Lightweight - J doe vs Sandman (OPEN 4 VOTES)

[Uncle Sam]

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[JDoe]

check 18.

[.Relentless.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...947/index.html
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...744/index.html

[JDoe]

its not 18 needed to beat you...iam saying i want 18...u dont drop first & stop bitchin', bitch.

[.Relentless.]

lmao im ready to drop 18 right now hoe.

[JDoe]

then stfu & drop you emo ass faggot

[JDoe]

Nothing
vs

I’d hate to be in yo OM spot, the shyt you drop just bound to flop
Esco said you started strong n lost steam which is impossible if u never been hot
Get some help, whoever say they like ya drops is just fakin
Cuz when you get Sand in your eyes, its an uncomfortable irritation

This battle was weak..sand hardly had anything worth quoting, all the punches were weak and weren't hitting at all. KnowP had a couple of decent hits but apart from that it was nothing special. No hate to either.

v/KP

anything, im not going to be picky, as long as its relevent to my name

fuck this cat sideways, hes a bitch
tho quick sand will quick stand...he'll sitcom after I kaBlam it

a fittin' reason I hate to keep hearin' ya curse
"im not going to be picky", seein you never have a choice in your verse
"relevance to your name"s' a reject to dreams
say your picked to champ the leagues' a typo, chump is what they mean

you think your Refreshed? In this league you'll amount to nothing
P might be compared to Vets, but he's never the topic of discussion
Even tho these Lightweight Match ups suck, i'ma state my better half
if Knowp is such a Heavyweight, y's he stuck in the featherweight class
not consistent with his flow, his Metaphor's aint steady enough?
Knowp is the only one on this forum with full support,
.................................................. ...............and still cant even measure up
We aint on the same level, i'm hella dope, your just stocked with words
You couldn't see me with a telescope bitch, so put down the binoculars
You may of been elevated before, talent best of the sort....of course
lay all that to rest like a corpse, your style is blown out of proportion
you know i give props to all Vets and Text Crew Leaders
the reason you didn't get none, is because you don't qualify as neither

you bringin' nuffin every week, thats death
see me bringin' sand to a beach...its to hide whats left
sand' dreams, it seems he fiends & schemes of teen trouncing laws
tho sands a mastermind...to schemes for male teens & bouncing balls
I swear hes uglier then sin, who the FUCK LET HIM IN?!
when sand is in the mix, hes tryna swallow black dicks again

Nothing.
Your punches are worded like they are more clever than they are. not being a dick, its a good thing. your wording will be fine, but you need to be more creative with the concepts.

vs

I’d hate to be in yo OM spot, the shyt you drop just bound to flop
Esco said you started strong n lost steam which is impossible if u never been hot

Kinda blah battle. i see people making a case that Know shoul dbe heavyweight, but it looks like he just half asses this whole verse, which isn't any way to move up.

vote Know

king said "nothing" & put "nothing" to his predictions
voting you was a mistake, and your birth was a severe drug addiction
wont someone please inform this bitch
you come with real sucky bars..best for nerds & impudent dicks
I know text a dick, it blows sand around town n' shit
text for sands a bitch, thats bound man' down like a dominatrix

[.Relentless.]

No rest for this looser, Going 18 like you unleash'd a killer
Ill take your best punch and use it, HA, the day i need a filler
I'll Lyrically murder this bad impression, Parked concept Bugatti
No question marks, only a John Doe, by whats left of the body
with range wider than a fucking open infestation,
Ill Kill j Doe and his name, and say they were both false accusations
Sending you to hell, J Doe is not a Beast, But is going to see satin
Eviction notice overdue bitch, time to change your fucking location
Ill say it "Premimum flows Hab never Been seen from J doe
got your ass beat, 3 times in a row, by Arch, Orc, And Halo
JD gets more L's, like you smoking blunts for the hell of it
you couldn't get away the W, if i gave you the whole fucking alphabet
So trash ya toxic, lacking a win in weeks,it must be boring as a ghost
with lyrics so weak, your opponents mies well be report-- No-Shows
King and Oats Predicted it, Skills Must be Blowing Smoke Fo'sho
JDoe, the best part of ya whole fucking verse, "Was My Quote'ables"
You spit Flows so Basic, you know J Doe Is anthing but creative
Hip hop police repod your Punches,JD cam out with fillers and statements

[JDoe]

upppin' this

[A.T.]

a fittin' reason I hate to keep hearin' ya curse
"im not going to be picky", seein you never have a choice in your verse
"relevance to your name"s' a reject to dreams
say your picked to champ the leagues' a typo, chump is what they mean
king said "nothing" & put "nothing" to his predictions
voting you was a mistake, and your birth was a severe drug addiction

vs.

No rest for this looser, Going 18 like you unleash'd a killer
Ill take your best punch and use it, HA, the day i need a filler
ending you to hell, J Doe is not a Beast, But is going to see satin
Eviction notice overdue bitch, time to change your fucking location
Sending you to hell, J Doe is not a Beast, But is going to see satin
Eviction notice overdue bitch, time to change your fucking location

close battle here, both had 3 decent bars. J-doe for the most part
had more original concepts, while Sand had a few played ones. This

is the reason that I give it to J-doe

I am in J's crew, so yall discuss it and see if my vote stands.

vote- J-doe

[.Relentless.]

No crew votes plz

[JDoe]

No crew votes plz

from now i guess it is but you gotta call this early homie.
but k

[Slayerr]

i need 2 get my links from somewhere and if you dont want someone to vote it has to be said in the check in...DQ this vote if mods see fit but like i said their aint no where else for me to get links.

a fittin' reason I hate to keep hearin' ya curse
"im not going to be picky", seein you never have a choice in your verse
vs
No rest for this looser, Going 18 like you unleash'd a killer
Ill take your best punch and use it, HA, the day i need a filler
this could've been nice with better wording

wow close battle, J doe you need to sort you set ups out and make your concepts hit harder.
sandman you need better concepts i see a few played lines and some i didnt like and more rhyme.
this is a very close battle but i think sand gets this on structure and better set up punches...no hate
v/sand

[Alyse Miller]

Half the light weights are twc so.. if this dont count ill just leave feed i need links sorry sand




a fittin' reason I hate to keep hearin' ya curse
"im not going to be picky", seein you never have a choice in your verse
you bringin' nuffin every week, thats death
see me bringin' sand to a beach...its to hide whats left
sand' dreams, it seems he fiends & schemes of teen trouncing laws
tho sands a mastermind...to schemes for male teens & bouncing balls


vs


No rest for this looser, Going 18 like you unleash'd a killer
Ill take your best punch and use it, HA, the day i need a filler
with range wider than a fucking open infestation,
Ill Kill j Doe and his name, and say they were both false accusations
JD gets more L's, like you smoking blunts for the hell of it
you couldn't get away the W, if i gave you the whole fucking alphabet
King and Oats Predicted it, Skills Must be Blowing Smoke Fo'sho
JDoe, the best part of ya whole fucking verse, "Was My Quote'ables"



overral this was a decent battle jdoe im noticing your getting more stingers and starting to structure your punches alot better you just got to keep consitent and more creative. sand i was diggin the was my quotables line it was actually my favorite line you had the more poilished verse better set ups to your punches whch was also worded better no hate

but i felt sand got this by more polished verse overral

Vote:sand

[the specialist]

Not A Bad Battle...

Doe...Not A Bad Verse...You Quoted Alotta Uncessary Shit...Didn't Need To...You Could've Just Got At Em...Ya Opening Shaky...And Thought The 4 Bars After That Was Ok At Best...You Picked It Up In The Middle Section And Maintained...Thought Ya Ending Sequence Was Off Though...

Sand...Thought The False Accusation Line Was Ok...The Opening Seem Forced...Out Side Of That...Though It Was Just A Regular Verse...Nothing Really Strong...You Got The Quotable Off...He Did Quote Alotta Things...

V/Sand...Doe Seem'd To Have The Middle Section...But That Was It...

I Have Spoken...