Filthy McNasty
Mofo
Check... MoFo, you can call the line count.
10-12
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since this is single elimination lets go all out 14-16 linesOriginally Posted by MoFo
Smoke sumn bitch..
grand daddy purp n fiji water
kush n orange juices
codiene in my cup im good
24thstreet we in here
Jyea 1st round tournament been waiting for this
filthy mcnasty aka old dirty bastards stepbrother
where im from being a bitch is a crime so take yo ass to jail
if asked in court ya alias, use your right to remain silent
instead of ur dick in the booty name, pick sumn that proclaim violence.
the judge senteneced u to death, if he sent you on this journey
not saying ur not a accomplished lawyer,your just not winning a.torney
you get smacked quicker than hot oil, on a nice round booty thats ashy
r u served at mcdonalds? order a number 69! get ya self a taste of filthy Mcnasty
im about to son you yayy bitch
you my son me+mamamcnasty= the math of he
FM is just 50% of MoFo,he's really half of me.
Daddy gotta cleanhouse, 1st stop, mama mcnastys bedroom, mofo lova milf
we roleplay, she dressed up as maid... me chris columbous, took 9 months for us to discover filth
yo writtens is garbage, who's trash of the year? hornet vowels? yes it BEE U
wondering how you keep getting L's, when ya stinkying rhymes is leaving everyone saying P-U
sound of ya name; ya think u a night time country group, on this station we dont play dem bands
nobody votin for FM,early morning airconditioning? idk. but mofo got them AM fans.
win loose or draw ima smoke me sum good as weed
but i do appreciate good thorouly broken down votes ways i can improve
match my 14
Oatmeal said he could beat me if I didn't step foot in the place
But I'm battling MF, so it's in his best interest to not show face
If victory's sweet, this lame nigga'll never experience the taste
Place the metal in his mouth like a dentist so he can feel M-braced
Your Mom's pussy walls bruised cause numerous crews paid dues
For you to upgrade from hand me down jeans to Mo' Better Blues
Claiming he's a Bad Boy, but real talk 'I Wish' he'd be honest
I'll kill him on RB & he'll get all 'Emotional'...........Carl Thomas
Let's be fair-retail sales at Gap is how MoFo hustles for loot
So watching Shrek 2's the 1st time he's seen a 'Puss in Boots'
How u claim 2 be B.I.G. when the name's known 4 giving hoes small o's
Ur girl loves that I'm Notorious......but I Punisher til seeds get swall o'd
I'm 'Comin' out Hard'-er than that Tennessee duo in the year '93
Put u in a hole like 8Ball & he'll fadeaway when I shoot like MJ, G
if asked in court ya alias, use your right to remain silent
instead of ur dick in the booty name, pick sumn that proclaim violence.
ok rhyme scheme, no punch
the judge senteneced u to death, if he sent you on this journey
not saying ur not a accomplished lawyer,your just not winning a.torney
kinda played bar, but decent flip
you get smacked quicker than hot oil, on a nice round booty thats ashy
r u served at mcdonalds? order a number 69! get ya self a taste of filthy Mcnasty
meh
you my son me+mamamcnasty= the math of he
FM is just 50% of MoFo,he's really half of me.
not feeling this
Daddy gotta cleanhouse, 1st stop, mama mcnastys bedroom, mofo lova milf
we roleplay, she dressed up as maid... me chris columbous, took 9 months for us to discover filth
good concept, stretched though
yo writtens is garbage, who's trash of the year? hornet vowels? yes it BEE U
wondering how you keep getting L's, when ya stinkying rhymes is leaving everyone saying P-U
no
sound of ya name; ya think u a night time country group, on this station we dont play dem bands
nobody votin for FM,early morning airconditioning? idk. but mofo got them AM fans.
good concept, wording could be better
win loose or draw ima smoke me sum good as weed
but i do appreciate good thorouly broken down votes ways i can improve
match my 14
no
vs.
Oatmeal said he could beat me if I didn't step foot in the place
But I'm battling MF, so it's in his best interest to not show face
ok, needs reworded
If victory's sweet, this lame nigga'll never experience the taste
Place the metal in his mouth like a dentist so he can feel M-braced
good wordplay, but no punch
Your Mom's pussy walls bruised cause numerous crews paid dues
For you to upgrade from hand me down jeans to Mo' Better Blues
not feeling it
Claiming he's a Bad Boy, but real talk 'I Wish' he'd be honest
I'll kill him on RB & he'll get all 'Emotional'...........Carl Thomas
nice
Let's be fair-retail sales at Gap is how MoFo hustles for loot
So watching Shrek 2's the 1st time he's seen a 'Puss in Boots'
no
How u claim 2 be B.I.G. when the name's known 4 giving hoes small o's
Ur girl loves that I'm Notorious......but I Punisher til seeds get swall o'd
lol, this whole bar made me laugh, best bar so far
I'm 'Comin' out Hard'-er than that Tennessee duo in the year '93
Put u in a hole like 8Ball & he'll fadeaway when I shoot like MJ, G
weak closer
MoFo, you really need to work on your structure, set ups, punches, and
do away with those "highlight" sentances inbetween your bars, really
messes up any flow that you had. I give this to Filthy for better overal
verse.
vote- filthy
DayumNation
if asked in court ya alias, use your right to remain silent
instead of ur dick in the booty name, pick sumn that proclaim violence
No punch. Get more direction on your bars.
the judge senteneced u to death, if he sent you on this journey
not saying ur not a accomplished lawyer,your just not winning a.torney
This is in fact played. But, I think if you would have worded this better it would have been a dope flip. decent attempt.
you get smacked quicker than hot oil, on a nice round booty thats ashy
r u served at mcdonalds? order a number 69! get ya self a taste of filthy Mcnasty
Weak, forced.
you my son me+mamamcnasty= the math of he
FM is just 50% of MoFo,he's really half of me.
Weak.
Daddy gotta cleanhouse, 1st stop, mama mcnastys bedroom, mofo lova milf
we roleplay, she dressed up as maid... me chris columbous, took 9 months for us to discover filth
Wasn't feeling this.
yo writtens is garbage, who's trash of the year? hornet vowels? yes it BEE U
wondering how you keep getting L's, when ya stinkying rhymes is leaving everyone saying P-U
Weak. not creativity.
sound of ya name; ya think u a night time country group, on this station we dont play dem bands
nobody votin for FM,early morning airconditioning? idk. but mofo got them AM fans.
Fresh concept, wording was just bad here. too much filler.
win loose or draw ima smoke me sum good as weed
but i do appreciate good thorouly broken down votes ways i can improve
match my 14
Weak closer.
Vs.
Oatmeal said he could beat me if I didn't step foot in the place
But I'm battling MF, so it's in his best interest to not show face
Weak. I saw the personal set-up. But, the punch was very basic, no real sting here.
If victory's sweet, this lame nigga'll never experience the taste
Place the metal in his mouth like a dentist so he can feel M-braced
Nothing here. cool name play, just no real punch.
Your Mom's pussy walls bruised cause numerous crews paid dues
For you to upgrade from hand me down jeans to Mo' Better Blues
Wasn't feeling this.
Claiming he's a Bad Boy, but real talk 'I Wish' he'd be honest
I'll kill him on RB & he'll get all 'Emotional'...........Carl Thomas
Nice tie in. Set-up & finisher solid.
Let's be fair-retail sales at Gap is how MoFo hustles for loot
So watching Shrek 2's the 1st time he's seen a 'Puss in Boots'
Weak, could've been worded better.
How u claim 2 be B.I.G. when the name's known 4 giving hoes small o's
Ur girl loves that I'm Notorious......but I Punisher til seeds get swall o'd
Nice set-up. Nice execution.
I'm 'Comin' out Hard'-er than that Tennessee duo in the year '93
Put u in a hole like 8Ball & he'll fadeaway when I shoot like MJ, G
Weak closer.
V. FM
This battle wasn't all that great alot of misses from both. But, Mofo you have fresh concepts, and they can be very lethal if executed properly. But, your wording just takes away from the impact your punches and just leaves it as a dead concept. Filth I saw the same in your verse a few wording issues. But, for the most part you had a decent verse. So, I give this one to you.
the judge senteneced u to death, if he sent you on this journey
not saying ur not a accomplished lawyer,your just not winning a.torney
vs
Claiming he's a Bad Boy, but real talk 'I Wish' he'd be honest
I'll kill him on RB & he'll get all 'Emotional'...........Carl Thomas
How u claim 2 be B.I.G. when the name's known 4 giving hoes small o's
Ur girl loves that I'm Notorious......but I Punisher til seeds get swall o'd
overral this was pretty one sided battle mofo your structure was all over the place man fix that an work on wording/ better concepts and youll be good filthy was alot better/more polished between the two.. decent lines i quoted from yuo flithy more bars like that then you'll be a problem.
vote filthy ez
The Greatest
nothing
vs
Claiming he's a Bad Boy, but real talk 'I Wish' he'd be honest
I'll kill him on RB & he'll get all 'Emotional'...........Carl Thomas
How u claim 2 be B.I.G. when the name's known 4 giving hoes small o's
Ur girl loves that I'm Notorious......but I Punisher til seeds get swall o'd
this battle was decent, mofo had lot of forced and bad wording rhymes...none of his rhymes stood out for me...he had one line that could of landed if he worded it properly
filthy came harder...that carl thomas line took this battle
overall i think filthy could of came harder but won regardless
vote= filthy
the judge senteneced u to death, if he sent you on this journey
not saying ur not a accomplished lawyer,your just not winning a.torney
^very nice
vs
Claiming he's a Bad Boy, but real talk 'I Wish' he'd be honest
I'll kill him on RB & he'll get all 'Emotional'...........Carl Thomas
Let's be fair-retail sales at Gap is how MoFo hustles for loot
So watching Shrek 2's the 1st time he's seen a 'Puss in Boots'
How u claim 2 be B.I.G. when the name's known 4 giving hoes small o's
Ur girl loves that I'm Notorious......but I Punisher til seeds get swall o'd
aight battle overall. both had some ok punches and then some sorry ones too. Mofo got some good concepts but his wording is a huge issue. seems to me that he uses too many of them to set up the punch which is a distraction. FM started off wack and i thought he was goin down (meet me at the club) but he picked it up with some aight punches. Mofo had the LOTB wit the lawyer punch, but FM had more punches overall.
v. FM
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