Determination

[Tebo]

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Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...97739&posted=1

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...646/index.html

[Octothorpe]

That's a nice, tight flow you have there. I stopped and replayed halfway through and was like 'man the syllables are all the same!', which was cool. As for the delivery, have you been listening to a lot of aesop rock recently? Also, are you kind of sick? Because you have the kind of dripping sarcasm off an aes rock diss track but you sound like you have a bit of a head cold (totally not your fault). Had a couple weak lines "spit for days" , but also a couple strong ones "if suicide knocked on my door I'd probably open up". And the general theme was pretty motivational. Right on mayne keep spittin.

Comment me back if you like:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...926/index.html

[Rishi P]

hitting u back man...hmm can't really get into the way u delivery man....flow is ok a bit stretched/choppy at times...but it stays the same throughout pretty much try to change it up....hmm wasn't really feeling that hook nothing really stood out or caught me 2nd verse some deep shit i can relate but not feeling the way u delivery it....might just be ur voice but i can't get into it

overall this was ok man keep dropping

hit me back on this track if u can
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...78#post7898978

[Soule]

You sound like ICP (voice) so that kinda made me sick. But the beat is dope as fuck and your delivery was spot on. Flow was, if not flawless, then pretty damn close. I like how your flow amp'd up when the violin REALLY started to kick in. This is a really poetic song imo. And I dig it a lot, let's collab asap man. Cool song.

[Tebo]

thanks for feed so far everyone, a little more would be appreciated.. I'll RTF's so drop links, this song was made about 6 months ago but I have been out of town & unable to post much stuff up

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