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    bell toll (verse - snippet)

    this is a snippet of a verse i recorded, not too long ago.

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    ..sorry it's not a finished product. just looking for some feedback!

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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    Whats up.

    Pretty good presence on this. Beats not bad. The sample of the chick is growing on me as Im playing it but at first I wasnt feeling it.I mean aside from that ish sounds pretty good to me man. Lyrics were cool, just seems like some real life shit. real words. I mean I guess the only thing to do now is finish it.
     

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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    thanks p.

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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    beat starts off arite....i dig it tho...delivery seems pretty tough...lyrics seem personal like real life no bs..i dig that...overall, good track homie

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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    accidental post "DELETE"

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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    peepin. this baet is dope, reminds me of stoupe from JMT. llyrics are deep. you got some real nice lines goin on in this. flow is on point for the most part. structured really well. not really bouncin around, straight to the point, I dig it. kinda short, but its not done, i cant wait to hear this shit when its done. keep em comin man.

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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    thanks guys

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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    to the top!

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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    not feeling the double ups, but that's just my personal preference how they get used. substance is good and your flow is pretty standard for the type of beat you using. which is sick btw.

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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    hitting u back homie....dope beat....feeling the lyrics but def think u could really show the pain....didn't sound convincing in your delivery....really get into the track man live the lyrics....flow wasn't bad but def bring that energy up

    not a bad drop re record it with more emotion and this should be dope
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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    beat is iight. lyrics had content and ya flow was hot. Nice verse fams
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    Re: bell toll (verse - snippet)

    thanks man

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