes than arby's got to order
    and you be wishing you had a recorder to complete my order
    what you got for side dishes
    mm girl second thought hook me up with fishes (??)
    mm a garden salad we'll go need that for show
    you aint gotta ask it aint for here, its to go

    (chorus x2)

    i'm sittin on my couch
    dont know what to eat.
    i call Pizza Pizza
    and get a loud busy beep.
    So i get off my couch, drive to arby's
    get some guy named kirby
    around the corner, going thru the drive-thru



    this is how we do up in the drive-thru
    i need a large beef, wrap it up, large coke,
    bottle of water, dont forget the cap
    i need chicken tender,
    dont be thinking that
    its all for me though
    "i m thinking arby's"
    my boy said to me
    so i ll get him a beef n cheddar
    and one for free. i hope youre getting all this down
    youre sitting there without a sound
    arby sauce, i need that too
    make it three, no make it two
    large coke, i need that too,
    one for me and for you
    just kidding, being nice
    can u repeat twice, he wants to make sure
    is that something you guys do?
    i want jr chicken please, hold the lettuce, add the cheddar,
    one more holler for a dollar
    this my crew in this drive-thru
    one more thing, give it to me cause baby, WE HUNGRY.

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    Re: the realest illest out there

    the way i look at it u dont have metaphor

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