FL CHAMP MATCH: Oatmeal vs FV

[KnowP]

****FRONT LINES CHAMP MATCH****



OATMEAL (25-6)

vs

FV (15-2)



10-20 lines
Sort it amongst yourselves
Check in Wednesday 11:59 pm EST
Due Friday 11:59 pm EST

[oatmeal]

hello

[oatmeal]

going at least 14, by the way.

[FrankV]

ill match 14

[oatmeal]

this will be a clean sweep, so you won't see any curses appear
so I'll just say you ain't Ish, man...if you were you'd deserve to be here
take me out this battle, I'm too fresh to pound this dumb kid
cuz adding another FL F L...just sounds redundant
you getting the last word? that makes me laugh so hard that it hurts
cuz the bottom line is...well, really any bar in your verse
FV's the easiest title defense, there's no pressure for him
dude is so soft, it just doesn't take much F hurt to win
rocking those weak medals, we know you aren't hard, though bro
so I'll repeatedly hammer F like the world's worst guitar solo
you're a family embarrassment, no way this fag will turn into something
when he hangs his head it's in shame...of the dick he's currently sucking
you didn't choose to be gay, your lonely childhood made you this gleeful
cuz it takes a village to raise a child, and you were raised by the Village People
you talk like you're a big boy, but no one's acceptin it man
cuz dog you're such a small feat...we know what to expect in the pants
I played collegiate sports, flying first class with personal maids and screens
while you were sitting on coach...cuz that's the only way you made the team
I'll leave this MC dripping blood, and that's not a flip on your avatar
and forget Abbatoir, no matter how many lines you write, you can't match my bars*

*that last line, we battled in Abbatoir and wasn't able to match the amount of bars that I dropped. good luck

[FrankV]

going at least 14, by the way.

claims he be getting bitches..him & his buddies fuck backstage
but i was in a rage, when i found out you would go down to that age
u were on top at one point..but everyone watched u go down slowly
now he couldn't rise in the ranks getting free points from knowp
its sad i tell ya.. but me i'm nice with the pen..& he wants to be me
cuz he couldn't be sensei-channel watching karate masters on TV**
i'll carve you up with a knife. leaving your blood & guts in mixtures
or put the peace to the back of ur head, fuck jokes while taking pictures
i can see ur scared u'll lose.....while my win seems clearer
& as the end gets nearer,
hes questioning himself more than interviews in a mirror
dude loves coke and speed, he'd give his ass for an upper
i seen meal getting ate by more dudes than the last supper
this a cat sweep..punches/personals.. and im taking flow
cuz u winning is like the last ounce in a pound...it's shakey, O
bring all ur "hot" punches, u couldnt beat me in ur dreams b
cuz mentioning oatmeals texture still wouldnt help u cream me
quit trying to rap, everyone is demanding you stop
cuz me vs him is like a heliport.. in other words, im landing on top
even tho im his idol, i'll be choking him till he's left with no vital
then u'll think i bought a car off him, cuz now im taking the title


**sensational

[Uncle Sam]

this will be a clean sweep, so you won't see any curses appear
so I'll just say you ain't Ish, man...if you were you'd deserve to be here
rocking those weak medals, we know you aren't hard, though bro
so I'll repeatedly hammer F like the world's worst guitar solo
I played collegiate sports, flying first class with personal maids and screens
while you were sitting on coach...cuz that's the only way you made the team

Nice solid verse here oat, some missed just because the setups didn't make sense.. like that it takes a village to raise a child line. I know it was to setup ur flip/misdirection, but the setup to it has to be a true thing, not just something you put in so it made sense

Also ur fl f l line was to forced and not really a direct punch at all
Again with the F hurt wordplay.. i get the wordplay but where's the punch?
You can't just through wordplay with no punch and it has to be 2 way wordplay, I get the effort/ f hurt... but It' takes no f hurt to win? what about f being hurt.. idk i wasn't feeling it

Besides that, Good verse though i think you had to much on ur plate this week when it comes to battles, fl champ match, crew battle, and 2 battles in abattoir
I don't think you wrote, the quality you would've wanted here

i can see ur scared u'll lose.....while my win seems clearer
& as the end gets nearer,
hes questioning himself more than interviews in a mirror
dude loves coke and speed, he'd give his ass for an upper
i seen meal getting ate by more dudes than the last supper
bring all ur "hot" punches, u couldnt beat me in ur dreams b
cuz mentioning oatmeals texture still wouldnt help u cream me
quit trying to rap, everyone is demanding you stop
cuz me vs him is like a heliport.. in other words, im landing on top
even tho im his idol, i'll be choking him till he's left with no vital
then u'll think i bought a car off him, cuz now im taking the title

FV way nice verse it was weak in the beggining, you had that really forced sensei channel wordplay, that wasn't even a real punch.

Again i state this.. your whole bar has to coincide with ur punch you can't be saying one thing, then end with another just cuz it rhymes or sounds cool


Overall: FV came way more direct, more of his punches landed, both had issues with worplay being only 1 directional, or not making sense or coinsiding with the rest of the bar

But FV got this, Not an easy vote, but it's basicily clear

I actually agree with fv's lines of taking those cats, cuz ini my book he did just that

V/FV

[Signified]

this will be a clean sweep, so you won't see any curses appear
so I'll just say you ain't Ish, man...if you were you'd deserve to be here
meh not a bad opener
take me out this battle, I'm too fresh to pound this dumb kid
cuz adding another FL F L...just sounds redundant
Meh...
you getting the last word? that makes me laugh so hard that it hurts
cuz the bottom line is...well, really any bar in your verse
ahah cool
FV's the easiest title defense, there's no pressure for him
dude is so soft, it just doesn't take much F hurt to win
meh not bad.
rocking those weak medals, we know you aren't hard, though bro
so I'll repeatedly hammer F like the world's worst guitar solo
decent...
you're a family embarrassment, no way this fag will turn into something
when he hangs his head it's in shame...of the dick he's currently sucking
ahah, not bad.
you didn't choose to be gay, your lonely childhood made you this gleeful
cuz it takes a village to raise a child, and you were raised by the Village People
cool line..
you talk like you're a big boy, but no one's acceptin it man
cuz dog you're such a small feat...we know what to expect in the pants
Reword that...could be a dope punch..but meh
I played collegiate sports, flying first class with personal maids and screens
while you were sitting on coach...cuz that's the only way you made the team
Best line so far^ahah
I'll leave this MC dripping blood, and that's not a flip on your avatar
and forget Abbatoir, no matter how many lines you write, you can't match my bars*
Meh personal...but still kinda weak.

VS

claims he be getting bitches..him & his buddies fuck backstage
but i was in a rage, when i found out you would go down to that age
ahah not bad.
u were on top at one point..but everyone watched u go down slowly
now he couldn't rise in the ranks getting free points from knowp
nice..
its sad i tell ya.. but me i'm nice with the pen..& he wants to be me
cuz he couldn't be sensei-channel watching karate masters on TV**
Decent.
i'll carve you up with a knife. leaving your blood & guts in mixtures
or put the peace to the back of ur head, fuck jokes while taking pictures
Meh not bad.
i can see ur scared u'll lose.....while my win seems clearer
& as the end gets nearer,
hes questioning himself more than interviews in a mirror
ahah cool.
dude loves coke and speed, he'd give his ass for an upper
i seen meal getting ate by more dudes than the last supper
Okay line...decent.
this a cat sweep..punches/personals.. and im taking flow
cuz u winning is like the last ounce in a pound...it's shakey, O
Meh..not bad.
bring all ur "hot" punches, u couldnt beat me in ur dreams b
cuz mentioning oatmeals texture still wouldnt help u cream me
Nice, best line so far^
quit trying to rap, everyone is demanding you stop
cuz me vs him is like a heliport.. in other words, im landing on top
Cool line.
even tho im his idol, i'll be choking him till he's left with no vital
then u'll think i bought a car off him, cuz now im taking the title
Ahah okay, not a bad closer.

Overall this battle was really hard too decide a winner... I thought it was okay but nothing compared too what I thought it was going too be. Uhm Oats you had some okay bars nothing too great...pretty consistent though...FV again you had a couple okay bars too...the cream Oatmeal one was my fav, but pretty consistent also..
Uh take it how you want it guys...but Im just going with my heart on this one & too me I think Oatmeal got this..

[Prince S.Tana]

i can see ur scared u'll lose.....while my win seems clearer
& as the end gets nearer,
hes questioning himself more than interviews in a mirror
dude loves coke and speed, he'd give his ass for an upper
i seen meal getting ate by more dudes than the last supper

vs.

you getting the last word? that makes me laugh so hard that it hurts
cuz the bottom line is...well, really any bar in your verse
you didn't choose to be gay, your lonely childhood made you this gleeful
cuz it takes a village to raise a child, and you were raised by the Village People
you talk like you're a big boy, but no one's acceptin it man
cuz dog you're such a small feat...we know what to expect in the pants
I played collegiate sports, flying first class with personal maids and screens
while you were sitting on coach...cuz that's the only way you made the team

Oatmeal was more consistent, ya first bar was dope if re-worded. FV seems like you lacked alot of sting and was very simple and predicting. Kinda weak on FV part for a champ match.. Vote: Oatmeal

[Achillies.]

this will be a clean sweep, so you won't see any curses appear
so I'll just say you ain't Ish, man...if you were you'd deserve to be here
decent opener
take me out this battle, I'm too fresh to pound this dumb kid
cuz adding another FL F L...just sounds redundant
not feelin this one cuddi
you getting the last word? that makes me laugh so hard that it hurts
cuz the bottom line is...well, really any bar in your verse
kinda played here fam
FV's the easiest title defense, there's no pressure for him
dude is so soft, it just doesn't take much F hurt to win
eehh ok word play there, not really feelin the punch fam
rocking those weak medals, we know you aren't hard, though bro
so I'll repeatedly hammer F like the world's worst guitar solo
lol decent
you're a family embarrassment, no way this fag will turn into something
when he hangs his head it's in shame...of the dick he's currently sucking
nah
you didn't choose to be gay, your lonely childhood made you this gleeful
cuz it takes a village to raise a child, and you were raised by the Village People
lmao i like this
you talk like you're a big boy, but no one's acceptin it man
cuz dog you're such a small feat...we know what to expect in the pants
lol smh im not thinkin bt wats in his pants... but decent
I played collegiate sports, flying first class with personal maids and screens
while you were sitting on coach...cuz that's the only way you made the team
lol like this one too
I'll leave this MC dripping blood, and that's not a flip on your avatar
and forget Abbatoir, no matter how many lines you write, you can't match my bars*
eehhh not dope, but an ok closer

vs


claims he be getting bitches..him & his buddies fuck backstage
but i was in a rage, when i found out you would go down to that age
nah not feelin that
u were on top at one point..but everyone watched u go down slowly
now he couldn't rise in the ranks getting free points from knowp
ok at best
its sad i tell ya.. but me i'm nice with the pen..& he wants to be me
cuz he couldn't be sensei-channel watching karate masters on TV**
not feelin that fam...
i'll carve you up with a knife. leaving your blood & guts in mixtures
or put the peace to the back of ur head, fuck jokes while taking pictures
no
i can see ur scared u'll lose.....while my win seems clearer
& as the end gets nearer,
hes questioning himself more than interviews in a mirror
lol i like that doe
dude loves coke and speed, he'd give his ass for an upper
i seen meal getting ate by more dudes than the last supper
better wordin cudda made this dope
this a cat sweep..punches/personals.. and im taking flow
cuz u winning is like the last ounce in a pound...it's shakey, O
lol ok ok
bring all ur "hot" punches, u couldnt beat me in ur dreams b
cuz mentioning oatmeals texture still wouldnt help u cream me
not really feelin it
quit trying to rap, everyone is demanding you stop
cuz me vs him is like a heliport.. in other words, im landing on top
nah fam
even tho im his idol, i'll be choking him till he's left with no vital
then u'll think i bought a car off him, cuz now im taking the title
wording killed you in this battle fam.... I've seen a better battle from you

v.Oat.

[Switch.]

this will be a clean sweep, so you won't see any curses appear
so I'll just say you ain't Ish, man...if you were you'd deserve to be here
wording killed the punch imo.
take me out this battle, I'm too fresh to pound this dumb kid
cuz adding another FL F L...just sounds redundant
not feeling
you getting the last word? that makes me laugh so hard that it hurts
cuz the bottom line is...well, really any bar in your verse
played
FV's the easiest title defense, there's no pressure for him
dude is so soft, it just doesn't take much F hurt to win
wordplay was decent here, i liked it
rocking those weak medals, we know you aren't hard, though bro
so I'll repeatedly hammer F like the world's worst guitar solo
another decent line
you're a family embarrassment, no way this fag will turn into something
when he hangs his head it's in shame...of the dick he's currently sucking
nah, not hitting for me
you didn't choose to be gay, your lonely childhood made you this gleeful
cuz it takes a village to raise a child, and you were raised by the Village People
ok
you talk like you're a big boy, but no one's acceptin it man
cuz dog you're such a small feat...we know what to expect in the pants
not bad
I played collegiate sports, flying first class with personal maids and screens
while you were sitting on coach...cuz that's the only way you made the team
lol
I'll leave this MC dripping blood, and that's not a flip on your avatar
and forget Abbatoir, no matter how many lines you write, you can't match my bars*
decent personal

vs

claims he be getting bitches..him & his buddies fuck backstage
but i was in a rage, when i found out you would go down to that age
meh
u were on top at one point..but everyone watched u go down slowly
now he couldn't rise in the ranks getting free points from knowp
nah not hard enough
its sad i tell ya.. but me i'm nice with the pen..& he wants to be me
cuz he couldn't be sensei-channel watching karate masters on TV**
decent wordplay, slightly forced tho
i'll carve you up with a knife. leaving your blood & guts in mixtures
or put the peace to the back of ur head, fuck jokes while taking pictures
ok-ish
i can see ur scared u'll lose.....while my win seems clearer
& as the end gets nearer,
hes questioning himself more than interviews in a mirror
lol not bad imo
dude loves coke and speed, he'd give his ass for an upper
i seen meal getting ate by more dudes than the last supper
decent flip, i liked this a lot
this a cat sweep..punches/personals.. and im taking flow
cuz u winning is like the last ounce in a pound...it's shakey, O
ight
bring all ur "hot" punches, u couldnt beat me in ur dreams b
cuz mentioning oatmeals texture still wouldnt help u cream me
nah
quit trying to rap, everyone is demanding you stop
cuz me vs him is like a heliport.. in other words, im landing on top
nah pretty weak
even tho im his idol, i'll be choking him till he's left with no vital
then u'll think i bought a car off him, cuz now im taking the title
meh

This battle was pretty close but looking back on it oat jus edged it, just. If FV had one other decent - nice line then he could've got this. Overalll this was an ok battle but i expected both to come harder than this. No hate to either.

v/oat

[A. Diction]

this will be a clean sweep, so you won't see any curses appear
so I'll just say you ain't Ish, man...if you were you'd deserve to be here
good personal
take me out this battle, I'm too fresh to pound this dumb kid
cuz adding another FL F L...just sounds redundant
decent
you getting the last word? that makes me laugh so hard that it hurts
cuz the bottom line is...well, really any bar in your verse
decent
FV's the easiest title defense, there's no pressure for him
dude is so soft, it just doesn't take much F hurt to win
forced wordplay but nice concept
rocking those weak medals, we know you aren't hard, though bro
so I'll repeatedly hammer F like the world's worst guitar solo
lol
you didn't choose to be gay, your lonely childhood made you this gleeful
cuz it takes a village to raise a child, and you were raised by the Village People
this coulda been LOTB if it was worded right. nice concept tho it still made me lol
I played collegiate sports, flying first class with personal maids and screens
while you were sitting on coach...cuz that's the only way you made the team
lol
I'll leave this MC dripping blood, and that's not a flip on your avatar
and forget Abbatoir, no matter how many lines you write, you can't match my bars*
good personal

vs

dude loves coke and speed, he'd give his ass for an upper
i seen meal getting ate by more dudes than the last supper
ur best line, n the set up was garbage

v/ oatmeal

[The Incredible Hulk]

oatmeal wins 5-1

congrats and closed.